User talk:Fisheriesmgmt

CardCash improvement

Hi Fisheriesmgmt, Thanks a lot for your intervention. I appreciate your taking a look at this page. Could you give some specific details about the words, expressions, statements that makes the article appear promotional? Thanks in advance. Nomurashoken (talk) 21:33, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

@Nomurashoken: Hi! I think this article is looking great already, I just had a few concerns about certain phrases that were used, which contributed to an overall tone that sounded uncomfortably like an advertisement. I've already made a few changes to the lead section, which you can see in the edit history. Basically, saying something like "CardCash has been mentioned in several notable magazines" or "[f]rom its humble origins" is essentially superfluous but also gives the article a tone that is more like an advertisement and less like an impartial article. I'd be happy to further review the article and make some changes that could improve this! Fisheriesmgmt (talk) 22:04, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

About Anwari (actress)

I know that Anwari (actress) seems to have a little info. But think once, World's most ancient two film industries are Bollywood and Hollywood. They are making films for a century. Unlike Hollywood, Bollywood is quite less advanced. Here actor's acting records are not kept accurately. That's why many important even legendary personality's biography you won't get in the net. You go to the link I provided, you'll see that she has starred in 139 films, which isn't a trifling feat. Very less actresses can star in so much films. Her imdb profile proves that she existed, acted in 3-4 notable films also. But I didn't find her actual birthdate or deathdate or detailed informations of her career. If you want I can add her filmography. Mayank Kapadia (talk) 17:35, 23 February 2015 (UTC)User