Talk:Bombus sylvestris

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This article was the subject of an educational assignment in Fall 2015. Further details are available on the course page.

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): AddyShak (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Callisons.

Section/Subsection Reorganization + Reference/Citation Fixes

Hello, I am an undergraduate student at Washington University in St. Louis editing this page for a class assignment. I restructured your page to organize it in a way with which things flow together better. Specifically, I created all the current subsections under larger sections (especially under 'Behavior'). I think this is easier to follow than having each specific behavior have its own main section. I also eliminated your 'Overview' section and combined that with your introductory hook, as I saw that having them separate was redundant. I also took the liberty of fixing your reference/citation problems, so everything is correctly cited to the linked reference in the end section. Hope this helps! Marcus.kwon (talk) 18:31, 30 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia Peer Review

Hi, I am an undergraduate student at Washington University in St. Louis peer reviewing this page for the same class assignment as the student above. First of all, I added a course banner to the talk page. This article was thorough and well-written in the "Behavior" section. I removed "Britain Distribution," as I did not think it was necessary, and put all the information concerning the species distribution under "Distribution." In addition, I would expand the section "Habitat" with information concerning the specific types of niches B. sylvestris might occupy in the environments they are in. I also edited for grammatical errors, particularly under "Colony Cycle". Finally, it would be good to mention in the talk section the information that has been added to this article if large chunks of information are added. Eliseoh (talk) 20:57, 1 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]