Talk:Suncheon Bay National Garden
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Eunicejl319 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Seobinyoon, Xchen0417.
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@Eunicejl319: Good start! This needs more work but I think this is pretty close to being able to move over!
- More references, especially English language ones, might be useful for this article.
- You have a couple long quotes here. I would keep the references but paraphrase the content in a neutral tone. This is more normal for encyclopedia articles.
I think once you've done this, you should go ahead and make your article live! —mako๛ 23:14, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
@Eunicejl319: Your article looks great! I just want to add one more section which is Flower Zone to give more information about Suncheon Bay National Garden. Seobinyoon (talk) 05:40, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
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@Eunicejl319 Your article was interesting! Maybe, you should rephrase some sentences, make them short and simple? Otherwise, I think its a good article :) Xchen0417 (talk) 09:58, 31 October 2015 (UTC)
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@Eunicejl319: Overall, your article is interesting and informative. I think it would be better if you upload photo for people who doesn't know how it looks like. Minjiwoo (talk) 21:58, 31 October 2015 (UTC)