Talk:Sea Tigers

Political impartiality

Has the political impartiality of this article been tested by someone impartial on this issue? Added by: 210.50.143.20 11:05 6 February

This article is like any other article on Wikipedia, and its up to anyone with knowledge about the issue to expand it and/or to correct any information that is not correct. Ulflarsen 13:17, 6 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It would be interesting to know what you might think is partial in the article. King Canute 15:31, 4 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Changes by user Improv

I find the edits done by Improv confusing and even misleading, one even changed the sentence so it makes no sense. As far as I can see "offense" is something like a joke, it's not equal to "offensive". Mullaitivu is a rather small city, more like a village, and mentioning that makes sense to place Sea Tigers in context. There is common agreement within the Sri Lanka Monitoring Mission that Sea Tigers sank the chinese trawler etc. So I would ask you to argue your edits before you execute them. Ulflarsen 23:07, 23 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It's meant to be the tactical use of offense, e.g. some people are assigned to offense on a sports team and some to defense. WRT the common agreement, do we have sources reporting that common agreement? Are they reliable? I'm not super attached to my edits though, so if you want to undo part or all of it, I'm not going to complain. I do feel they make the article better though.. I'm taking the rest of the quote I cut in half out, because I don't think it aids the article and I worry that it makes the article feel slanted. Again, if you don't like it, no problem. --Improv 13:55, 24 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Improv, while I appreciate your attempt to improve on the article, I am not certain that some of your edits are working that well. Perhaps if you could explain your reasoning for some of them it would help. It seems we are losing more of the descriptive aspects of the article and since it isn't overly long to begin with we gain nothing by doing so. Just a quick example might be the quote attributed to the LTTE leader; I think is an important insight into the LTTE rational for having a naval component, since they are one of the few if not the only rebel movements to have a substantial and successful naval force.--Realstarslayer 21:28, 24 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I am concerned that the longish quote, combined with other parts of the article, were in affect trying to give a sympathetic tone to the article rather than a purely descriptive one. I recognise that this is a delicate line to tread though. I felt the early parts of my edit were primarily to fix grammar/style points, the mention of the sinking of the Chinese ship didn't seem to be verifiable (common agreement is not reliable fact in all cases), and the comments about the "mood" of the Sea Tigers seemed ... really bizarre to include (and speculative). That's why I made the edits as I did. --Improv 00:38, 25 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Hi again, yes I can agree with you on some of your points, like that about the mood of the ST, it did seem a little out of place. However I believe items like the sinking of the Chinese trawler did have a citation with it. Well I will go over it again and make note here of items that I have concerns with and we can discuss and go forward from there. Regards--Realstarslayer 02:11, 25 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Recent Changes to the Article

I am just starting a new section so we can go over the recent changes without it being buried under so many indents. Please read and comment appropriately.

The first one I have concern with is the intro to the sea tigers background, now the last sentence seems out of place, if you are uncomfortable with a direct quote maybe something like this will work:

The leader of the LTTE, Velupillai Prabhakaran having grown up in the coastal village Valvettithurai with its rich smuggling traditions instinctively understood the tactical necessity of a naval force.

I have added this change then to the first part discussed above.--Realstarslayer 21:46, 25 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Next under the Analysts' views of Sea Tigers section, though I understand and agree that perhaps the description of the motivation of the ST vs the SLN might be a bit off I think it is still an important factor: that the ST are more motivated than their SLN counterparts and thus it being one of the reasons for their success. So perhaps something as follows:

One factor in the Sea Tigers' success could be a result of the apparent motivation and spirit among cadres. Furthermore the Sea Tigers do not rely on communications with their command on shore during ongoing operations. The SLN's on the other hand are required to act in accordance with commanders onshore. Sea Tiger's intelligence has also played a key role in their operations, allowing for detailed and bold operations to be carried out in almost silent mode (highest EMCON).

The basis of ST offensive operations can be described as "hit and run" avoiding any attempt of sea control, but keeping the SLN on their toes with their extensive sea denial tactics in the northern waters of Sri Lanka. Some analysts say ST has adopted the military theory of 'Versatile Maritime Force'. Sea Tigers operations should also be seen as clear examples of asymmetric warfare.

--Realstarslayer 02:39, 25 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The first part looks fine. The second part seems really hard to quantify and source, and I'd suggest leaving it out. Third part looks fine, fourth part as well. --Improv 13:01, 25 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Improv, how about the following then for the second section:

The fact that the Sea Tigers do not rely on communications with their command on shore during ongoing operations is one factor in their success. The Sri Lankan Navy on the other hand is required to act in accordance with commanders onshore. Sea Tiger's intelligence has also played a key role in their operations, allowing for detailed and bold operations to be carried out in almost silent mode (highest EMCON).

The basis of Sea Tiger offensive operations can be described as "hit and run"; avoiding any attempt of sea control, but keeping the SLN on their toes with their extensive sea denial tactics in the northern waters of Sri Lanka. Some analysts say the Sea Tigers have adopted the military theory of 'Versatile Maritime Force'. Sea Tiger operations could also be seen as a clear example of asymmetric warfare.

--Realstarslayer 21:42, 25 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]