User talk:Flat Out
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14:52:33, 8 July 2015 review of submission by Ron Jay
08:11:28, 8 October 2015 review of submission by NutsAboutTravel
I have removed some text I think could be the reason why this draft article was declined on the grounds of sounding like an advertisement. Could you please feedback on any additional lines you find to violate your guidelines. Thanks a lot.
03:34:52, 21 October 2015 review of submission by Komalkimkevin
Chris Whitey Sims
what up with all the edits on Chris Whitey Sims page? the imdb link to "bring it on", the Heavy Blues link are all totally valid AFAIK also modified Leaving Trains page to include vocals and guitar to Chris Sims entry — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:306:BD1D:4370:2D1E:CDF0:C57E:B9D8 (talk) 06:30, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
- anyone can edit imdb and its not a reliable source as far as wikipedia is concerned. Flat Out (talk) 05:46, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
Request on 17:22:06, 21 October 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by PinkBlueGreenPowder
Hi Flat Out, I'm not sure I understand the issue. LaMona requested more independent sources to establish notability. Those were added and now it's flagged for reading like an advertisement. Can you please be more specific about what you consider not being from a neutral point of view? PinkBlueGreenPowder (talk) 17:22, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
- PinkBlueGreenPowder - thanks for the question. My issue is the tone of the article. It reads like a press release with sources added after the fact. rather than a summary of key points raised by reliable sources. If you are unhappy with my review please feel free to request another opinin from LaMona who I'm sure would be happy to assist. Flat Out (talk) 05:56, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
mydiveo page
Hello, I submit the mydiveo page for review and it was declined and I wanted to know what I should do or how I should edit it in order for it to be accepted. I also wanted to know if there was a way to fix the title of "mydiveo" to make all letters lowercase. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.103.145.168 (talk) 20:25, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
- 71.103.145.168 you need sources to support the article that aren't connected the mydiveo, and you need to summarise what they say. The way the article reads now is like someone from the company wrote an advertised and then added a couple of references to it. Flat Out (talk) 05:58, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
A cup of tea for you!
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With this ever dramatic world and winter coming, here's a cup of tea to alleviate your day!  This e-tea's remains have been e-composted SwisterTwister talk 05:50, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
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- Thanks SwisterTwister that really hit the e-spot :) Summer about to hit down here in Melbourne Australia. Hope you're well. Flat Out (talk) 06:00, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
01:11:54, 23 October 2015 review of submission by Pakarmy4923
- Pakarmy4923 (talk · contribs)
The article which I created refers to the band which is emerging as a mainstream sensation now a days. Their music videos are now playing on different music channels not only in Pakistan but in India also. They have scored the OST for a well-known drama serial Ru Baru which was being played under the banner of Hum TV which is one of the biggest entertainment channels in Pakistan. they have also featured with Pakistan's top model Mathira. Their souncloud's plays are reaching at their peaks. They are going to be signed with Pakistan's biggest record label EMI. Are these things not notable as stated by you??? Please re-review the whole article and help me out to improve its contents. Thanks
- Pakarmy4923 to be notable there have to be things written about the band in newspapers, books, reviews. When that happens you can write an article about them. Flat Out (talk) 09:41, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
A favor on my article
I read your message on the draft. The thing is I am new on wikipedia. I made that article by looking at other articles. So my request to you is that iff you can do anything so as to improve the article then I would be really thankfull. Draft: Umer Jubapu. This is the only guy who is a singer, dancer and a stunt rider all at once from his place. He is famous in Dubai, Saudi Arabic and places in the middle east. People love him and wanna know about him. Thank you.
- to be notable there have to be things written about him in newspapers, books, reviews. When that happens you can write an article about him. Flat Out (talk) 09:42, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
The Mighty Bulldogs DVD Series
Hi, I was wondering why this page was declined? You have just written that it can be improved, but what exactly don't you like about it? Before it lacked references, but that has been updated. Unfortunately there wasn't a tone of media coverage for this series, so it is difficult to find any more articles (It is a real series ect, if that is what you are worried about?). And other pages that have gone through successfully were similar to this, so I don't understand why it hasn't gone through. If you could please let me know, then I can hopefully fix it so it can be successful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MovieJunkie52 (talk • contribs) 06:37, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
- There is virtually nothing written about the DVD in reliable sources. You have added a lot of references but few relate to the subject of the article. Flat Out (talk) 02:30, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
Request on 09:27:54, 24 October 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Fannydin
Hi you recently declined to accept my article for Gridding saying there eneded to be independent evidence of it. I had included in my revised submissin a link to the Sunday Independant Newspaper including refernece to The group and what they do, including an interview with one of the founders. I also included a link to another newspaper that reported on the annual meeting of memebers of the group, including and interview and photographs. I am not entirely sure what else you require, could you offer soem guidance please. The group currently has 253 members from across the globe. Danny Fannydin (talk) 09:27, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
- I'm sorry Fannydin but I don't see a depth of coverage that would pass the criteria at WP:GNG. Flat Out (talk) 02:34, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
Jeff Nicholson page
Hello- Thank you for your recent (and original) feedback, it made things clearer for me. I figured out how to put the web links right in the footnote section rather than duplicated in the external links section. That looks much cleaner, thanks. I think that and your original request for more references is covered (virtually every statement has a reference now). The other editor who declined it said it needed more verifiable news sources and less interviews. I would like to point out that most of the history referred to here is pre-internet, so it only seems logical that my seven news print references outnumbers my few web news references. With 20 references for five paragraphs, I think this is really solid article when I compare it to other similar wiki articles. Do you agree and can you release it now? Thank you for your time. VanceJordan (talk) 23:43, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
- VanceJordan im going to leave this to another reviewer. Good luck Flat Out (talk) 02:38, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
Regarding my page creation
Hello, Hope you're well, I see you've edited the page I'm creating for an Egyptian-Canadian Film Director and Producer. Can you give me some feedback? Do you think it adequately represents the subject's notability, and has a high chance of being accepted? Here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Youssef_El_Deeb. I would appreciate if you can get back to me on this. Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hebaseham (talk • contribs) 09:09, 25 October 2015 (UTC)
- Hebaseham thanks for your question. I've had a quick look and I'd say that the subject probably meets WP:GNG but it needs tidying up. Perhaps you could ask the last reviewer to take another look when you're ready. Flat Out (talk) 02:42, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
That's great news! thanks so much for your help :)
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