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Craig Kieswetter

Nominator(s): Harrias ^talk 09:27, 2 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Craig Kieswetter was one of those England cricketers who bounced in and out of the team. He had a good run in one-day cricket early in his career, and was man of the match in the final when England won the World Twenty20, the first one-day trophy won by the team. He later lost his England place to one of his Somerset team-mates. At domestic level, he was one of Somerset's star players until he was struck in the eye by the ball, ending his career prematurely.

This article underwent a GA review by Sturmvogel 66, who helped to reduce the amount of jargon used, or at least reminded me to explain it or wikilink it. Relentlessly very kindly copy-edited the article, both improving the quality of the prose, and identifying a number of areas where the referencing fell short. Crisco 1492 took a quick look at the images. Harrias ^talk 09:27, 2 November 2015 (UTC) Comments from Dweller[reply]

Significant omission: description of his batting style and keeping abilities, and his role (opener, etc)
Cricket helmet says "grill". This article uses "grille". Which?
What's he doing now?
What's his vision like now?
If he was 18 when he went to Millfield, was he 2 years older than all the other kids?
No explanation that I could see about how he managed to qualify for England
Family? Interests?

More to come, perhaps --Dweller (talk) 15:39, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]