Talk:Banggai cardinalfish

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Conservation status?

Hey, uhhh....

 conservation status? Please check http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/6990095.stm

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Assessed mid-importance for WikiProject Fishes due to conservation status. Neil916 (Talk) 04:06, 22 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Edits on 10.24.13

I'm editing this as a part of class assignment. As of October 24th, 2013, I have added Behavior section.

This article was the subject of an educational assignment in Fall 2013. Further details were available on the "Education Program:Washington University in St. Louis/Behavioral Ecology (Fall 2013)" page, which is now unavailable on the wiki.

Jyn0309 (talk) 17:14, 25 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

There was an extra space between the mating and courtship that I removed.

General:

I would try to create more links to other articles when possible.
Some sentences seem to run-on

Mating:

Grammar:
- "pairing tends to occur among individuals of similar size" instead of "individuals among similar size"
- add a comma before "so the male"

Courtship:

Grammar:
- add "a" before vigorous trembling motion
- add a comma after "then"
- add "which is" before when the male
- add an apostrophe "s" after males

VAleles (talk) 17:55, 31 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]