User talk:William A. Kelley

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Hello William A. Kelley and welcome to Wikipedia! I am Ukexpat and I would like to thank you for your contributions.

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ukexpat (talk) 17:59, 15 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, William A. Kelley. You have new messages at WP:Help desk.
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ukexpat (talk) 18:01, 15 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The beginning of thermodynamics, Sadi carnot's book "Reflections on the motive power of heat" (December 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by FireflySixtySeven was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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FireflySixtySeven (talk) 01:59, 26 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! William A. Kelley, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! FireflySixtySeven (talk) 01:59, 26 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Counter-flow Heat Exchanger (January 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by StarryGrandma was:

The article Heat exchanger has a list of types. It will be more useful to add this material there. Use a textbook as a reference rather than online lecture materials. They tend to go away. Leave out sentences like " It may be referenced in most first year college physics books." Put "Thanks to www.desmos.com for educational graph creation used to create the attached graphs." into the description pages for the graphs. It will be helpful information there.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Counter-flow Heat Exchanger and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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StarryGrandma (talk) 22:53, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]