Talk:Phengaris rebeli

Phengaris rebeli is currently a Biology and medicine good article nominee. Nominated by Jychoe90 (talk) at 04:01, 22 October 2013 (UTC)

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Editing Wiki Page

Hi, I'll be editing this Wiki page for the next week on/off pretty heavily--if there's something egregious you see, please let me know! But also, please don't delete anything as such, as I am still adding!. Thank you! NK2015 (talk) 12:45, 28 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I just added four new subsections and ten citations to support the information under those subsections underneath the larger section of brood parasitism to expand that behavior. I focused on the discovery of this behavior, the use of acoustics and how the butterfly use it to manipulate role social rank in the host hierarchy, how the P. rebeli integrates into the host and why it chooses to parasitize the M. schencki, and its polymorphic larval growth. NK2015 (talk) 2:18, 28 September 2013 (UTC)

Just corrected a couple of grammar mistakes that I think made the article flow a bit more easily. Also, I realized that one of my sentences did not have the citation to support it (I had gotten it from a citation that I had cited earlier on in the article, but I had forgotten to attribute that particular sentence to the article as well) so I corrected that. NK2015 (talk) 1:15, 1 October 2013 (UTC)

I fixed a couple of disambiguation links (about 3-4) by linking them properly or by unlinking them altogether. NK2015 (talk) 10:27, 2 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Editing Round 2

Keeping the reviews in mind, which asked me to add more about its adult stage and threats facing this species, I added three more sections and contributed to two of the previous subsections (Discovery of Brood Parasitism and Polymorphic Growth). The three subsections I added focus on the P. rebeli's interactions with its host plant Gentiana cruciata (which it also parasitizes and depends on) and how it is parasitized by the wasp Ichneumon eumerus. I also added a section on the classification conflicts about whether or not it is a separate species from the P. alcon and briefly described the contrasting behavior between these two butterflies. Its relationship with the Gentiana cruciata is present both before it is taken in by the Myrmica ants and as an adult, so I was able to expand a little bit upon its adult stage. Also, I tried to incorporate threats facing it by discussing the parasitic Ichnuemon eumerus and including a couple of sentences of how researchers believe that conservation efforts need to be focused on its food plant as that will have a direct effect on the P. rebeli as well.

Also, I will be editing this article a lot more, particularly in the course of the next week, as I am aware that there are grammatical issues/redundancies that I need to fix (so please don't delete any entire sections because I will get back to fixing them stylistically). I just wanted to get the content up in case there were serious problems with it and someone could point out any changes I needed to make! Thanks for bearing with me! NK2015 (talk) 16:30, 19 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Just added a new section on appearance, taxonomy, and the habitat of the P. rebeli. Also, I am trying to get this article up to Good Article status, so if anyone has any advice, please let me know! I'm going to try to look for conservation efforts next (I'm unable to find anything to do with why it is named the rebeli). NK2015 (talk) 19:33, 19 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I just finished adding a section on conservation/why it is endangered. I don't think I will be adding anymore information (I'm also having a tough time finding information now) but if there is something I am really lacking, please let me know! NK2015 (talk) 22:30, 19 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review

This is a very well written, informative, and interesting section on brood parasitism. I did not change anything in the article. In future additions, it would be nice to talk about other types of behavior as well as the threats facing this species, and why it is endangered.Abuatois (talk) 00:34, 10 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review 2

This article is very well-written. I only added one or two commas that seemed to be missing. Looking ahead, I think it would be a good idea to add more information about the phengaris rebeli during its adult stages. Overall, it is very good! Thatgirlnamedsofa (talk) 07:09, 10 October 2013 (UTC)thatgirlnamedsofa[reply]

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Maculinea rebeli Hirsh. already found in the West Ukraine by Sergey G. Popov Source: http://cc.msnscache.com/cache.aspx?q=72794699140493&mkt=uk-UA&lang=uk-UA&w=56a23754&FORM=CVRE —Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.124.76.47 (talk) 11:55, 5 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Phengaris rebeli/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Prlaud (talk · contribs) 12:15, 23 October 2013 (UTC) Well described taxonomy section. In the Habitat section, a reference link regarding the concentration of P. rebeli in the listed countries/parts of Europe is missing. Please include that if possible. Full name or a link to more information about the researcher Hirschke would be good. Prlaud (talk) 12:15, 23 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Multiple listings of the same reference are not needed. Use the same reference number for all statements that are supported a single reference, and each place where that reference link is present will be demarcated by different alphabets in the reference listing at the article end. See the reference section of the article on Lepidoptera for example. The alphabets mark places where the same reference number is used in the body of the article. Prlaud (talk) 17:19, 23 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I went back and fixed the references. NK2015 (talk) 20:45, 23 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I went back and found a journal article link that cited the information on the very broad habitat range the P. rebeli has (Alps and Southern Europe). As I did not initially write that particular part of the Wikipedia article, I am not sure where the person who did got that information as I could not find it on the internet, so I took out the countries' names since the information cold be mistaken. Furthermore, after some more research, I realized I was mistaken about Hirschke (the P. rebeli was found before that). I could not find who initially discovered the P. rebeli, but I was able to locate where it was found, when it was changed to its own species, and the name of the person who did change it to its own species as I have cited and included in the article.

NK2015 (talk) 12:45, 23 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Phengaris is an older name compared to Maculinea (see ref 9 in the list of references, discussion section)nimswrit (talk) 07:35, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Yes,this is correct, but Phengaris should still be used over Maculinea. See this article (2nd paragraph) on Phengaris for the information/references for this. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maculinea NK2015 (talk) 4:45, 31 October 2013 (UTC)