User talk:Efreng1965

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Kavanaugh (February 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Josve05a was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:John Kavanaugh and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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(t) Josve05a (c) 16:43, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Efreng1965, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! (t) Josve05a (c) 16:43, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Kavanaugh (February 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sam Sailor was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:John Kavanaugh and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also get real-time chat help from experienced editors.

-- Sam ^Sing! 20:07, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Kavanaugh (March 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms, that are designed to promote or show-off the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:John Kavanaugh and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also get real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Onel5969 (talk) 01:42, 5 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, Efreng1965. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by Flat Out let's discuss it 02:13, 12 March 2015 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template.[reply]

Draft:John Kavanaugh

Hi Efreng1965 I have made soem edits to youur draft article to help get you started. Here are some tips that will help you write articles:

the correct format of articles is described at Manual of Style.
you should summarise the key points from independent sources; then use those sources to reference each comment you make about the subject of the article. Don't just copy and paste what other sources say.
please read WP:RS to make sure you understand what constitutes a reliable source, and also WP:VERIFY.
please ask me for any help you need.

I added a songwriting credit source and i believe that the article is now ready for you to resubmit. Flat Out let's discuss it 02:29, 12 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]