User talk:Pjplummer/sandbox

I think you should try to avoid including your opinion and not use adjectives to describe Dorothy such as 'beautiful.' Also I took out that you mentioned she was a gemini in the edits because this didn't seem like necessary information especially since you list her birthdate right after. I also added some headings to section things off a bit, such as her name up at the top and references. Feel free to include more information about her personal life and then some more work that she completed and then add separate headings for each of those as well. There is definitely more research that can be done but overall it is a good start and provides you something to work with! ----valerie