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Reviewer: Tezero (talk · contribs) 00:15, 4 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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I can do this one. A few initial comments:

  • Why "Marilyn A. Gillen" and not last, first?
  • Why is the Japanese name italicized, and why does it come before the American one that's the name of the article?
  • Remove comma in "February, 1998".
  • Why is it called a "toy" in the first sentence but a "video game console" everywhere else (including the navbox and categories)? I'd think "educational video game console" or something would be fine and unambiguous.
  • The Sonic Gameworld image needs a caption that better demonstrates its use - what's the game like and why's it significant (even if only in being a typical example of a Pico game - and, if so, how?). The FUR could use a little expansion, too, though this isn't necessary for GA.

Tezero (talk) 00:15, 4 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll start looking at this in the next couple of days. Particularly aggressive stretch of work is currently delaying me a bit. Red Phoenix let's talk... 02:14, 5 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Alright. Whenever you have time. Actually, I have some Graph Theory homework that really needs attention, so catch ya later. Tezero (talk) 02:36, 5 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]