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Reviewer: DannyMusicEditor (talk · contribs) 19:58, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]


As part of a review deal, I'd be happy to review this, but I'm going to start on Thursday, possibly Wednesday. Hope to see another wonderful passing article! dannymusiceditor Speak up! 19:58, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]


  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:
    B. Cites reliable sources, where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
    It seems Wikipedia doesn't have an appropriate one available.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    New part of my review policy: Please don't make any changes until I finish the review.


Toolbox checks

Everything in the GA toolbox checks out fine.

Lead & Infobox

  • Album cover needs alt text, something I neglected to catch in "Give It All" (oops!)
  • As a result of their newfound exposure... What exposure? Elaborate on that in or before the current sentence.
  • Recording took place over the course of five weeks...
  • Link "critics" to music journalism
  • who praised the hardcore music
  • Why were the liner notes updated? Just cause it's 2005 and the band's lineup changed, or what? Elaborate, but don't overdo it for the lead.
  • Might want to indicate that it was out of print at one point (that's why it was reissued, right?)
  • A flatlist or hlist template is preferable for multiple genres, highly suggest even though not totally necessary.

Background and recording

  • No comma necessary with Toni & Tim.
  • Might want to indicate that Tim was fresh out of leaving the bass position in Arma Angelus (possibly because of Rise Against), a metalcore band which featured all of Fall Out Boy's members at one point or another. Who knew, right?
  • Possibly indicate Fat Mike is the NOFX vocalist? They did have notable success.
  • Again with the exposure thing.
  • No need to spell out Sonic Iguana Studios twice so soon.

Back for more later or tomorrow.

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