Talk:Jose Peralta

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I'm having issues editing the following section of this page. I've already edited but my changes have been reverted.

"Peralta joined the Independent Democratic Conference (IDC) in 2017.[33] As a member of the IDC, Peralta votes for the Republicans' leadership slate in the state senate, and is rewarded by the Republican party with a stipend, known as a "lulu," worth $12,500 a year, designated by Legislative Law 5-1 for the chairman of the Energy and Telecommunication committee.[34] Republicans named Peralta only to the vice-chairmanship of that committee, reserving the chairmanship for one of their own, and in order to send money to Peralta, payroll officials falsified state documents.[35]In response to joining the IDC, teenage politician and local activist, Tahseen Chowdhury, announced his candidacy against Peralta for the 2018 election cycle.[36]"

- Some of this information is not found within the quoted sources.

-Some of this information seems to be part of a different page. Should be moved to the subjects page.

-Some of this information is based on personal opinion or intentions of a third party, not the pages subject

-Some of this information seems to have been added to further a political campaign as opposed to improve the page.

-Some of this imformation is using the subjects position in government and taking it to further the goals of someone who is not in office.

-My changes were deemed "un encyclopedic and in PR style" by the user reverting the changes. Although, I believe my changes greatly improved the page vis-a-vis the section above. I have inquired on their page, but I have not received an answer yet.

 D13Friend (talk) 14:19, 8 July 2017 (UTC)

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I tried to change this same paragraph above as was reverted, by the same person it think. Even though the articles were sourced, I dont think the information improves the page but looks to added for other reasons.

Where does it say this in any of the articles cited? “votes for the Republicans' leadership slate in the state senate”

Where does it the that the reason of the section above results in this “and is rewarded by the Republican party with a stipend, known as a "lulu," worth $12,500 a year, designated by Legislative Law 5-1 for the chairman of the Energy and Telecommunication committee.[1] “ “ As implied by the paragraph?

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