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Your submission at Articles for creation: Newton, South Lanarkshire (February 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chrisw80 was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment they left was:

This article starts out quite well, but then turns into a bit of a dissertation. You have a good start here, but please condense it a little and where so many of the sources aren't to specific local businesses. Otherwise, it's obvious you've spent a lot of time and effort working on this and it DOES show your hard work.

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Chrisw80 (talk) 06:16, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! 217.41.241.4, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Chrisw80 (talk) 06:16, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Newton, South Lanarkshire has been accepted

Newton, South Lanarkshire, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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SwisterTwister talk 21:19, 31 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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