Talk:Teresa Cheng

Hi. I peer reviewed your article. I thought the introduction paragraph was good. I noticed you just have a big chunk of text under the title biography, so I think you should split it up into "Personal Life" and "Career" section. That way, you can add more information under personal life like dates and family life. I made some minor edits with commas on the page. I hope I could be of help!

PSankaran (talk) 00:46, 16 November 2015 (UTC)PSankaran[reply]

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Hyperlinks

I think there are certain words that may be unbeknownst to the reader, by adding hyperlinks to these words could greatly improve the readers understanding of Teresa Cheng's work.

Below are some examples of undefined words and their respective wiki links: "Lucasfilm"- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lucasfilm "DreamWorks U.S."- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DreamWorks "Rhythm and Hues" - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhythm_and_Hues_Studios

Sarahq786 (talk) 01:06, 16 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Subsections

The article is hard to navigate as the majority of the writing is under one broad subsection titled "Biography". The article could be made more accessible to the reader by breaking up the content into subsections. For example if you took the information underneath "Biography" and broke it up by the headings "Early Life", "Education", "Film Career", and "Awards/Nominations" I think the reader would be able to transverse the information more efficiently. 130.49.36.189 (talk) 00:53, 16 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Personal Life

I think information regarding Teresa Cheng's personal life would create a more rounded view of the filmmaker for wikipedia users. Looking for information regarding Cheng's parents, any romantic relationships, children, or hobbies would work to flesh out the article. 130.49.36.189 (talk) 01:04, 16 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Minor change

This is more of a preference but in the sentence "She has worked with some major agencies such as..." the "some" could be taken out. It makes the sentence a bit too wordy. --Ineagoe (talk) 01:04, 16 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]