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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Danwri (talk | contribs) at 07:23, 21 July 2006. The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

bakkudaijo > bakkudaiju, Mahaparanirvana > Mahaparinirvana

Tiny corrections; from bakkudaij"o" to bakkudaij"u", and Mahapar"a"nirvana sutra to Mahapar"i"nirvana sutra. These are more accurate than the previous description. I forgot to leave these explanation when I posted on the discussion page on the other day.


Suggestions for improvement; intention to modify article

The article about Shinnyo-en can be modified and improved because:

  • It is not verifiable
  • It is not neutral
  • It reveals too much detail about Shinnyo-en to the general public.
    • Shinnyo-en is supposed to be esoteric.
    • Go to your nearby Shinnyo-en temple and ask the jimi-koku (office-people): some Shinnyo-en publications are designed for the general public (example: the pamphlet "What is Shinnyo-en") and some publications should be given only to people who are connected (example: the Kangi-Seki).
    • It is my understanding that, according to Shinnyo-en policy, the pamphlet "What is Shinnyo-en" is the limit of detail appropriate for the general public.

I intend to modify this article according to Wiki policy and Shinnyo-en policy.

--Danwri 20:58, 20 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]


Article modified

Article modified per intention explained above. Will be doing ongoing work on this article to bring in additional material from "What is Shinnyo-En", and from other verifiable, neutral, and approved publications.

--Danwri 00:45, 21 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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