Talk:Race and ethnicity in the NHL

Thanks Template:Ping:Stephology. This is a great addition to WP. I made several edits. This made me realize we could copy edit each other's contributions.

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Hockey is an expensive sport with economic barriers to entry for members of disadvantaged or marginalized groups compared to other sports. [Can you find evidence of the average costs online and cite?] Its popularity varies by region and has a greater influence in certain cities while playing a large role in the cultures of many cities. [Needs citation]. While still lacking diversity, the NHL has made positive steps towards increasing inclusivity and regulating blatant racism. [Need citation and evidence of actual steps added here.]

Thx, --sheridanford (talk) 20:02, 11 July 2016 (UTC)