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Title
This may not be the best name - please feel free to rename it as you see fit! Tell me to get back to work! 06:47, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Comment this comment was for a very early version (2006 UK plane terror plot), and does not reflect current discussion over naming.
- Why not rename it "2006 transatlantic plane terror plot"? — Rickyrab | Talk 08:47, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'm not happy with "plane" to be honest... do we have any precedents we could use? Budgiekiller 08:48, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
This has Al Qaeda written all over it. Need I mention the bombs/simultanious mid-air detonations in the Bojinka plot? If this comes out, how's about "2006 Al Qaeda Transatlantic Terror Plot"?--DasGooch 08:56, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The name of the group is almost never used in article titles. --Golbez 09:05, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- "2006 Transatlantic terror plot"? Budgiekiller 09:08, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, I'm a newb. Pardon. Though, I am liking "2006 Transatlantic terror plot." --DasGooch 09:10, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Or should I say "2006 transatlantic terror plot"? Budgiekiller 09:24, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- But the word "terror" used in this way is so nasty! What ever happened to terrorism or terrorist plots? MyNameIsClare talk 09:25, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- True enough. "2006 transatlantic terrorist plot"? Budgiekiller 09:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- That sounds good for me. Tell me to get back to work! 09:32, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Perhaps we should wait until there is more information, like confirmation of the outbound and destination airports, or airlines, or groups involved. Anything we do now will just have to be changed later, and I'm not sure that this suggestion is any more descriptive or correct. |→ Spaully°τ 09:36, 10 August 2006 (GMT)
- That sounds good for me. Tell me to get back to work! 09:32, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Sure. I'm not going to lose any sleep over it. Budgiekiller 09:38, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I say "2006 transatlantic flight explosion plot". Will (Take me down to the Paradise City) 10:25, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Wow, seems like someone doesn't like to discuss changes. Page has now been renamed, and badly in my opinion. Budgiekiller 10:37, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- "2006 Transatlantic terror plot"? Budgiekiller 09:08, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Can we please reach some sort of consensus before changing the title again? --Zimbabweed 10:40, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- And when we do, can we spell it properly please?! Budgiekiller 10:40, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Isn't "transatlantic" an unnecessary bit of info? It's not as though we have to distiniguish it from any other aircraft bomb plots. -- Run! 12:29, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
This name is absolutely awful. '2006 UK Aircraft Terror Plot' would be much more appropriate. 'Transatlantic' is simply inaccurate, it is too early to say which flights were targetted for sure. flight cancellations from european airlines show that it may not be just US airlines that were targetted. 84.71.0.89 13:02, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Stop fighting over the name. Transatlantic is accurate because they were planning to blow up the planes on the way to the United States. They possibly might have been planning to blow up the planes over america. So the name is accurate. Don't say 2006 Transatlantic Flight Explosion Plot either. That makes it sound like the incident did happen when it didn't. Keep it at the current title.
Mrld 16:38, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
And why is none of it in capitals? --84.71.118.198 18:58, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Why "aircraft" instead of aeroplane/airplane? Were hot balloons and hand gliders involved? --72.135.34.141 19:09, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Hey, why aren't there capitals? Deltacom1515 22:20, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The title needs to be capitalized. --RicKAbbo 02:48, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- No, it doesn't. Wikipedia article names aren't capitalised. Vashti 06:35, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
The title should definetely have terror or terrorist in the title, at least until it has a more widely accepted name. Beyond descriptive purposes, I could hardly find this page this morning --Jtolman 15:42, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- It looked odd to have "transatlantic" lowercase right after 2006, but I suppose it's right.
Heathrow Terror Plot?
I saw one cable news channel (Fox, maybe?) refer to this as the Heathrow Terror Plot. It has the virtue of being succinct. (Like Clare, I prefer "Terrorism" to just "terror".) --Hyphen5 01:17, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Name
not "airplane" please. Rich Farmbrough 10:40 10 August 2006 (GMT).
- Budgiekiller changed it. plane is more sepcific than craft though.. no helicopters involved. --Irishpunktom\talk 10:43, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
just wanted to ask if tansatlantic, without R in it is good, when it was moved to it :) --195.56.248.2 10:42, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- That was my fault! --Irishpunktom\talk 10:44, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Folks, this is an allegation. The title should reflect as much. --Irishpunktom\talk 10:44, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- No, the title should reflect the common perception. The article can challenge that.
Rich Farmbrough 10:48 10 August 2006 (GMT).
- no, the name should be as neutral as the article! --Irishpunktom\talk 10:52, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The name should be such that people in the future could easily find the article.ComradeWolf 07:23, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- no, the name should be as neutral as the article! --Irishpunktom\talk 10:52, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
People, please stop renaming this article continously. We'll figure out the best name later. You are creating a vast amount of double redirects here. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 10:48, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Please please stop changing the title every two minutes, I can hardly follow which redirect is redirecting me to the redirect... Budgiekiller 10:49, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
"plane" is fine with or without the apostrophe... Rich Farmbrough 10:51 10 August 2006 (GMT).
- The POV title tag is fine for now, at least give it some rest for the coming hours. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 10:53, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The POV-title tag is horrible considering that this is on the Main Page. It's not a POV title, just one that is not consensually agreed yet. violet/riga (t) 10:56, 10 August 2006 (UTC))
- POV tag removed is also fine with me, as long as people stop moving the article around. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 10:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The title has a pov, as such, the {{POV-title}} is fine. --Irishpunktom\talk 11:31, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- POV tag removed is also fine with me, as long as people stop moving the article around. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 10:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The POV-title tag is horrible considering that this is on the Main Page. It's not a POV title, just one that is not consensually agreed yet. violet/riga (t) 10:56, 10 August 2006 (UTC))
- The POV title tag is fine for now, at least give it some rest for the coming hours. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 10:53, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Only one editor seems to want to have the POV-title tag on (at least, only one seems to be adding it). Several seem to want it off. To me, that's as near to consensus as we can get on a fast-moving story like this. I've taken it off again. --OpenToppedBus - Talk to the driver 11:39, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Just to register my total agreement with Irishpunktom. These are all allegations. Until a jury rules the contrary, there was no plot, only an alleged plot. Even mainstream media understands that. Without mention of the allegation, the title is POV and I favour at least the reintroduction of {{POV-title}}. PizzaMargherita 00:01, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
This name is absolutely awful. '2006 UK Aircraft Terror Plot' would be much more appropriate. 'Transatlantic' is simply inaccurate, it is too early to say which flights were targetted for sure. flight cancellations from european airlines show that it may not be just US airlines that were targetted. 84.71.0.89 13:00, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Every report so far says transatlantic flights were targeted. European flights are cancelled as much because no-one wants to fly into the UK, which is locked down, as for security reasons. Shimgray | talk | 13:03, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Name for this story/event
Everybody, let's think hard for a name for this event. It seems to be in need of this as the current name is so very verbose. Just leave your suggestions in this section...this could be a big deal for Wikipedia/Wikinews as a news source!Thomasmallen 13:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Actually, this is quite short for a name of a terrorist attack; see 7 July 2005 London bombings and 11 July 2006 Mumbai train bombings. -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 13:32, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- 10 August 2006 Aircraft Bombing Plot alphaChimp laudare 13:33, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Disagree. That implies that the event was supposed to occur today and that is not necessarily true. However, I do think we need to mention bombing somewhere. The transatlantic aircraft plot could theoretically refer to anything. -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 13:35, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- "Air" can easily be substituted for "aircraft" I believe. As names for the mode of travel, they are interchangeable i.e. "I'm travelling by air". Thomasmallen 13:39, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- "2006 aircraft attack plot"? Seems simple enough, and it specifies that there was a plot for "attack", unlike the current title. — `CRAZY`(IN)`SANE` 13:40, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Plenty of aircrafts have been attacked in wars throughout the world. Maybe we need to go with something catchier and less uptightly accurate too. 9/11 tells nothing about the nature of the event.
- "2006 transatlantic aircraft attack plot", cause location should be noted in title. Hello32020 13:43, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Not clear enough. Aircraft attack could mean anything. How about we just wait a couple of weeks until this becomes a little more clear and then change the title. alphaChimp laudare 13:45, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- "2006 transatlantic air sabotage plot"? —Mets501 (talk) 13:46, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- How about "2006 UK–US terrorist attack foiling incident"? Or something the like? We should address the places directly affected as well as that the breaking news is that the event was foiled by the UK authorities. — `CRAZY`(IN)`SANE` 13:46, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'm gonna agree with Alphachimp, we don't know enough about this yet to come up with the perfect name...let's just wait awhile and name it when things become clearer. ~ Butros (Talk) 13:49, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'm with Alphachimp too. We don't invent reality, we document it using reliable sources. Weregerbil 13:50, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed, wait a while. — `CRAZY`(IN)`SANE` 13:53, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed, wait a while. imi2 13:57, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- We've already had about four moved pages over renamings for this so far today, so let's wait a long while..! Budgiekiller 14:11, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Probably the most similar event in history was Oplan Bojinka...so I guess I would say follow the precedent and wait for a common name to be applied. 69.17.67.11 14:38, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- We've already had about four moved pages over renamings for this so far today, so let's wait a long while..! Budgiekiller 14:11, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
article title should include "liquid explosives"
Currently, the title is 2006 transatlantic aircraft plot. I think we should include some reference to the liquid explosives. See [1] for all the news stories with this byline. I suggest 2006 liquid explosive aircraft bomb plot. MPS 21:13, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I think we should hold off on the pagemove; much of this liquid stuff seems speculative at best. Perhaps when it is officially announced, we can move it. I don't think there is a rush to move yet. --HappyCamper 21:17, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I agree with HappyCamper, we should hold off until we have a better picture Petee 21:19, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- ok I agree but I wanted to put it out there. MPS 21:24, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's not like there are (likely to be) many 2006 transatlantic aircraft plots. Specifying in the title that liquid explosives were involved feels overly specific. --Kizor 21:38, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Bored now. I suggest "2006 '8/10' transatlantic alleged liquid bomb aircraft plot disaster averted possibility" or something close. Come on folks, content is SO much more important than the title. Budgiekiller 21:41, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Hold on, I forgot since none of it has been verified, it should be "2006 '8/10' tansatlantic alleged liquid bomb aircraft plot disaster averted possibility (Alleged)" (since typos have suddenly become de rigeur in moving these pages......) - sorry all, tired now! I've seen about five renamings in the past 12 hours, none of them add anything to this discussion. Let's wait and see. Budgiekiller 21:47, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Second that, we'll give it a better title (if required) in a few days or so. Let it rest for now. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 21:59, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- May I suggest we not look to CNN for any official titles for this situation. I love CNN, but earlier today, I saw "EXPLOSIVE COCKTAIL" in large capital letters at the top of their home page. Absolutely not. -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 02:02, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Hold on, I forgot since none of it has been verified, it should be "2006 '8/10' tansatlantic alleged liquid bomb aircraft plot disaster averted possibility (Alleged)" (since typos have suddenly become de rigeur in moving these pages......) - sorry all, tired now! I've seen about five renamings in the past 12 hours, none of them add anything to this discussion. Let's wait and see. Budgiekiller 21:47, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I have a list of suggestions for the title (which, presumably, is going to be changed). Personally, I think the words (and numbers) 2006, airline and plot should all be in the title. However, some other suggestions not including some of these are given too.
These suggestions are based on the assumption that the plot was to blow up airliners over the Atlantic.
- 2006 transatlantic airline(s) bomb plot. 'Airline' suggests an important feature of the plot - the attack was on American airliners, AFAIK. This also solves the problem of the word 'aircraft' implying objects other then planes, as one user suggested.
- 2006 transatlantic liquid explosive plot. Another mouthful, but it is to the point (if the use of such devices in the plot are confirmed).
- Transatlantic airline bomb plot. The 2006 may not be necessary.
- Transatlantic liquid explosive plot. Ditto.
- 2006 liquid explosive airline plot. Based on MPS' suggestion; the word 'bomb' is probably unnecessary (as explosive carries the bomb connotation) and 'aircraft' is replaced with 'airline' (reason in first suggestion).
That's all I got for now. Comments appreciated. Thanks. MP (talk) 22:03, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- How about 2006 transatlantic aircraft plot for starters. --Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 22:07, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I'll go along with that for an initial suggestion, but would like to see the word 'airline(s)' in there somewhere (assuming, of course, that certain airlines were targeted). MP (talk) 22:17, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Suggest 2006 London aircraft bomb plot. --Vsion 00:22, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I really like that suggestion, but let's just wait a little before we make any drastic changes (and create a triple redirect). alphaChimp laudare 02:00, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I like this one also. It doesn't make any assumptions (like where the bombers would have blown the planes up).
- One other point - if at some point a move is made to change this to aeroplane, I would point out that the British spelling should probably be used, given where the incident took place. However I'm perfectly happy with aircraft. |→ Spaully°τ 10:13, 11 August 2006 (GMT)
"Plot"?
The word "plot" carries negative connotations. While I am the first to comdemn any attack on our freedoms, it is still not NPOV to put such a label on an article which many people may see as their first Wikipedia article whilst searching for information. I confess that I don't really know what to replace it with, perhaps "2006 attempted translatlantic aircraft attack"? —Daniel (‽) 23:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- You don't think attack carries negative connotations? Regardless, I believe plot was used instead of attack since it looks like this won't be happening. Perhaps plan would be more neutral, but perhaps also more awkward. -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 23:42, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- How about scheme? :) Really, plot seems fine. --Elliskev 00:31, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Honestly, "scheme" seems a little ridiculous (sort of like a detective story or something). I don't really see how we can or should use anything other than "plot". Actually, as mentioned above, I think we should wait a few weeks, and then change the title if need be. alphaChimp laudare 01:59, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah. I used "scheme" to point out that plot is really the best option - that others can sound kind of weird. --Elliskev 15:14, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Transatlantic Bomb Caper? has a nice retro feel to it, old school reporting style Jmackaerospace 22:53, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Article name
I think aeroplane/airplane or commercial airliners is more suited than aircraft, as there is no need to take the broad scope. By all accounts the plot was limited to commercial flights. --72.135.34.141 02:37, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Aeroplane - these are English flights. -MBlume 06:38, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Airline seems simplest given the spelling differences. Tell me to get back to work! 02:42, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
New title
I can't find any discussion regarding the insertion of the word "terrorist" into the title. Should we move it back for now? --HappyCamper 15:40, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Radical suggestion
How about August 10 2006 airline security alert? That, after all, is all that's happened - a security alert. Anything to do with plots, terrorists, bombs, explosives, etc etc, is still just an 'allegation'. Tevildo 10:52, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Poll
I feel it should be best to hold a poll for the title. Add titles you would want to appear. Will (Take me down to the Paradise City) 20:34, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Keep status quo (2006 transatlantic aircraft plot)
Add more below
- 2006 transatlantic liquid bomb plot. MP (talk) 10:50, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
2006 transatlantic terrorist alert. See below. Tevildo 20:16, 13 August 2006 (UTC)- 2006 August airline security alert. See below. Tevildo 22:55, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Style and use of language discussions
Editorial style
It might be worth trimming down the editorializing style, in favor of a long term encyclopedic style. Some information should probably be footnoted, left in original sources, or summarised. I'm thinking of things like ages and locations of suspects, and some of the wording styles especially. Its more detail than an encyclopedia article should probably contain, and more detail than other comparable articles seem to have. Overall a good article and well sourced though. FT2 (Talk | email) 10:27, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Although I generally agree with you, I suggest we do a thorough edit of the article like that in a few days. Probably much information will be re-added quickly now if removed. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 10:39, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- The things that can be condensed at that time in my opinion are
- The list of suspect names (although I added them myself :) )
- The international reactions
- All the cancelled flights / reactions of airlines
- Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 10:42, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I also vote for ditching all the international flags. I mean, the country names are enough, this is an encyclopdia article not something to be doodled over with distracting, unnecessary images! Jenny Wong 11:00, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Style edits summary:
- "Terrorist" in intro is unnecessary and a word best avoided. We don't need to have an opinion on that, see WP:WTA.
- The long list of names and dates of birth is excessive. Grouped together in a more helpful style (by location) -- the dates of birth are in the cited source if needed.
- Minor style tweaks (believes --> believed, etc)
- Group all security responses together (hand baggage restriction details and other country reactions are all about the security response)
- Slight tweak to "other responses" to make that section flow better.
No significant content changes - style and "flow" edits only. FT2 (Talk | email) 11:08, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Weasel words?
The first line is currently 'The 2006 transatlantic aircraft plot is an alleged plan devised by apparently British terrorists that London's Metropolitan Police claims to have foiled.'. I know that we can't prove anythinbg, but that's alleged/apparently/claims in one sentence. -- 193.235.128.1 11:46, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Credit to all the authors for varying their word choice and not using the same word over and over again. --Signed and Sealed, JJJJust (T C) 11:51, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I agree, it's a bit over the top. Could we take out "apparently" as that section is covered by the earlier "allegedly"? --OpenToppedBus - Talk to the driver 11:52, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- It doesn't make sense to claim to foil an apparent/alleged plan. Since you don't want to lead the reader on for too long before letting them know that this isn't all set in stone, I suggest reversing the word order a bit, something like this:
- On August 10, 2006, London's Metropolitan Police claimed to have foiled a transatlantic aircraft plot (rename accordingly here), apparently devised by British terrorists.
- freshofftheufoΓΛĿЌ 13:49, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
--Kaaveh 11:48, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well, let's hope that they got everybody. I'm a little concerned if they raised the threat level this high. alphaChimp laudare 12:13, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I couldent agree more, however i fear that Islamic terrorism is not over yet, espeshally with the current immigration levels. --Jedi18 16:41, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Please keep posts to discussion of the article content/formatting, not a discussion of the issues involved.
Grammar
Should our words be in American English or British English?User:Leroyencyclopediabrown/Sign
- Wikipedia allows both, as long as it is consistant within an article. In generic articles, it is usual to follow the spelling of the original poster. This article, as a British event, should use UK spelling. Bluap 15:23, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks alot. I just got confused because the flights were going to the US.
I recommend British English be used --Ted-m 15:34, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
British english must be used because most of the early contributions were from UK and this event took place in UK. accordint to wikipedia policy british english must be used in this case.--Greg.loutsenko 17:42, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- While I agree that in this case British spelling should be used, I'm going to disagree with your use of the word "must"—that sort of language makes for a hostile editing environment. —Ryan McDaniel 17:53, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I'm glad that we are all in agreement then... --Jedi18 10:34, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Fizzy
What on Earth are "fizzy drink cans?" - Zepheus (ツィフィアス) 17:34, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Metal (usually aluminium) nearly-cylindrical containers which contain around 330 ml of carbonated drink. —Daniel (‽) 17:37, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- We call them "soda cans" in America —Mets501 (talk) 17:38, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Some Americans also choose to call them pop or Coke cans. That being said, I think that the most neutral term would just be "soda cans" alphaChimp laudare 17:41, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- We call them "soda cans" in America —Mets501 (talk) 17:38, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- i dont, if american want to speak american they can do this on american articles, this is stricktly british article and as such fizzy drinks cans should be used, although the most nuetral would be carbonated drink cans.--Greg.loutsenko 17:47, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I linked fizzy drink. It redirects. --Elliskev 17:50, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- OMG. This is NOT strictly a "British" article. Anyone on EITHER side of the pond can throw an edit in here and there to expedite things and make it as current as it can be. As long as we can cite verifiable references for our submissions, use proper grammar and English (unless we're doing this article in Svensk or some other language), then we'll be good to go. 68.127.232.228 17:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Uh, they were US bound flight on US carriers... seems like we're both involved.--DasGooch 22:09, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I could be wrong but I thought the convention was to follow the spellings and customs of the host nation of an event and this was partly to try and balance out the inherent american bias that Wikipedia had (Bias as in users not in a political sense)?
--Charlesknight 18:02, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed. But, can we do without the berating of US editors who probably don't know all the intricacies of British spelling/grammar? --Elliskev 18:09, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well, Bush is co-opting the success of British Intelligence, so it's to be expected that the spelling here will go along with that. ;) Kafziel 18:04, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well, for one thing, Great Britain is no longer the "host nation" of this event. Granted, the initial discovery of the plot occurred in Britain, however the ramifications of the plan are more far-reaching than just being limited to flights originating there. DHS on this side of the pond has had to elevate security levels to their highest as of late, and governors in a few states have sent National Guard elements into the airports to aid in security measures. So I would venture to state that this has become a bi-lateral issue, albeit one that could reach even farther in time. (BTW, yes, I know what "fizzy drink cans" are, being rather well-travelled through my time in the military.) Edit Centric 18:20, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The terrorists were discovered by UK intel, were tracked by UK authorities, captured on UK soil by UK law enforcement, while attempting to hijack UK planes. Other governments raising threat levels in response to the situation doesn't make the situation itself international or bilateral. Kafziel 19:08, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well, for one thing, Great Britain is no longer the "host nation" of this event. Granted, the initial discovery of the plot occurred in Britain, however the ramifications of the plan are more far-reaching than just being limited to flights originating there. DHS on this side of the pond has had to elevate security levels to their highest as of late, and governors in a few states have sent National Guard elements into the airports to aid in security measures. So I would venture to state that this has become a bi-lateral issue, albeit one that could reach even farther in time. (BTW, yes, I know what "fizzy drink cans" are, being rather well-travelled through my time in the military.) Edit Centric 18:20, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, you might be right. The origin is definitely UK. However, the situation has definitely become an international one as governments around the world respond to the threat. I do believe that we've hashed that out here, suffice it to say that this plot has ramifications for ALL governments and peoples involved in the war on terrorism. 68.127.232.228 19:30, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Slight correction to your statement, they weren't all UK planes. United Airlines, American Airlines, and Continental Airlines are U.S. companies/planes. --Holderca1 20:03, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
How about "softdrink cans"? Softdrink seems a recognizable term in international English and takes care of the fact that not every non-alcoholic beverage in such a can is carbonated. (Softdrink may also be 'less regional' in the U.S. than soda, pop, sodapop, and Coke.) The other terms, including "fizzy drink", all seem very regional, or ambiguous ("soda" can mean more than just carbonated drinks; "pop" could mean all kinds of things), or inaccurate (many would take "Coke" for non–Coca-Cola drinks as just plain off). (Triviality: most such cans in the U.S. have 355, rather than 330, mL.) — President Lethe 19:49, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I don't see how this American Vs British spat has a positive influence on the artical, my solution is that the Americans just accept that since they use our language they may as well use our spelling. --Jedi18 10:42, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- To alphaChimp who said "I think that the most neutral term would just be soda cans", how on earth do you figure that?! In case you don't realise what you're saying, that's like me saying: "I think that the most neutral term would just be fizzy drink cans"!!! :-)
- And to President Lethe, when did "soft drink" become one word? It's quite definitely two words, or at most, it has a hyphen in the middle. :-) See here: http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=75511&dict=CALD
- Ojcookies 00:00, 14 August 2006 (UTC)
"Purse, but not handbags" - translation
The above statement will probably cause some confusion, since I think what Americans call a purse is what we Brits call a handbag. What do Americans call the thing which Brits call a purse? — Johan the Ghost seance 17:46, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Wallet? --Elliskev 17:53, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Just so we are clear - in britain - a Purse is a female version of a wallet (or billfold) in which a woman would keep her money and creditcards - she would keep this purse in a handbag.
--Charlesknight 17:54, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Most women I know (I'm in the US) would call that a wallet, same as men. Any smallish thing for putting money or credit cards in can be a wallet; something still smaller, for coins only, would be a change purse. What Brits call a handbag is a purse or pocketbook (although "handbag" is also understood) in the US. Kafziel 18:01, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
So (edit this to correct)...
UK name | US name | what it is |
---|---|---|
wallet | billfold or wallet | men's money/card carrier |
handbag | purse or pocketbook | large ladies' personal bag |
purse | wallet/change purse | ladies' billfold equivalent / small coin carrier |
I agree that the article should be UK English (of course... ;-) but I think it would be worth putting in translations for awkward terms in some consistent manner. — Johan the Ghost seance 18:06, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- A lot of US reports are saying that "pocket-sized purses are permitted", which to me is an accurate description. (To add to the confusion, my small rucksack has been referred to as a "purse" in the US). Bluap 18:07, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- FWIW, this American can understand the text just fine as it is. I don't think it's a big deal. --Elliskev 18:13, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- User:Leroyencyclopediabrown/Comment I never knew a British purse was an American wallet! That statement threw me off, too!----Edtalk c E 18:21, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, I would have thought that when an American woman saw "purses allowed", she would take that as permission to take a handbag on board, with ensuing chaos... hence my concern.— Johan the Ghost seance 18:23, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Maybe someone added the pocket size qualifier before I saw it. I think that does a lot to clarify... --Elliskev 18:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Ah yes, that is clearer! — Johan the Ghost seance 18:35, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Maybe someone added the pocket size qualifier before I saw it. I think that does a lot to clarify... --Elliskev 18:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The following could be useful when editing American and non-American English:
- WLD 20:17, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Prevented vs. Disrupted
The official announcement said that the plan had been disrupted http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/uk/4778575.stm not prevented, as the opening line says. There is a distinct difference. I would change it myself except for two reasons: 1) I'm not logged in and can't remember my password just now 2) It seems like just the kind of change to piss someone off.
Disrupted sounds like it hasent been stoped only interfeared with. Prevented sounds more accuart, whatever the offical line. --Jedi18 16:43, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Thoughts? 216.16.224.26 15:12, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I would say to keep it as disrupted for now only because we don't know for sure if the events in London were only a part of a larger scheme. --Holderca1 17:13, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I say disrupted. That's what most of the news is saying (CNN just said it in the background as well). —Mets501 (talk) 17:19, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
John Reid.
"As a prefix — abbreviated "Dr." — its primary designation is a person who has obtained a doctorate (that is, a doctoral degree), which, with the exception of higher and academic doctorates, is the highest rank of academic degree awardable. Doctoral degrees may be "research doctorates," awarded on the basis of competency in research, or "taught doctorates" (also called "professional doctorates," because they are invariably awarded in professional subjects), awarded on the basis of coursework and adjunct requirements (if any) successfully completed by the conferee." [2]
Dr. is John Reids title, just like we say "President Bush" or "Prime Minister Tony Blair". It is part of John Reids name. Please, leave it in the article. dposse 03:28, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- John Reid does have a PhD. The "Dr" is correct (though without the full stop in English usage). Bluap 04:18, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Exactly. I'm gonna add "Dr. John Reid" back into the article. (looks like somone already did it, heh.) dposse 04:57, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Please note that Wikipedia policy is to omit academic titles, so in this case it would be simply "John Reid". It is not appropriate to refer to him as "Dr. John Reid" here. Vashti 06:58, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well, that's stupid. dposse 15:36, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Wel doubtless he's a privy councillor to so the full title would be "the Right Honorable Dr John Reid MP" at the very least but the idea is that we know he's the home secretary, not his various other accomplishments. Rich Farmbrough 19:38 11 August 2006 (GMT).
- Well, that's stupid. dposse 15:36, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Titles for Prime Minister Blair and President Bush
First of all, I want to congratulate everyone, this is an incredible response from the wikipedia community. I've tried to make sure Prime Minister Blair and President Bush are referred to by title throughout the article, as that's standard practice in both nations, same as referring to members of the armed forces by rank, or referring to individuals with Ph.Ds as Doctor. I'm not sure what the Wikipedia policy is here, so I hope someone will cleanup behind me a bit, but in the meantime I thought this ought to be fixed. -MBlume 05:24, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's standard practice in some American and British news organizations to use "Mr." more often than "Prime Minister" and "President" in front of these men's names. (The New York Times, for example, always puts a title before someone's surname, and usually starts with "President Bush" at the first mention in the article and then continues with "Mr. Bush" in the rest.) But it seems to be Wikipedia practice (as well as the practice of most English-language general encyclopedias) to mention their offices early in the article and then use just their surnames, without titles, in most of the rest of the article. — President Lethe 06:17, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'm not, by any stretch of the imagination, a fan of President Bush, and I don't honestly know that much about Prime Minister Blair, but I do feel that respect for the office is important, and should be encouraged. I guess the trouble here is that this article has very much been written in bits and pieces (very fast bits and pieces!) and so every mention is almost a first mention. Think I ought to change the rest of the article to Mr. Bush and Mr. Blair? -MBlume 06:36, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Again, please note that while your respect for the offices concerned is laudable, Wikipedia policy is to omit academic and professional titles ("President" and "Prime Minister" are professional titles; compare the use of language at Tony Blair and George W. Bush). Vashti 07:02, 11 August 2006(UTC)
- Fair enough -MBlume 07:27, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Additionally, Tony Blair is never referred to as "Prime Minister Blair" in UK press - I've only ever heard him referred to like that in the USA press. (The same is true for UK usage about other politicians - we tend to say "Jacques Chirac", rather than "President Chirac" etc, possibly with the first use mentioning his title.) I would suggest saying "UK Prime Minister Tony Blair" at the first mention, and "Tony Blair" at any later mentions (ie use "UK Prime Minister" as an adjective, rather than a title). Bluap 14:12, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Punctuation - U.S. and UK
I appreciate that the style guide gives this contradictory instruction, but I feel that consistency would give the article a more professional appearance. As U.S. (rather than US) seems to be de rigeur, I would suggest that we change UK to U.K. - for this article, at least. Tevildo 14:13, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Er, actually, "de rigeur" is correctly spelled as de rigueur (excuse my Cajun). BigKahuna 15:45, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- My apologies. :) As we don't appear to have a consensus yet, would there be any major problems with "British" and "American" for adjectival uses, and "UK" and "USA" (no punctuation in either) when the countries are referred to? Tevildo 17:13, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- It should be UK and US or U.K. and U.S. 4.250.168.9 14:09, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- American usage is U.S. and British usage is UK so on an international article it's best to use United States and United Kingdom. Yorkshire Phoenix (talk) 14:17, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, there are far too many usages to spell them out in full each time. I agree that it is best to be consistant, since there are many paragraphs with "UK" and "U.S" in close proximity. As consensus is to use British styling for this article, I would suggest "UK" and "US". In fact, I have twice gone through the article making this correction, but each time some well-meaning person has changed it back. Don't forget that we should not alter the abbreviations in reference titles. Bluap 14:26, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- On this point, Wikipedia is specific (in two locations of the Manual of Style):
- WP:MOS#Acronyms_and_abbreviations: "When abbreviating United States, please use "U.S."; that is the more common style in that country."
- Wikipedia:Manual of Style (abbreviations): The Wikipedia abbreviation for the United States is U.S., while UK is the abbreviation for the United Kingdom.
- — ERcheck (talk) 15:06, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- But the Manual of Style also says "Wikipedia has established a manual of style to make reading easy by following a consistent format, but the prescriptions of Wikipedia's manual of style are not binding. Wikipedia does not require all editors to stick with only one single style or formatting. It is not essential that there be consistency across everywhere in Wikipedia, but consistency should be maintained internally within an article, unless there are good reasons to vary."
- also "Articles that focus on a topic specific to a particular English-speaking country should generally conform to the usage and spelling of that country" and "If an article is predominantly written in one type of English, aim to conform to that type rather than provoking conflict by changing to another."
- I think that it's fair to say the Manual of Style is amiguous on this point, so we should go for whatever looks best for this page. Bluap 15:16, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- On this point, Wikipedia is specific (in two locations of the Manual of Style):
- Unfortunately, there are far too many usages to spell them out in full each time. I agree that it is best to be consistant, since there are many paragraphs with "UK" and "U.S" in close proximity. As consensus is to use British styling for this article, I would suggest "UK" and "US". In fact, I have twice gone through the article making this correction, but each time some well-meaning person has changed it back. Don't forget that we should not alter the abbreviations in reference titles. Bluap 14:26, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- American usage is U.S. and British usage is UK so on an international article it's best to use United States and United Kingdom. Yorkshire Phoenix (talk) 14:17, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Just a minor point of clarification: while it's popular in the U.K. to omit periods from both (US and UK), practice in many American style guides is to use U.S. and UK—the logic being that US could look like an all-capital form of the pronoun us (e.g., "GIVE US SOME WATER"), which is quite a common word, while UK is unlikely to be mistaken as anything other than a variant of U.K. So, consistency can be a matter not just of using periods everywhere or using periods nowhere, but also of using periods only when there's ambiguity. (My own personal style is periods for both.) Anyway, I'm not taking a stance on usage in this article, but am just pointing out something that hasn't been mentioned here. — President Lethe 19:46, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Was or is
The plot is. Not the plot was. Disrupted yes. Past tense, no. All these security measures are to continue disrupting a plot that is still ongoing to some unknown degree. 4.250.168.9 14:09, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- The plot is over. The arrests have been made. This story is now a full twenty four hours old. dposse 00:29, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Citation and reference discussions
Cite for gridlock
here's the Today programme which reported it. Rich Farmbrough 11:13 10 August 2006 (GMT).
- I can't get that link to work. Have you got a text source? WLD 11:31, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Sorry , no I heard it on the radio. If not sourced try the listen again from Radio 4. Rich Farmbrough 19:42 11 August 2006 (GMT).
Anyone have a better net connection than me?... CNN.com
CNN.com is getting too much traffic right now for my computer to handle it, but I'm watching CNN right now and have some additional info (I need someone to be able to cite it):
- 6-10 planes targeted
- Involved individuals were planning to use at least one plane to reach California
- Plotters were UK citizens with Pakistani heritage
If anyone can find this information confirmed on CNN.com, I think it would be valuable to the article (particularly the first bullet). Srose (talk) 14:27, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Last updated 1416 UTC, CNN.com doesn't have any of that information. -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 14:42, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Actually, ALL of that info is listed in the subsequent CNN articles, T.Y. 68.127.232.228 17:47, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, just managed to get on... I wonder why the information isn't available yet. I'll look at other sources; CNN.com does have a way of keeping some of their information on-air only... or just in video form. I did find some information about the economic impact of the threat, though. Srose (talk) 14:48, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- all i cant find is http://www.cnn.com/2006/US/08/10/us.security/index.html which states "One government official said the terrorists had hoped to target flights to major airports in New York, Washington and California, all major summer tourist destinations." it is not clear if "government official" is uk or usa...
- as of yet there is no information about who the arrested are apart from the us homeland secretary saying that this might be linked to al qaeda. british said nothing on this as of yet but since the americans are kept up to date on these matters i have to prosume that this is what the uk official think as well. however there is no publicly available info on the identity of the individuals involved so all we can do is speculate.--Greg.loutsenko 14:47, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Reid press conference
Removing the citation flag on John Reid's statement as it is a quote from a live press conference covered by several major television channels, including BBC News. Tsaetre 11:48, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Okay. Do we have any of the currently used news stories quoting it? Shimgray | talk | 11:53, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I've come across Norwegian press quoting the statement [3], will continue for any English speaking reference. Tsaetre 11:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- yes, especially since i am flying to usa from gatwick on sunday. i hope everything will be back to some kind of normal.--Greg.loutsenko 13:02, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Pakistan connection
Oops, my added sentence about the connection to Pakistan, and UK citizens of Pakistani origin, seems to have a reference that didn't work quite right. The URL of the story is here [[4]]. Could someone help clean that up, or, even better, explain what I did wrong. (I'll admit I just copied and pasted a prior reference link and changed what I thought was different). LeoO3 15:21, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- That link is entirely speculative, and should only be sourced as such. At least one, and the sole one I know of, of those arrested in the raids has no connection to Pakistan. --Irishpunktom\talk 15:24, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Hence the qualifiers in the ABC article and in the text I added. In any event, my question was about the technical issue of proper syntax to make the reference link work properly.LeoO3 15:27, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- OK, I think I've fixed it. LeoO3 15:31, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
External links and references
We have a references section with ~40 links to news articles about this incident. Then we have the external links section, which says "Press Coverage" and then just has a few links. Do we really need those few links in "external links"? —Mets501 (talk) 15:37, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'd recommend they be removed/moved, but some of them may have been generic references for some of the original article content (i.e. references not linked to particular individual sentences). zoney ♣ talk 15:40, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The issue was mostly with the fact that people were constantly reporting, but not constantly checking whether their sources were doubled up (like AP reports) with other users. I'd support, sometime in the near future, culling out the identical reports from various news sources. alphaChimp laudare 02:01, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
References
I know the references system is not very easy to work with, but I would like to ask everybody to really watch out in moving text with references or deleting references. Sometimes a reference is dependent on an earlier one and it gets damaged after moving text. I've been doing some repairs here and there but please watch out. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 22:02, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Citations: Proper Source?
Many of the citations here are links to articles orginally written by the Associated Press (AP). However, the articles are cited as the websites where the articles were found (i.e, Detroit Free Press, Yahoo Finance). These articles are clearly identified as Associated Press reports. Please be sure to give proper credit in citations. Also, is there a reason why the title has no capitalization?70.210.96.216 23:32, 10 August 2006 (UTC)JB
Citation/Neutrality issue for 'Political Reaction' detail
The RNC sent out a fundraising email, and I thought this detail was pertinent to the section (if anyone has a quibble about it because of neutrality or anything, get rid of it). I want to cite it, but the best thing I could find was an image (and ONLY an image, nothing else) of it on the DCCC's website (http://www.dccc.org/stakeholder/archives/rnc_email.html). Is that appropriate? Everything else I could find was liberal blog entries about it. I'm gonna go ahead and cite it using that, but if anyone thinks it's not appropriate, they should get rid of that detail entirely.74.225.65.86 07:04, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Just to let you know, I have removed this as it doesn't seem entirely pertinent to the story - the rest of the section was along the lines of "terror alerts were raised and Bush talked about Islamic fascists" ... I'm not sure that "and some people did some fundraising" is of the same level of import or relevance. Sorry. :) Vashti 07:16, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
According to so-and-so
A number of sentences say "according to ABC news", "BBC reported", "deputy commissioner John Doe has said", etc. Should some of those be removed, at least from widely reported statements? The language would be crisper and easier to read. Some statements are tied to specific sources and need to keep mentioning the source. Weregerbil 15:55, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Citation for mixing components of explosive on flight?
The article currently states:
- To avoid discovery by explosive detection baggage screening devices, the plotters planned to bring several liquid components on to the planes concealed in soft-drink containers, then combine the components in-flight to make the explosive.
I don't see any reference to this being the plan in any of the articles linked from the section on the explosives. The idea that this was the plan seems popular in various blogs, but I haven't seen it reported anywhere reputable. As I've seen pointed out, doing so would be rather tricky, as manufacturing either of the two suggested explosives is a rather long and involved process. Do we have a reference for it, or should we remove it? JulesH 13:45, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Security reaction discussions
Terror level?
It said the level was raised from "'severe' to 'critical'", but there are two severes on Joint Terrorist Analysis Centre. So which one is it? WP 09:20, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The Home Office site only has one "severe" MyNameIsClare talk 09:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The threat levels were changed recently. They used to be a 7 point scale (with two severes), there is now only one severe. That could be where the confusion arose; I'm going to update the Joint Terrorist Analysis Centre page with the information from http://www.mi5.gov.uk/output/Page479.html The One00 14:31, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
From what I gather, UK went to the highest. In the US, specific flights are now bumped up to their own "Red" level. --DasGooch 09:46, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The U.S. is at orange for domestic flights and red for U.K. flights.--66.188.202.116 09:48, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Current UK state of alert at 14:00 10/08/06 is "Critical" http://www.homeoffice.gov.uk/security/current-threat-level/
International Reactions
Can everyone try to find international reactions, I have only been able to find U.S. reactions. Hello32020 11:11, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's still rather early yet... Everyone is trying to marshall their facts before the go PRing. --Signed and Sealed, JJJJust (T C) 11:22, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
gatwick
flights out of gatwick are going ahead, i just phoned US airways and they said flights are as normal.
--Greg.loutsenko 11:29, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yes, the referenced BBC News article was updated - it originally said all flights (as announced on the live BBC News TV stream). zoney ♣ talk 11:36, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
FYI for BAA websites
This is just an FYI advisory message...
The websites for BAA (Formerly British Airports Authority) airports have been... crippled, intentionally, I think. Pages which once existed (and probably still do) are being reported as 404 Not Found errors and most traffic is being redirected to an "Important Message" page outlining the current restrictions and what not. --Signed and Sealed, JJJJust (T C) 11:42, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Can you give the URL Hello32020 11:52, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- http://www.baa.co.uk/ --Signed and Sealed, JJJJust (T C) 11:56, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Good page, just added it to the UK Govt Links section. HawkShark 13:08, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Flights from Paris
These were cancelled, but I don't rmember if it was the Airport on Air France that reported it. ANyone fill the gap? Rich Farmbrough 10:59 10 August 2006 (GMT).
- http://challengestempsreel.nouvelobs.com/business/art_57977.html ("L'état du réseau")
- (quick translation)
- - British Airways: no flights in destination of europe until 2pm GMT.
- - Lufthansa et Air Berlin: flights going to great britain cancelled. until 2pm (Lufthansa).
- - Bruxelles' airport: flights from and to london cancelled or delayed.
- - Air France: flights to london cancelled until 12h GMT. air france will reassess the situation in the afternoon.
- - Portugal : flights to london cancelled, in the following airports: Lisbon, Porto, Faro 's international airports, and for the following airlines: TAP Portugal, British Airways, Air France, Lufthansa and Olympic Airlines.
- - Alitalia (italian): No planes to london in the morning
- - Ryanair (lowcost, italian): all planes to great britain cancelled for today.
- - Iberia: flights cancelled untill 12 gmt.
- - Qantas : Increased security check for all flights from and to great brittain. Passengers will only be able to take the bare minimum with them inside the plane: passport, waller, plane tickets, preferably in a transparant bag.
- - KLM: all planes to London-Heathrow cancelled until further notice.
- - aéroport de Nice: 1.500 passengers waiting.
- - BAA has asked that all planes going to London-Heathrow that had not yet departed be kept on hold.
- FiP Как вы думаете? 11:32, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Hand luggage policy
Maybe this should be in a more general article, but what happens if a passanger is forced to check in e.g. a laptop as hold luggage and it gets stolen or damaged? Who is going to pay for it? --Jcmo 15:47, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
No idea but frankly in the context of the wider story it seems like a trival point. --Charlesknight 15:56, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
It's not that trivial. The point is that people making decisions on security measures are not held accountable for the consequences of those decisions, which encourages exaggerated policies, to the point of ridicule. The plot in question was stopped by good investigative police work, NOT by forbidding people to take magazines and newspapers on board aircraft. --Jcmo 16:17, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- While I do think policy makers sometimes get too excessive or silly when it comes to security measures, I wonder if you're missing the point. Although there has been suggestions these measures may have be permanent, at the moment they are only temporary. Given that this plot was uncovered and widely published, we can assume that in the event anyone even remotely associated with it or the people involved, who was planning to carry out an attack (whether part of this plan or not) would either go underground or try to execute it immedietly. Given that the details have been published, they would probably try to modify their plans a bit to prevent detection. As such, it may make sense to temporarily impose harsh measures to ensure that this does not happen. Also, there are already well established procedures for lost baggage. Did you really think baggage other then laptops doesn't normally get stolen? The Montreal convention provides 1000 SDRs which is admitedly not very much. You would need travel insurance for greater coverage. 01:49, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- If it is possible to hide bomb parts in hand luggage now, it will be always possible. By that line of reasoning, these restrictions should be made permanent (there is already talk of that). Some of these items can also be concealed under clothes and not be detected by a patdown search. Maybe next people will be forced to board airplanes naked. And since there are other methods of hiding things, a body cavity search for every passenger is next. When will they learn and start concentrating on the people, not the tools? El Al, which is a primary target for terrorists, has been doing that for decades. --Jcmo 12:26, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Right but how do you frame what is a policy issue in accordance with Wikipedia standards and the general thrust of the article? if you want to put a section like that in, give us an outline and we can try to come to some concensus? --Charlesknight 16:30, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's not trivial at all. These policies are stupid. Skinnyweed 16:35, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Right - so write a section about it and see if it fits the rest of the article... --Charlesknight 16:36, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Milk MUST (according to BAA rules) be tasted by an accompanying adult) [5] Petee 21:11, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Suggest that there is a clearer distinction between UK/US/Other hand luggage restrictions Petee 21:18, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- For what it is worth, I came to London from Ireland last week on business and have two laptops with me. Tomorrow I'm not flying home on Ryanair, but am taking the train to Holyhead and the ferry to Dublin. No choice. (Fortunately, the Ryanair flight cost me only £14 and the train and ferry ticket is an amazing £25.) Evertype 22:00, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Contact Lenses
If you look at Hand Luggage section, it says Contact Lenses are allowed, but no solution. But in order to store contact lenses, you must soak them in solution!----Edtalk c E 16:34, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- They mean bottles of solution, not the 6 drops that are in the lens case. --ZimZalaBim (talk) 16:40, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- User:Leroyencyclopediabrown/CommentI know, but I'm just saying that DHS should remember that when they're telling us MIXED SIGNALS!!!----Edtalk c E 16:46, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Well even if you had your lenses soaked in nitroglycerin, it wouldn't be enough to damage a plane. --Crucible Guardian 17:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- That sounds terribly bad for your eyes. - Zepheus (ツィフィアス) 17:35, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Nitroglycerin is extremely dangerous in its pure, liquid state. But even if it was 100% safe (at least until detonated), it needs to be remembered that more than one person is supposedly involved in this plot -- aggregation of even small quantities can lead to a significant threat. But, as usual, details like this are usually lost on the so-called "security" apparatus at airports. mdf 18:23, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Contact lens solution/cases were involved in the Bojinka plot, but it seems to be "Gatorade" type drinks and modified drink bottles in this specific instance. Other than that, I've heard Bojinka nearly every five minutes. That was my first thought when I caught the breaking story this morning.--DasGooch 22:07, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
International reaction - Czech Republic
See http://www.radio.cz/en/news#3 - could somebody add this? Thanks. 69.17.67.11 17:39, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Carry on restrictions
Has anyone received or picked up any information whether or not this ban of bringing certain things on planes will be permanent or just at the moment due to the scare? I would assume the latter, but I'm not certain anyway. Kal 22:10, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- According to UK tv news channels, the ban is temporary but may likely be adopted as a permanent measure. That's all I got from the news. MP (talk) 22:14, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- TSA's website info conflicts with footnote 36 on the article regarding electronic items and laptops. See http://tsa-7.custhelp.com/cgi-bin/tsa.cfg/php/enduser/std_adp.php?p_faqid=254 Bswee 22:57, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- According to the BBC news this morning, the carry-on restrictions apply only to flights leaving the UK. There are a smaller set of carry-on restrictions imposed by the TSA as Bswee mentions above --Astronaut 13:46, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Can we add an image?
I think that an image of the airport conditions and/or confiscated items would be helpful. This looks like a good one, but I don't know if it would qualify as fair use. --CrazyLegsKC 23:15, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- What about Image:Stewart-Raging grannies.jpg, or perhaps that's too silly for this topic :) Ajaxfan 23:37, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Also, does anyone know what is up with Image:Heathrow.view.arp.jpg, which is currently in the article, because it's not displaying properly for me in Firefox. Ajaxfan 23:43, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- It is displaying fine for me in Explorer. --Holderca1 23:57, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Not sure if it fits, but SKY news had a little video prepaired showing mixing of chemicals in drink-type bottles. They had three series of explosive mixtures: A mixture who's name escapes me, an organophosphate mix and a TATP suspension mixture. Pretty good graphics, but, again, might be too general for this. --DasGooch 04:15, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- If no good image shows up by tomorrow (i.e. ~ 1600 UTC for me), perhaps I'll take a trip to the airport. However, I fear what they will think of me taking pictures arbitrarily in the airport... I'm not exactly the most innocent-looking person and people in the Washington, D.C. area are especially paranoid. -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 04:20, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
I took several images, but the following two are of best quality (I had another, but I used the flash unknowingly; that picture cropped is the third one):
File:Dulles-board-11aug06.jpg | |
Both pictures were taken at Washington Dulles International Airport on August 11, 2006. I hope one or the other is sufficient (I'm no professional photographer, and I dare not get any closer to the security checkpoint). -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 20:50, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
New York National Guard
I noticed there was a reference to New York National Guard being called up. According to Gov. Pataki's statement today, he has "offered" to step up National Guard presence at New York airports. The latest AP article refers to the fact that the Governor only "considered" activating the National Guard. B.K. 20:51, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Lufthansa & other non UK
Lufthansa cancelled only flights to Heathrow, not to all UK. That is exactly what the source claims, I don't know why edit where reverted. Also, as far as at least German media report, hand luggage restrictions only apply to flights from and through the UK. Although significant confusion seems to exist. The cited source only states that the spanish authorities tightened security (without being more specific). There is no blanket hand-luggage ban on flights to the UK
Security reaction
Just wondering, this page is changing far too fast for me to do much editing with my slow dial up connection, but why do we need a United States section and a United States subsection under Other Countries? --Lo2u (T • C) 19:14, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Technical discussions
Removed mention of "binary explosives"
I have removed the following statement:
- These may have been binary explosives, which would be inert until mixed.
since it appears to be unsourced speculation. -- The Anome 11:54, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- They were certainly talking about that on Five Live this morning, but I agree, it should stay out unless sourced. --OpenToppedBus - Talk to the driver 12:02, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- It seems like a good insight, but it's just not verifiable. alphaChimp laudare 12:12, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- This article will be undergoing alot of changes for the few days, so anything that can be verified should be {{fact}}'d or removed. Yanksox 12:14, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Or just {{citeneeded}}. A lot of the additions seem very reasonable and plausable. I'm sure references will be forthcoming. alphaChimp laudare 12:25, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Chertoff just confirmed it in the US press conference. As soon as we get a reference, we should add it to the article. alphaChimp laudare 12:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Or just {{citeneeded}}. A lot of the additions seem very reasonable and plausable. I'm sure references will be forthcoming. alphaChimp laudare 12:25, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- This article will be undergoing alot of changes for the few days, so anything that can be verified should be {{fact}}'d or removed. Yanksox 12:14, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- It seems like a good insight, but it's just not verifiable. alphaChimp laudare 12:12, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
this article http://news.yahoo.com/s/ap/20060810/ap_on_go_ca_st_pe/us_terror_plot mentions combining explosives, though not neccisarily "binary."
Inert liquids which become explosives when mixed are binary explosives. Dolive21 13:27, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
'Liquid Explosives'
One of the buzzwords around this event seems to be the 'liquid explosives' that were planned for this. Can anyone clarify what this could mean? (Right now the word just links to wikipedia's article on explosives.) -- hack 16:25, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Liquid explosives are just that; an explosive in the form of a liquid. Nitroglycerin and MEKP are examples of these. I suspect that the terrorists planned to synthesize an organic peroxide onboard, due to the presence of hydrogen peroxide and sulphuric acid. In OP syntheses, hydrogen peroxide "peroxidizes" a ketone like acetone or Methyl Ethyl Ketone (MEKP) to form unstable but powerful explosives. The acid is a catalyst. From what I've read it is not clear to me that the ACTUAL explosive product would have been liquid. If they were synthesizing an organic peroxide onboard, acetone peroxide (which is a solid, and was used in the london train bombings) would have been much easier because it only needs to be filtered; you need a seperatory funnel for MEKP as it is an oily liquid. The precursors for both of these OPs are all liquids, however. --Crucible Guardian 17:23, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Don't be silly, it would be simpler to sneak ready made organoperoxides onto the aeroplane. The terrorists were going to make pirhana solution, and then mix it with any organic solvent (probably acetone). Figure that you flush a quart or two of acetone down a vacuum toilet, and then flush a pint or two of pirhana solution. You'll get a nice boom out of that. 129.10.244.59 21:42, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I've just heard that they were going to use "Gelled" explosives in a false bottom attached to a gatorade type drink. The bottle was to be sealed as to allow for them to drink the liquid fromt he main compartment if questioned about the bottles at security check points. They were to be detonated with a jury-rigged disposable camera flash.--DasGooch 21:54, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Untill someone actualy writes something useful on the liquid explosives page, the link might as well look like what it points at... hence changing it to liquid explosives --Jmackaerospace 0110zulu+1 11/8/06
Liquid explosives
Why does the article mention MEKP? The source article linked doesn't. Whilst MEKP is a dangerous chemical it is not the same as TATP.
- For that matter, why does the article mention TATP and HMTD? Both of those were crystaline solids last time I checked --70.70.143.237 06:22, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Exploding Gatorade?
Just a note on the following: "According to a report in CNN, ingredients found in a unnamed British sports drink could have also formed part of the explosive mixture." I think this info was misinterpreted. All the news reports I have seen have suggested the explosives would be concealed within sports drinks/sodas, like a glob of gel in a separate compartment [6]. I haven't seen anything to suggest the actual drink in and of itself would be explosive. --Age234 12:42, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- The way I interpret these reports is that the drinks were to be mixed onboard with other ingredients to create an explosive, not that the drinks are explosive themselves.
Removed text
This section of text needs another set of eyes to look at: [7] - when I read the first reference, it did not even contain the word "acid" in the article. --HappyCamper 20:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Actually, the suggestion that the solution could be triggered by a flash camera might be added back in - [8] - but the reference to sulfuric acid and derivatives should not. I have not found a verifyable reference for this, nor was the original text a good representation of the chemistry. --HappyCamper 20:58, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Related article discussions
Links
I notice that we are putting all sorts of links to actual terrorists incidents - at the moment all we have is a CLAIM of a incident. This could be just another forrest gate or ricin plot type case, however by putting in the links aren't we engaged in a form of crystal-balling ?
--Charlesknight 09:31, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed. We should probably (at the most) link to foiled plots (e.g. shoe bomber), but as you say, eve that is, perhaps, ball-gazing. Budgiekiller 09:32, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The rationale behind the Flight 182 link was that it was a transatlantic bombing. I do agree that we need to maintain a healthy skepticism here though. Tell me to get back to work! 09:37, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Removed the lists... Tell me to get back to work! 09:40, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The rationale behind the Flight 182 link was that it was a transatlantic bombing. I do agree that we need to maintain a healthy skepticism here though. Tell me to get back to work! 09:37, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
The ricin plot was real, several people were convicted of conspiracy to cause a public nuisance, which is a serious offence, carrying a maximun sentnece of life in prison.Dolive21 10:57, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Several people? Then the BBC and wikipedia are wrong. According to Wood Green no-ricin plot & [9] only 1 person (who was not convicted of conspiracy to commit murder because of a hang jury). Everyone else charged was acquited and several other people charged had their cases dropped. Also, from what I can tell no evidence of ricin was found Bourgass may not have been a very nice person, he was convicted of murder previously [10] and a plot may even have been considered but there is no real clear evidence it got very far. Nil Einne 11:13, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Other articles
Some other related articles should be kept up to date as well:
Please add to the list and sign if you have updated a page (with time). --J Morgan(talk) 20:58, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Heathrow has already been updated, checking other articles. 68.127.232.228 18:03, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Updated Airport security article under Notable Incidents with preliminary data. If someone would like to add or elaborate on the initial edit, please do so. TY 68.127.232.228 18:08, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Plot discussions
Number of Planes
Does anyone know the number of planes that were planning to be blown up. All news stations giving different numbers Sky News: 6 CNN: 20 BBC: 5 BBC are now reporting 9 in 3 waves of 3 --Jedi18 16:38, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The BBC and police have both said "up to 10". CNN would inflate things... Budgiekiller 10:33, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I guess they have a dilemma nowdays. If they say 10, then everyone will think it's 5. So what should they do? Nil Einne 11:14, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- MSNBC is also saying 10. alphaChimp laudare 12:02, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I guess they have a dilemma nowdays. If they say 10, then everyone will think it's 5. So what should they do? Nil Einne 11:14, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
--84.71.0.89 13:00, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
presumed plot ?
Why is the plot here presumed? If this plot does not exist, then the entire artlcle is premature. If the plot does exist, then it is not presumed. Are facts from the British government not to be taken as fact? We have seen, even here on Wikipedia, facts from other sources taken as fact before they have been proven. user:mnw2000 12:01, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I think this comes down to the presumption of innocence. Until tried in a court of law, we can't assume that any of those arrested are guilty of plotting anything. The UK Government says a lot of things; we shouldn't assume they are all true. --duncan 12:17, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- The tone of this seems to have shifted entirely to an acceptance that there was a plot. Do I think they were upto something? Sure... however at the moment all of those men are innocent and there is no "confirmation" of a plot until it's presented in court.
--Charlesknight 14:33, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- We cannot assume anything at all. We cannot assume they are guilty, we cannot assume they aren't. Assuming is POV and OR. We report what others report. We report what reliable sources tell us. If reliable sources state that these people were arrested because they plotted this, then we will state that these people were arrested because they plotted this. And yes, most people consider the BBC and CCN (and also the UK government) reliable sources. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 14:49, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Well I think the BBC is a reliable source - and they use "suspected", "alleged" and "suspect" - they don't write their copy as if those men are guilty.
--Charlesknight 14:56, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Here in the U.S., the media and the government use the terms like "suspect", "allegedly", etc. to describe people and not crimes. Describing people as guilty before they are tried would often interfere with their right to a fair trial. But there is no need to refer to a crime or plot the same way, since it is not going to be put on trial. Calling someone an "alleged killer", for example, does not mean the killing itself is unproven or call it into doubt in any way; instead, it means that the person accused of carrying it out has not been convicted. That people are only allegedly guilty does not mean the plot's existence is only alleged. It is thus proper to say there was a plot to bomb these planes, even though it is also proper to call those arrested "suspects" rather than "conspirators", "bombers", or what have you.
- The BBC is constantly referring to it as the "alleged" plot. As long as it isn't proven that there was/is a plot (we currently only have the word of the police and the politicians, and they have in the past announced numerous plots which turned out to be based on false information), we should stick with "alleged' plot. If we don't, we're saying that the plot is a fact, although none of the persons currently arrested have yet been charged for anything, and that would be POV. Thomas Blomberg 21:41, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Evidence of this plot
Why isn't there at least a sentence in the article, specifying that there isn't yet any proof or evidence about the plot that UK officials have discovered ? Remember Colin Powell at UNO about Irak massive destruction weapons... --Effco 15:29, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- What on earth makes you think there's no evidence? The police surely didn't just make this whole thing up and arrest people selected arbitrarily. No evidence has been introduced in court yet, or even shown to the media, but that does not mean it doesn't exist.
- The analogy to Colin Powell at the U.N. hardly supports your position. There was a great deal of evidence that Iraq had WMDs, and Powell presented much of it during his speech. It turned out that the evidence had been misinterpreted and had thus led the U.S. to an incorrect conclusion, but to say there was no evidence at all is simply wrong.
- It may turn out that the authorities are mistaken about this plot or about the involvement of some of the suspects, but whether their beliefs are correct is a different question from whether they have evidence to support those beliefs.
Reported planned date of strike
According to the Daily Mail, the date of the attack was to be August 16. I have changed the intro to reflect that. There may be some confusion due to a Times article that insinuates that August 22 may have been a date specualted based on UN/Iran and Lailat al Miraj. I don't think that there is any solid reference that points to a planned strike on August 22. --Elliskev 00:34, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
- The only problem with this is that the Daily Mail is one of the most unreliable newspapers in the UK, a "red top" mainly devoted to true or made up scandals about celebrities, whereas The Times is, well, The Times - a bastion of prudent reporting, although the change of ownership has made the walls of the bastion somewhat thinner. Thomas Blomberg 21:48, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
- Huh? The Daily Mail might not be the most reliable paper in the world, but it certainly doesn't fit the description you're giving it. I'd say it falls decidedly on the respectable end of British newspapers, although with a political bias you could spot from the other side of the Atlantic. JulesH 15:08, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Investigation and arrest discussions
Time
"It was confirmed by a Metropolitan Police Service deputy commissioner that 21 people were in custody as of 9:49 GMT after arrests in both London and the West Midlands." Are we surte this isn't "BST" ? Rich Farmbrough 10:50 10 August 2006 (GMT).
- I just added a CNN ref for that. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 10:59, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks.
- It's become "this morning" by now, no need for excess precision. Shimgray | talk | 11:13, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
High Wycombe
I've been told that a house was raided in High Wycombe (where I live) - there are three news helicopters going around filming! Trampikey (talk to me)(contribs) 10:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well, a house in Hackney was raided, thats all I know so far. --Irishpunktom\talk 11:56, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Walton Drive evacuation
I don't know if I can or how I can cite a news programme as a source, but it just reported it on BBC News 24, Sky channel 503. Trampikey (talk to me)(contribs) 12:35, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- For those of us not in the UK, could you clarify what Walton Drive is? alphaChimp laudare 12:36, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's a street in Wycombe - it's where the one reported arrest there was. Shimgray | talk | 12:36, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- [11] The "LATEST" bar at the top is reporting this; so there shold be a news article online soon. Trampikey (talk to me)(contribs) 12:38, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Too bad google doesn't have real-time spysats... Weregerbil 12:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
spurious High Wycombe reports
Someone keeps adding in:
- From the information so far released the group appears to have consisted of between 25-35 people, with 21 so far detained, the majority from a town west of London called High Wycombe, there are currently a number of people on the run in woodland area surrounding the houses that were raided and they are being hunted down using helicopters and dogs. The group is suspected to consist almost entierly of British born Muslims of Pakistani origin are suspected to have been planning the terrorist attacks for months, with possible support from Al Qaeda, and may have visited Pakistan for training.
>>>Muslims? I am SHOCKED!
This doesn't seem to be the case - I haven't seen a story saying 25-35, or making any reference to fugitives "on the run" - and it certainly isn't cited "from information so far released". I've removed this five or so times now - it's recently had a BBC news story added on the end which doesn't support the claims. Not sure what's up here - I guess it's someone's personal theory - but people might want to keep an eye on it. Shimgray | talk | 12:41, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- At least one, at least, has not of pakistani origin. --Irishpunktom\talk 13:25, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The BBC never mentions muslims. The terrorists are probably Pakistani methodists. 129.10.244.59 21:43, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Raid photo
It's original photojournalism (from the street corner opposite ... with about five other news photographers). This raid was a couple of hundred metres from my front door! I saw police gathering around 9am when I was just on my way to work ... It's also now the lead photo on the Wikinews article.
Arkady Rose also got photos of the helicopters overhead around noonish, the time of the actual raid, and I'll upload any of those that look suitable as well - David Gerard 19:52, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The helicopter photos are not great, unfortunately - they may be suitable for Wikinews, but wouldn't add anything particularly encyclopedic to this article - David Gerard 08:01, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Names of suspects
The Bank of England has published a list of names of the suspects whose bank account details have been frozen[12]. Is it suitable to publish these here, or would it be libel as I don't believe the police have announced the names officially yet. Petee 09:10, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- The list is also on CNN, so I added it. Both CNN and the Bank of England are reasonably reliable sources, so unless the police makes a statement it is not correct I see no reason why we could not add them.Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 09:35, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Whatever, the Bank of England has published those names, dates of birth, and places, in connection with terrorist financing (their news release is headed "Financial Sanctions: Terrorist Financing", so any potential libel is on the banks' part, not ours) in order that banks and other financial institutions can can track down and freeze accounts held by those people. It's now unlawful for there to be any activity in those people's bank accounts without a special Bank of England licence. -- Arwel (talk) 11:58, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- The list of names was published on the BBC website this morning as well. Budgiekiller 12:01, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Whatever, the Bank of England has published those names, dates of birth, and places, in connection with terrorist financing (their news release is headed "Financial Sanctions: Terrorist Financing", so any potential libel is on the banks' part, not ours) in order that banks and other financial institutions can can track down and freeze accounts held by those people. It's now unlawful for there to be any activity in those people's bank accounts without a special Bank of England licence. -- Arwel (talk) 11:58, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Religion of Suspects
Is it factually correct that all those arrested were Muslims? Are we allowed to say this? The article says:
- Twenty-four people were arrested, 22 of them of Pakistani and one each of Iranian and Bangladeshi descent.[14]
And later on
- Nasir Ahmed, a member of the House of Lords, said that he had been told by the police that 21 of those arrested were British Muslims.[20] Other sources, citing Nicolas Sarkozy, say most of them were Pakistani citizens.[14] (These claims are not necessarily contradictory; it is possible to be both.)
This implies there were three non-Muslims involved? Is this true?
- no it doesn't, it means that they know (or believe) 21 of the 24 are muslims. It doesn't give us any indication of the religion of the other 3; maybe they don't know which religion they are (if any), so they could still be muslims too. Also, the line about country of descent is irrelevant to the question of number of muslims. --duncan 09:30, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
- Does this mean the you believe that there is a resonable chance (like more than 1 in a million) that the other three do not prefess to be Muslims?
Tip Source
Perhaps we should mention that a tip leading to this investigation also came from a Muslim. BhaiSaab talk 19:56, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
O2 Mobile network outage
This was due to a network error, not related to the anti terrorist actions.[13]
Arrests in Italy?
The article mentioned arrests in Italy with a reference [7] to a Foxnews article. However no arrests in Italy are mentioned in that article (Italy is not mentioned at all), nor can I find any other sources that relate to arrests in Italy in connection with this case. Therefore I removed the references to arrests in Italy from the article. AlexP 10:00, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Thanks for "helping", UK
I saw a press conference Thursday in which the US Attorney General thanked the UK for their "helpful contribution" to this operation. Nice of him to thank us for "helping" them take care of this, just like we "helped" during WW's I and II, I guess. I can't wait to see the Hollywood movie in which brave CIA or FBI agents operate in quaint England and crack the evil terrorists' plot, "helped" by the odd plucky British bobby in his funny helmet, complete with old bicycle, silver-buttoned tunic and wooden cosh. I expect the evil Pakistani terrorist leader will be played by Alan Rickman... 86.7.209.101 18:08, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Article quality discussions
Good work!
Hi, just wanted to say, great article in such a short space of time! Stevage 12:48, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed, very impressive! 83.88.169.167 12:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Yep, we are all very good people. Thomasmallen 13:01, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- the problem is that these kind of articles tend to be forgotten fairly quickly so we have lots of stuff in the present or future tense and hypothetical situations still being there even after several weeks have elapsed.--Greg.loutsenko 13:04, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Hate to agree with something so cynical but its true, this will fall by the side as some other celebrity becomes pregnant, divorced, or changes their sex. HawkShark 13:10, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Tomorrow's featured article, maybe...? :-D - THE GREAT GAVINI {T-C} 14:13, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
You're so quick!
Damn. You guys are so quick! I'm watching the news right now, and it's only 9:00 am here. I'll see what I can contribute to here while watching CNN.User:Leroyencyclopediabrown/Sign
Your telling me! Bravo on the speed and quality of this article. I checked wiki after hearing about this at 4am EST. and there was already the beginnings of a page. Not sure exactly when the story broke in the US but it was already in motion here, on the good ole' wiki.--DasGooch 22:00, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Superb work
Fantastic work on this article - the international reaction section is a great addition. When Wiki works well, it shows in articles like this. doktorb wordsdeeds 15:40, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Well done everyone
Never been seriously involved in a real-time major news story development on Wikipedia, but this one has turned out to be remarkable. Well done to everyone involved and especially those who have done the boring stuff like establish proper references and get real citations. Keep up the great great work, it's been a pleasure 'working' with you all. Budgiekiller 20:07, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'd second that sentiment. I've been very impressed to watch the development of this article over the course of the day. alphaChimp laudare 01:56, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Good job!
Great job everyone working on this article! 1000+ edits in under 24 hours! —Mets501 (talk) 02:10, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- thanks. dposse 02:22, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
General note to all: good job
I feel this needs to be said, especially about important matters such as these -- that this is really WikiPedia at its best, with an extensive, informative and well-sourced article that no single newspaper or journalist could compile. I especially admire the listing of names and ages, and the country reaction list. Good job to all who contributed. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 68.175.95.216 (talk • contribs) .
Good Article
I've removed the GA nomination tag - it is indeed a pretty decent article, but it's also a fairly fast-moving current event, and as such it really isn't going to be a stable article for a week or two at least, and that's pretty essential for any kind of article assessment... Shimgray | talk | 16:52, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Airports
The article currently includes these sentences: "All inbound flights to London Heathrow Airport which are not already in the air have been cancelled due to congestion at the airport [12]. Some flights in and out of London Gatwick Airport have been suspended [13], although US Airways flights are flying as normal out of Gatwick according to the airline's helpline." These are the sort of time sensitive statement found in a news report, not an encyclopedia. At what time were inbound flights cancelled?, for how long did this last?, etc. Rmhermen 14:15, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Many, including myself, see Wikipedia not as a regular encyclopedia but as even a major news source. The main page could even be compared to a major news website. Unlike other encyclopedias, this one is updated not only daily but every second. To prohibit such information just because it's "not encyclopedia–like" is unfair—Wikipedia is unique. — `CRAZY`(IN)`SANE` 14:21, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- How can an entity that is supposedly not to publish "original research" be a "major news source"? How can something that is supposedly an "encyclopedia" be expected to publish "non-encyclopedic" material? While you claim there are "many" who think Wikipedia should become a one stop shopping mall of information on the Internet (or whatever), others are probably on firmer ground when they suggest that breaking news stuff like this should be fobbed off to wikinews, at best. mdf 16:15, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I agree, when i woke up today and heard the situation on BBC radio the first website o went to to get the broadest insight was bbc news, followed by wikipedia. wikipedia is in my opinion is at the forefront of information because it can be editted now, not annually like other published encyclopedias. thus i have to say that wikipedia is more then just a source of information, it is quite a reliable source of news too. not only that because the articles are editted by many people from different parts of the world the articles are quite trustworthy, and the funny thing is the more people edit it the more mistakes are picked out. --Greg.loutsenko 14:40, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Me too, I woke up this morning, turned on the TV, heard about this, and came straight to WP. :-) —Mets501 (talk) 14:45, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- That is the purpose of Wikinews. Wikipedia is expected to create "time-less" (time-independent) articles. Rmhermen 14:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I disagree. Why do you think we have a "current event" template? And plus, if we enforced your views, this article would only be about 2 sentences long. People want updated, critical information, and this is where many come for it. In addition, where does it cite that Wikipedia is "expected to create time-less articles"?. — `CRAZY`(IN)`SANE` 15:01, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- People who come to an encyclopedia for information about a current event deserve what they get -- there is even a template about that (or at least there was, cf. Hurricane Katrina). As for "timeless" etc, check WP:MoS. As for being two sentences long: I completely agree. As to why people hold these views, I suggest you watch the current non-WP news and note just how volatile, contradictory and generally confused it really is. Incredible, but true: the sources being cited in articles here frequently change in place at CNN and other outlets, and change enough to invalidate the article. Do these clusterfucks really need to be replicated at Wikipedia? mdf 16:15, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Wow. I can't even figure out which side of this debate that you're on???. 142.176.58.174 16:29, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- People who come to an encyclopedia for information about a current event deserve what they get -- there is even a template about that (or at least there was, cf. Hurricane Katrina). As for "timeless" etc, check WP:MoS. As for being two sentences long: I completely agree. As to why people hold these views, I suggest you watch the current non-WP news and note just how volatile, contradictory and generally confused it really is. Incredible, but true: the sources being cited in articles here frequently change in place at CNN and other outlets, and change enough to invalidate the article. Do these clusterfucks really need to be replicated at Wikipedia? mdf 16:15, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Perhaps a template/cross-wiki redirect could/should be put on such articles at an early stage redirecting interested readers to WikiNews, and at the same time, any data in the article transwikied to WikiNews? I'd suggest waiting before such a policy is implemented until log-ins are valid across all Wikis (which should be soon). Just a thought. WLD 16:49, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Qatar Airways?
According to Sky News there are reports from Al Jazeera of a failed hijacking of a Qatar Airlines plane. Is this relevant? Jvlm.123 15:04, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Where are you hearing that? Any web references? It could very well be related; that's how Al Qaeda works... Srose (talk) 15:08, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'm not seeing anything of that sort. —Mets501 (talk) 15:10, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- [14] Wouldn't call it related just yet, though. Shimgray | talk | 15:12, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Found the SN article: [15] Jvlm.123 15:20, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Oh, I'm absolutely not saying to connect it just yet; I want to watch this person's source to see if it developes into a connection. Sorry about any misconceptions. Srose (talk) 15:23, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Local paper featuring an AP article said this was only a fight between two or so passengers and was misconstrued as a hijacking.--DasGooch 18:36, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
"How world economies reacted"
This section is slightly problematic in that it implicitly suggests that everything that happened on the market is reaction to this event. The sentence on airline stocks is probably relevant, sourceable, and possibly timeless enough to remain in an encyclopedia article even after months and years, but the rest...? Weregerbil 19:18, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agree. Business commentators are notorious for making stuff up. Hack at it with a hacksaw please. Tempshill 19:43, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
I do NOT agree, how else do you explain the oil prices dropping over a dollar in such short time when they have been rising for the past 3 month everyday practically. Put the oil price drop back in. Nothing else happened this morning that would affect it like that. Obviously a result of this being reported. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.250.132.18 (talk • contribs)
- Well actually there's plenty of reasons...profit-taking (from the run-up you just mentioned), nat. gas inventories released today may affected the energy complex, rumours of BP planning to restore oilflows sooner than expected etc. 129.97.58.55 21:11, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
What?
[16] .... ??? (Specifically [17]) Can an admin block this guy or something?? Ajaxfan 23:50, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Ahh, HappyCamper fixed it. Ajaxfan 23:57, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Political reactions
I consider this an important section to include, although it might repeat some of what is already there. The politicians run a separate narrative from that of the police operation. The involvement of people in the highest level of government in what should essentially be a police operation is pretty notable. This event, like many other foiled terrorist plots (some of very dubious veracity) is likely to crop up frequently in their speeches about terrorism in the coming weeks, and perhaps they should be mentioned here.
It's hard to overestimate the level of skepticism and suspicion of political manipulation among even the well informed blogosphere. Unfortunately I don't know of an objective way to gauge it in a NPOV.[18] Goatchurch 01:35, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Theory (conspiracy and otherwise) discussions
Please: Do not use this talk page as a forum for general discussion about the article's subject. --Elliskev 13:31, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
sight
Ill rephrase myself.
There are people that view that this event is staged, see this.
Thank you for expresing how tolerated i am. --Striver 16:27, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- How does this relate editorially to this article? If you can bring a reliable source to the table then do so. (→Netscott) 16:29, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Indeed, it's far from reliable. But thanks for toning down the comment a bit. -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 16:30, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- This is not a discussion forum. If reliable sources report on skepticism as to the authenticity of the event, then such items could be included in the article. Until then, such points-of-view should remain out of an encyclopedia. --ZimZalaBim (talk) 16:39, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
we can worry about conspiracy theories later --Crucible Guardian 17:28, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Whether or not it's a conspiracy, this isn't really the place to advance those theories. It's only a place to discuss the content we add to this article. alphaChimp laudare 17:42, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Oh good, Alex Jones already knows who did it. 2006 Transatlantic Aircraft Plot Truth Movement can't be far behind. Sadly, this is not a joke. Weregerbil 18:56, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- WP:CIVIL may be in order here... Striver did stop posting to this talk page, after all. Srose (talk) 21:03, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
British Lying??
The British said this would have caused more damage and deaths than the September 11th Attacks yet they say 6 to 10 planes were targeted. So lets go with the higher number 10, that would mean an average of 300 people per plan would have to be on all 10 planes...That is a load.--Jerluvsthecubs 20:20, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- "2,976 people died in these attacks." September 11, 2001 attacks. Also I'm not sure where you get the number 300 per plane; if Boeing 747s were used, they carry about 400-500 passengers. So I doubt it's "British Lying", maybe just the media getting slightly carried away with themselves, as they are wont to do --duncan 20:29, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Hahhahaha, totally. Well, we all know about the UK media... I guess they were assuming 10 7474-400s in full-economy-class format. Headlines, mate ;)--Si42 00:22, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Standard load for a Boeing 747, a standard widebody jet, is 416 people. A340, most models, about 300; A340-600, high end for that model, is 380; Virgin Atlantic flies some of those. Boeing 777 is in the 300-400 range. It's not absurdly high. Shimgray | talk | 20:30, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The reports I have seen say "a plot to commit mass murder on an unimaginable scale" (as a quote for a Scotland Yard spokesman). I haven't seen any references to there being more deaths than September 11th. Bluap 21:28, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- well this would be around the same as 9/11. mean average of say 350 people per plane tomes say 9 planes, 3150 passangers and crew. if the planes came down over nyc or philly that would add another few hundred, so yeah it would have been a far worse attack then 9/11.
- i REALLY REALLY hate when the yanks say that terrorism started after 9/11. WTF ever heard of ETA, or IRA, or chechnya, the yank can be so stupid.--Greg.loutsenko 22:03, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- The brits can also be stupid sometimes. That being said, don't divulge into personal attacks. Pacific Coast Highway (blah • I'm a hot toe picker) 22:21, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- Uh, not sure where that came from. See Oklahoma City bombing, World Trade Center bombing of 1993, Khobar Towers bombing, USS Cole bombing, and Unabomber, ect... --Holderca1 23:44, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
- If they blow up the plane as it flies over a large city, it's gonna kill a few more people than just those in the aircraft. 222.153.151.202 06:29, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Home Secretary John Reid: "Had this plot been carried out the loss of life to innocent civilians would have been on an unprecedented scale."[19] A similar quote was made by somebody at Scotland Yard. Vashti 06:51, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- John Reid's comment is pure propaganda. The largest loss of life to 'innocent civilians' in such a way is certainly the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, although done during wartime by a nation state, therefore not considered an act of 'terror'. Without more facts it's difficult to speculate on numbers of deaths, and if they are in fact 'unprecedented' and 'unimaginable'. --duncan 12:13, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- As it happens, I agree with you entirely, but nonetheless that quote is the source of the media claims that this attack would have been bigger than 9/11. Vashti 16:43, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
If you're going to toss in legitimate attacks on a combatant state during wartime, might as well get it right. Firebombing of Tokyo killed more than both atomic attacks.
connection w/Oliver Stone's WTC launch
I suspect this plot to be connected with Oliver Stone's WTC movie release date. Media were focused on Oliver Stone's WTC launch and it could help terrorists to get maximal exposure. Experience has demonstrated Al Qaida was acting on symbolic dates. Maybe this possible theory should be mentioned in the current article. BigKahuna 07:17, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- If you can find reliable sources that document the theory, then it can certainly be included. Vashti 07:19, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- ok then i'll try to find related material. BigKahuna 15:40, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Why is the hoax nature of scare NOT addressed in the article?
In continental Europe many news already think this was a hoax, or more precisely a government work of fake propaganda, the alleged plot simply did not exist. The purpose was to divert public attention from massive israeli invasion of Lebanon and instill fears of bearded terror and evil Allah, so the population supports the "war of civilizations" interpretation.
It is well-known that paki secret police uses torture and people beaten, frozen and electricuted day and night will soon confess to raping their own mothers or intending to kill the monkeys of Gibraltar with cocoa-nut firing cannons or whatever junk, just to end the suffering. Any info that came from the torture chambers of pakistani military dictatorship simply cannot be trusted.
Also the history of british secret police says they are wrong. They killed the innocent brazilian electrician in the subway, then shot the two muslim brothers,
- One actually, as to the rest we don't know any details yet. Rich Farmbrough 19:50 11 August 2006 (GMT).
who had nothing to do with radicalism, based on fake accusations. Once british police was famous for not carrying firearms at all but now they are executing people who have not been charged or convicted. All this needs fair representation in the article! 195.70.32.136 07:52, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I live in Europe but have not seen a single reliable news agency mention this. As is mentioned above a few times, supply reliable sources and we'll be happy to include in the article. Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 08:38, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- And while you're at it, try to be civil! Budgiekiller 09:05, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yep, have some manners, anonymous user. Referring to Pakistanis as "Pakis" just isn't very nice. I'm prepared to admit that it might be worth mentioning somewhere in the piece that some people *think* this is a hoax. However, the balance of evidence suggests it isn't. A hoax would require a coverup on a massive scale, and risk an enormous backlash if it were found out. The notion that anything that slick and sophisticated could be carried out over here while John Prescott's in charge of the country is hilarious. Bedesboy 11:26, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
You state as a fact that "In continental Europe many news already think this was a hoax, or more precisely a government work of fake propaganda". Could you please give more details, of the media sources who state this, and references to articles where they say it? It would help. Information on Wikipedia has to be verifiable. FT2 (Talk | email) 11:30, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- So what kinds of criticisms about the government handling of this are there? Skinnyweed 13:42, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- May I add this: Wikipedia is not a soapbox. --physicq210 00:52, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
U.S. & U.K. government & news statements about suspects' religious ties
I wonder whether it's worth mentioning, in this article, a difference between British and American government officials and mainstream news media.
On the day on which this news broke, President Bush spoke of "Islamic fascists"—a term that, the United States' NPR News reported, would not be used publicly by authorities in the U.K.
According to The New York Times, a member of the House of Lords said that the police had told him that all 21 (at the time, the reported number was 21, not 24) of the arrested suspects were "British Muslims".
But it seems that most mainstream news reports and government statements have steered clear of wording about the suspects' religious backgrounds or views.
The opening story of the 10 August 2006 edition of NPR's All Things Considered had a report from correspondent Rob Gifford, in London, that included these words:
- ROB GIFFORD: Inevitably, there has been speculation about who the suspects are. The areas of London and Birmingham where the arrests were made have large multiracial communities; other suspects were arrested in the town of High Wycombe, near London. But police have been treading very sensitively, giving no background information, bearing in mind often delicate relations with the Muslim community, since four young extremists killed themselves and fifty-two others on the London transport system last July. Deputy Commissioner of the Metropolitan Police Paul Stephenson was at pains to stress this was nothing to do with any specific community or any specific faith.
- PAUL STEPHENSON: This is not about communities. This is about—this is about criminals. This is about murderers, people who want to commit mass murder. This is not about anything to do with any particular community. This is about people who might masquerade within a community, behind certain faiths. But this is about people who are desperate, desperate people, who want to do things that no right-minded citizen of this country or any other country would want to tolerate.
Maybe this interesting question of what to say and what not to say when giving information about such an event is worth mentioning in this article.
President Lethe 08:24, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
tss, yanks --Greg.loutsenko 13:51, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- This is inappropriate. Please restrict your contributions here to discussing the article rather than making racist observations about editors contributing to it. Thanks. --Guinnog 11:12, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
- I think that the comment was directed more at George Bush, than at Wikipedia editors Bluap 16:18, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Grouping sections
As may be obvious, I've been rearranging the discussions. I'll take a break to get some feedback as to whether this is a good idea. Also, (if it seems like a good idea), please help. I'm not really sure what to do with some of these. Disccusions of reaction details? Doesn't sound right. --Elliskev 13:30, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Go for it. It's a good idea - it might stop some of the proliferation. Merging some might be a good idea too... Shimgray | talk | 15:38, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agree 100%, especially as it makes good use of the automated TOC. On the specific section title - how about "International reaction details"? "Discussion of" is probably superfluous for the talk page. Tevildo 17:26, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Place the War on Terrorism Template on here
People this is part of the War on Terror and should have the War on Terror template placed at the bottom.
Amlder20 14:41, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- The other UK events don't use the template - the term is remarkably US-centric, and the template looks inappropriate used outside that context. Shimgray | talk | 15:34, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed. "War on Terror" is an absolutely stupid, meaningless term anyway – you can't have a war on an abstraction, you'd never know when it finished. -- Arwel (talk) 16:48, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- This is definatly part of the war on terror, don't blaim us about the name we did not create it! The WOT title applies to the war between the USA and allies against AlQaeda. This attack fits the bill a hell of a lot more than the war in iraq. And the logic its US centric term so we won't put it on UK terorism articles is "intersting".Hypnosadist 17:03, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Typical that people would prefer to make events like yesterdays a non War on Terrorism event because it happened in the UK. I think it is rediculous and that this is very well part of the WOT and the UK is very much involved in fighting terrorism. It's a different war, not a war of nations, it's a war of Nations vs Criminals, people who don't just rob their local bank or their corner shop, they kill millions of innocent people. I support this war on terrorism and hope that one day, we will defeat them. Yesterday is an example of that, and a victory for the police and security services of the UK, we deserve acknowledgment in our contribution to ending what could had been the largest terror attack since 9/11.
Amlder20 17:31, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- they kill millions of innocent people. WTF? when the yanks invaded afganistan and iraq they killed tens of thousands of innocent civilians. the yanks call this collateral damage, but this is bull shit, its called murdering tens of thousands of people. al qaeda was created by CIA. trained, funded, they even activly provided intellegence. so i think the yanks should just go and hug their forner friends. and since all you yanks are so christian why dont you turn the other cheek. THE YANKS CREATED AL QAEDA, WHY SHOULD THE REST OF THE WORLD HAVE TO CLEAN UP YOUR MESS. War On Terror is yours, you deal with it.--Greg.loutsenko 18:49, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Please don't use talk pages to express political views. It just winds people up. This really isn't the place. --Lo2u (T • C) 19:12, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Still, this should have the War on Terrorism template on it.
Amlder20 19:13, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I absolutely agree. We can't leave this template out because it "sounds a bit American". These were trans-Atlantic flights and this is an international encyclopedia. If there's an equivalent British template that should be added too. I was really objecting to "THE YANKS CREATED AL QAEDA, WHY SHOULD THE REST OF THE WORLD HAVE TO CLEAN UP YOUR MESS" in all caps and to "WTF" - a completely inappropriate use of a talk page that provokes others to misuse the pages too. There's no good reason not to include the template though. --Lo2u (T • C) 19:18, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- On quick research, none of the London bombing articles have a "War on Terror" template. My feeling is is that is was determined innappropriate for the content at hand. Neither does the 2006 Toronto Terrorism Arrests, something that (As far I remember from CNN) related to the War on Terror. At the current place and time I don't think there is a clear connection to either Al-Qaeda or the War on Terror (And for the most part it is an American term, but I do not feel that it is restricted to only America. Other countries have used it, I believe, including my own).
- Besides, all Terror is international (Hence why I'm apprehensive about France's part in the anti-terrorist activites). There is no way anyone can say "Terrorism does not affect my country".
- So, sorry, I don't feel the "War" on Terror template is appropriate. I'm sure it's been called part of the War on Terror, but I don't know if that's what Wikipedia wants.
- However, if there is a generic "Relating to Terrorism", "Terror Template" or "Relating to attacks purportedly seeking recompense for international greivances", I'd be more for it. Heck, even an "Relating to Airway terror" template would do. I'm sure that there is an appropriate template out there: If War on Terror is the one, so be it. My current beliefs say it isn't, but that's just me. Wikipedia is not a democracy from what I remember of WP:NOT, so whatever. Logical2u 19:26, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- The reason for that this template gets used in a very POV way in which it usually only gets added to events started by america recently. The london bombing are part of the war on terror i'll check the talk pages.Hypnosadist 19:40, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well the US government has been pretty clear that this is probably Al Qaeda related. I don't think many really doubt this even if nothing's confirmed. The "War on Terror" template is good as a generic Al Qaeda related terror template whereas aircraft terror or international grievances are rather unhelpful categories (how likely are people to want a list of aeroplane related terrorist attacks and how likely are they to want a list of Al Qaeda attacks?). I know what Wikipedia is not but I'd like to see a template with a name people can agree on to group together all of these Islamic terrorism pages. PS you seem to have mutated into me...--Lo2u (T • C) 19:39, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I've added the template to the july 7th bombing AFTER checking that there was no concensus against such action, i checked all the archives.Hypnosadist 20:31, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Can we agree that, since this was a terrorist plot and the targets were said to be flights heading to the United States on US airlines, there is a US connection and therefore it's at least plausible to tag this with the "War on Terror" template? (If the flights were on, say, a Japanese airline and headed to Japan I'd be willing to tag it with a "History of Japan" template or something like that)130.164.64.72 20:38, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'm going to be bold and add the template.Hypnosadist 20:49, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Well, the name of the template appears to be War on Terrorism which a) makes more sence than War on Terror and b) makes the argument you've all been having a bit redundant and pointless. For the benefit of our American brethren, UK politicians very rarly refer to the WOT as people sniggering can really put you off your stride in a speech. Journalists tend to precede the term with a cough, a pause or pronounce it in inverted commas ( watch Paxman ). Satirists love the term, and tend to precede it with the possesive: 'George Bush's War on Terror' Jmackaerospace 00:33, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Infoboxes and projects
are their any relevant infoboxes or wikiprojects? --Zr2d2 19:48, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
relevance?
U.S. domestic politics
"On August 9th, the day before news of the plot was released, the White House launched a campaign to attack opposition Democrats as being weak on terror."
Not that I'm some nutty stickler of a politico, but I do wonder what exactly this has at all to do with the article. Political reactions are germane, of course, but that sentence, in conjunction with the sentence declaring that Bush was made aware of this on the sixth, do not a pretty picture make. russ. 20:05, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
addendum: it's also curious that all that is under "security reaction," seeing as it definitely is implied that Cheney's conference call was an advantageous political dig. russ. 20:08, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- Note: for the following, I'm using some generalizations based on popular political opinion. I'm not trying to incite anything, I'm just being brief. The "white house attack" would be the biggest niche for conspiracy theorists in the US as far as I can tell. Joe Lieberman's loss to a "real anti-war" opponent was a potential sign that the Democractic party is growing a spine for the upcoming elections. It is very disconcerting that the terrorist plot was unvieled just after Lieberman's loss (and the White House's renewed attack on Democrats), and that Stone's 9/11 movie just came out, with elections coming up, etc etc. Talk of the conspicuous timing of these events will certainly hit major news outlets before long (I've heard it quite a bit on NPR [radio] for starters). And I'm not trying to validate the conspiracy theorists' claims at all, but it's just the close timing of all of these events (just as the Bush administration gets a "big win" pushing for peace in the Israel/Hezbollah conflict) is something that's drawing a lot of raised eyebrows regardless of stance on a conspiracy. Gspawn 14:14, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
- ^Again, not trying to incite anything, not trying to validate or invalidate anything, just providing some commentary.Gspawn 14:14, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
- The arrests of terrorist suspects in Britain was arranged by the British police, not the U.S. Government. They have investigating the suspects for months, so it can not have been arranged just for now, as the current events were not known months ago.--213.42.2.21 12:00, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- This constant conspiracy crap is so boring, we are at war and they are trying kill us, get a thought process and get a life!Hypnosadist 16:31, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
- The considerate thing is not to waste peoples time with this conspiracy rubish, its ruining all the articles in this area.Hypnosadist 17:41, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
All that jazz about timing and whatnot is fine, but I still don't see how that's related to the plot itself--the actual "plot" the suspects were looking to execute doesn't seem to really, mm, relate to the bit I'd mentioned earlier, or at least certainly not under security reaction; however, it could be placed somewhere else, i.e. a subsection about reaction or something, or even more towards "political reaction," but I'd wager a. it's strangely out of place in this article, and b. it's almost certainly out of place in its current section. russ. 16:38, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
addendum the second: it's also strange that people tarry over the timing for republicans, seeing as, oh, I don't know, it was British intelligence that did the work, insofar as I understand? russ. 16:40, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
And lastly, it would seem the point is moot--someone went all bold on the point in particular, so it's gone anyway. russ. 16:46, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Italy
- Another "relevance" Q. "Forty arrests were made in cities including Rome, Milan, Venice, Florence and Naples, amongst others." This appears in the source CNN article with no real context. Should we remove it from our article? Rich Farmbrough 20:15 11 August 2006 (GMT).
Released without charge
I just caught the end of the news earlier and they said that one of the suspects had been released without charge? Do we know who and are they still listed as arrested here?
--Charlesknight 15:49, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Articles on the suspects arrested
A quick look into the articles created on the suspects arrested in relation to this plot reveal that apart from the fact that they were arrested as suspects, nothing else is written. To me it is quite clear that they don't merit an article of their own. There isn't anything that can even be merged into this article. I suggest deletion of these articles and de-wikilinking of their names in the article. If editors are against deletion, then redirects back to this article should be created on the said pages. — Ambuj Saxena (talk) 09:26, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- May be better to wait and see how the story develops, if charges brought etc. Articles are being fleshed out as biog details emerge, (see eg Abdul Waheed). --mervyn 10:50, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Wouldn't that create a very bad precedent. The articles should show notability when it is created, not any time in the future. We shouldn't speculate that they would become notable sometime in the future. Rather, they should be created only when there is enough material present to make the article encyclopedia-worthy. — Ambuj Saxena (talk) 16:10, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed Bluap 16:16, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Revenge attacks
Shouldent there be a section on revenge attacks against Muslims, as i hear that a number have taken place and they are clearly significant. --88.108.210.255 10:45, 13 August 2006 (UTC)Soz i forget to log in--Jedi18 10:46, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yes as long as they are well sourced and link the attacks to this plot.Hypnosadist 10:54, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Neutrality of this article's title?
I note that User:PizzaMargherita has tagged this page with {{POV-title}}: "The neutrality of this article's title and/or subject matter is disputed." saying:
- Just to register my total agreement with Irishpunktom. These are all allegations. Until a jury rules the contrary, there was no plot, only an alleged plot. Even mainstream media understands that. Without mention of the allegation, the title is POV and I favour at least the reintroduction of {{POV-title}}. PizzaMargherita 00:01, 13 August 2006 (UTC) (copied from above).
A couple of points. (1) It's worth starting a new discussion here (not half way up the page) as this talk page is rather long and is going to need some archiving soon. This also makes it much easer to find the reasoning (the edit summary "(As per talk)" does not help in this regard). (2) There was a consensus reached back on August 10 that this name is ok, at least for now. This implies that the Wikipedians who came to this consensus thought that it expressed a sufficiently NPOV for use. Has something changed? (3) It would be very useful if alternatives could be suggested.
I advocate removing the tag at the present time. Andreww 12:23, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- I've been bold and removed it.Consensus was to keep the title he can start a new discusion on talk first.Hypnosadist 12:32, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Hi there, (1) thanks for making this a section and reopening the discussion. (2) What changed is that the following no longer holds
- Only one editor seems to want to have the POV-title tag on (at least, only one seems to be adding it).
- The alternative suggested by Irishpunktom is fine by me: "2006 transatlantic aircraft plot (allegation)", or it could be "2006 transatlantic aircraft alleged plot", I don't really mind so long as it reflects that it's an allegation.
- I won't re-add the tag (although I'm strongly convinced that it's appropriate if the title does not change), I must confess that I mostly wanted to reopen this discussion (i.e. after I wrote my comment), sorry about that. PizzaMargherita 14:26, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Alleged is the 7th word in the article, and placing it in the title makes it clumsy in my opinion.Hypnosadist 14:34, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- I agree that the title, as it stands, isn't ideal, although I'd say it's more a case of it being unverified rather than POV. I'll repeat my suggestion from above of something like August 2006 airline security alert (possibly terrorist alert if people like that word?) - this is the most factually correct description of the incident to date. Tevildo 15:49, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- The article covers two distinct issues, the first is an alleged plot to blow up several aircraft en route from the UK to the US, the second is the reaction in terms of increased airport security and the related hindrance to travel. Ultimately we may need to split the article to deal with these two related issues fully (I don't think this is needed yet, but with coverage of any future trial, other possible plots and so on this may be needed quite soon). August 2006 airline security alert covers the second issue while 2006 transatlantic aircraft plot covers the first (I don't think we need to include "alleged" and it is rather clumsy). Any snappy title that includes both aspects of the article? Andreww 16:23, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- 2006 transatlantic terrorist alert? There _is_ "incident" as a universal fallback... Tevildo 18:24, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Any reason to suggest that terrorist alert is more neutral than aircraft plot?Budgiekiller 19:24, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- 2006 transatlantic terrorist alert? There _is_ "incident" as a universal fallback... Tevildo 18:24, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- The article covers two distinct issues, the first is an alleged plot to blow up several aircraft en route from the UK to the US, the second is the reaction in terms of increased airport security and the related hindrance to travel. Ultimately we may need to split the article to deal with these two related issues fully (I don't think this is needed yet, but with coverage of any future trial, other possible plots and so on this may be needed quite soon). August 2006 airline security alert covers the second issue while 2006 transatlantic aircraft plot covers the first (I don't think we need to include "alleged" and it is rather clumsy). Any snappy title that includes both aspects of the article? Andreww 16:23, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- The former is real, the latter is alleged and highly political, so very POV if the allegation is left unsaid. I would be happy with "alert" in the title (as opposed to unqualified "plot"). PizzaMargherita 19:49, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- So how about 2006 transatlantic aircraft terrorist investigation.Hypnosadist 19:55, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- No, that doesn't cover what's actually happened. There has been a security alert, which is blamed on terrorism. There may be a plot, but that's not yet been established. The investigation is doubtless ongoing, but the article isn't about it. Tevildo 20:00, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- I think you've got it the wrong way around this article is about the plot to blow up the plains! The alert is just a side affect of that event not the other way round.Hypnosadist 20:32, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Some would disagree. :) If the plot is proven to be genuine, we can split the article. At the moment, the alert is the only verifiable event. Tevildo 20:41, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- 1)The police raids are verifiable events. 2)The British governments' (as well as that of america and pakistan) belief in this "plot" is why we have the "alert".Hypnosadist 20:44, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Exactly. So the plot is not verified and its existence is the POV of the government/police. This article is not about a plot, it's about an alleged plot, and very much about the alert that was triggered by this allegation. PizzaMargherita 21:11, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- One might say "purported POV", but we're already too far off-topic. :) Tevildo 21:21, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- (1) True. (2) That is what they claim. At the moment, that claim is not verifiable. Tevildo 21:13, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Exactly. So the plot is not verified and its existence is the POV of the government/police. This article is not about a plot, it's about an alleged plot, and very much about the alert that was triggered by this allegation. PizzaMargherita 21:11, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- I feel that we should not have "terrorism" in the title. For the article as stands, "alert" is better than "plot" ("arrests" / "raids" are possibilities). Saying "August 2006" is good. I would personally remove "translatlantic". Bluap 21:24, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Is this an endorsement of my original August 2006 airline security alert? :) Tevildo 21:30, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- Let me express myself more clearly, this article is about the police investigation going on in Britain. The difficulties of some air passangers is not that important compared to a police investigation spanning two countries that we know of, involing 25 arrests and alligations of planning to commit mass murder. I think arrests or raids is better than plot and definately better than alert which i oppose utterly.Hypnosadist 21:36, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- PS transatlantic is important as it points to the intended targets of both Britain and the USA.Hypnosadist 21:44, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- I'd like to add my support to the suggestion that this article is renamed August 2006 airline security alert. Remember verifiability - there are NO reliable sources we can use at present to verify the existence of the plot, let alone the details. Alleged plot, yes, plot, no. The security alert, on the other hand, is a verifiable, factual description of what is happening. SP-KP 22:05, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- August 2006 airline security alert is also fine by me, thanks. PizzaMargherita 22:16, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- The alert is barely notable, the arrests and searches are. They are also verifiable so how about August 2006 translatlantic security arrests.Hypnosadist 22:21, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
- The alert is barely notable if you are not trying to fly. That involves a lot more people than the 24 arrested. PizzaMargherita 22:51, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
Sunday Times Online on the Plot
http://www.timesonline.co.uk/article/0,,2087-2310607,00.html very very important info in this piece.Hypnosadist 22:17, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
New BBC story
This hot of the wire http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/uk/4789305.stm This is the useful info:"Police and security service officials have brought in powerful lights to enable them to work through the night in King's Wood near High Wycombe" and " According to BBC home affairs correspondent Daniel Sandford officers were looking for possible signs of makeshift explosives and detonators in King's Wood."Hypnosadist 21:42, 13 August 2006 (UTC)
alleged
I'm all for conspiracy theories, and i also don't like all the convenient "terror attacks" that seem to happen when the public starts to forget about the war and the President and whatever. However, this is an encyclopedia. We don't have the luxury to doubt the Press and the governments of two countries. We just report what happened. That's it. "alleged" is a POV word and must be taken out and left out of this article. dposse 03:28, 14 August 2006 (UTC)
- I disagree that alleged is a POV word. In fact, it should be used until something has been proven; in that case the article would be exhibiting POV without it. However, according to the media, the investigation turned up bomb-making materials and there is proof of the plot. In this situation, the attack is not "alleged". Dbinder (talk) 04:21, 14 August 2006 (UTC)