Talk:Sri Aurobindo/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 19:44, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

Lead

• "Maharshi" - It is not an English word, so its translation should be present in brackets.
• "King's College, Cambridge"- in which country?
• "He was imprisoned by British India"? I think "British government" or even "British" would be perfect.

RRD13 (talk) 13:37, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

-"Done"- Removed the word maharshi as no original sources were found refering to him as maharshi, added king's college details , updated details of british India Shrikanthv (talk) 07:09, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

Early life

• Who were his siblings? As far as I know he had a brother named Barin Ghosh.

-"Done" : updated Shrikanthv (talk) 07:08, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

• Rangapur should be linked.

-"Done" : updated Shrikanthv (talk) 07:08, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

RRD13 (talk) 13:42, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

• The sentence is hapazard. The name of her sister should be there along that of his brothers joined by and.

RRD13 (talk) 12:34, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

England

• Who took them to England?
• The names of the subjects should start in capital letters and should be appropriately linked.
• Please mention where St Paul's School is located.
• ". He also acquired some familiarity with German and Italian"- I cannot understand what it says.

RRD13 (talk) 12:52, 19 March 2014 (UTC)