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I've listed this article for peer review because…

I would like suggestions about how to be clearer and more precise with the information given while staying within the rules of wikipedia. I would also like suggestions of what might be missing, how this can be better structured, and if the paragraphs seem to flow as far as the given information.

I still plan on adding a list of lazzi from a variety of sources so that there are clearer examples of what is it. I also would like to add some more external links. Thanks, Emily Giant 23:31, 13 November 2016 (UTC)

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