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Minor edits

I made a few minor edits to enhance readability. I think this page needs a bit of work, especially given that it's about the "best selling beer in the world." Jpgamboa (talk) 00:16, 21 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Removing an entire paragraph without explanation is not a "minor edit to enhance readability". Kindly refrain from engaging in underhanded practices. Owen× 00:45, 21 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I don't think I would refer to what I did as "underhanded" by any means. Yes, I did remove a paragraph on a very short article, but I probably misstated the changes as "minor." I'm trying to contribute to the community, not subvert it. Any suggestions would be appreciated. However, I do think that the last paragraph is a bit confusing. It states that there are several "brands" of Snow, but no mention of their styles. The Reuters article cited in on the page mentions the "range," but I'm having trouble finding any other styles other than just "Snow" Jpgamboa (talk) 05:05, 21 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]