Talk:Foreign electoral intervention

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Shulman and Bloum

Why is this not in the Ukrainian elections section?Slatersteven (talk) 14:57, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Slatersteven, the portions of the paper that deal with interference in general as far as principles go, is included in the overview section. These are drawn from the Ukrainian election, but are about elections overall. The portions of the paper that are about the Ukrainian election in particular are cited in that section as well. TimothyJosephWood 15:45, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This seems to me to be duplicating material, and if they only really studies one election why not use them for just that?Slatersteven (talk) 16:15, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Also why does the overview section need to be split up into each separate academic study you are sourcing, why is it not just an overview and then split up into each specific example election?Slatersteven (talk) 16:22, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Lebanese election wasn't actually compromised AFAIK, but the study was done in conjunction with it. Both studies use particular examples and evidence to generalize about the subject as a whole, and the subject as a whole is what the section is about. If it helps conceptually, I can simplify the explanation and separate the issues about the individual elections.

There is no particular reason why it is divided by study, other than to attempt to enhance readability, rather than having one long section. Whether it is or not isn't particularly important. TimothyJosephWood

I am not sure it does aid readability, I am jumping form one section to another with no flow of text., it just reads like a series of rather long bullet points.Slatersteven (talk) 17:10, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Better? TimothyJosephWood 17:35, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, still a bit wordy (especially for an overview) but then I suspect there is more to be added elsewhere.Slatersteven (talk) 17:37, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

2016 US election

You might want to add this, and not make it about the one nation.

[1].Slatersteven (talk) 17:50, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The entire article seems to be about how they in fact weren't and didn't intend to interfere, it barely mentions any allegations that they in fact may have done so. TimothyJosephWood 18:14, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Which means there was an accusation, and it's not the only source.Slatersteven (talk) 18:18, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

[2] [3]

Do I really have to dig for you?Slatersteven (talk) 18:20, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Yes? Right now I'm reading about Chile. TimothyJosephWood 18:41, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

[4] [5] [6] Slatersteven (talk) 18:50, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

[7] [8] Slatersteven (talk) 18:52, 12 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

is this the correct title?

Currently it is foreign electoral intervention, which is pretty broad. And one can thus imagine that there will be WP:SPINOFF articles, which discuss particular elections that targetted particular countries, such as foreign electoral intervention in the United States elections, 2016... and *maybe* even foreign electoral intervention by Russia in the United States elections, 2016 which we currently have at an inherently POV title of 2016_United_States_election_interference_by_Russia. And plenty of wikipedians anxious to keep the article *exactly* to that specific title. Some WP:GHITS at scholar.google.com to back up my forthcoming suggestion:

5 hits, "foreign electoral intervention" per [9]
306 hits, "electoral intervention" per [10]
20k hits, election AND interference AND 2016 AND russia AND "united states", per [11]
100k hits, "regime change" per [12]
294k hits, election AND interference, per [13]
655k hits, election AND intervention, per [14]
2180k hits, election AND influence, per [15]

Might I suggest, that there is a somewhat-broader topic area, international influence on elections perhaps, which covers not just *intervention* with another country's elections (and not just interference with another country's elections), but the broader idea of merely influencing the elections of another country. So for the specific case of the 2016 elections in the United States, there was a ton of international influence exerted, or at least perceived to be exerted (influence which foreign governments and/or citizens of foreign countries attempted to implement). We have articles on some of these external influences, for example:

In addition to such legit sort of influence, there is also influence which is NOT legit, such as monetary or pecuniary contributions:

And then of course we have covert types of influence, and overt types of influence, which include most of the current body-prose. But I'd suggest that influence is the core concept, and concentrating on 'interference' or even on the somewhat more solid ground of 'intervention' will narrow the scope improperly. Full context is best viewed through the lens of influence, which includes legit freedom-of-speech type stuff, shady envelope-of-cash type stuff, and very shady cloak-n-dagger type stuff. Or nowadays, spoofed-domain-name-and-virtual-keyboard type stuff.

As a codicil, I would also recommend saying 'election cycle' rather than saying 'elections' because the latter seems to narrow to scope to just the general election and specifically the *voting* process during the general election, whereas what we actually want an article about methinks is on the entire election cycle to include who announces a campaign, which politician wins the nominations of the various parties, and which party-candidate wins the general election. So my current suggestion would be something like a rename from foreign electoral intervention to the more general topic of international influence on the election cycle, which can then have ...in the United States tacked on, and even ..in the United States, 2016 tacked on. If you decide to move this out of userspace and into draftspace, please leave a note on my usertalk, I would like to make some edits. 47.222.203.135 (talk) 02:19, 13 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'm...just going to move this to article space tomorrow, after a few more bits of work, because this is entirely too much discussion for a user space daft. TimothyJosephWood 02:24, 13 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have altered the lead-sentences, to make clear that the present foreign electoral interventions article is about mostly-negative-sorts of interventions, either because the intervening country is pushing propaganda, or because the intervened-upon country is seen as corrupt, or sometimes both. I still think the article would be improved by broadening it to cover international influence (which is not always seen in a negative light). 47.222.203.135 (talk) 19:05, 16 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

See WP:OR, which is what your interpretation of the meaning is. TimothyJosephWood 03:07, 17 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

2012 election

BY whom, how about the sources?Slatersteven (talk) 18:05, 13 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV, if this is someone's opinion, we should specify whose opinion it is, not passively and ambiguously claim that "it was claimed". Beyond that, "tried to undermine" doesn't actually convey anything meaningful. Tried to undermine by blowing up Washington DC? Tried to undermine by sending someone a nasty post card?

Having sources makes the information verifiable, but it doesn't remove the burden of actually having to include the information. TimothyJosephWood 18:13, 13 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

organization of the article is by target-country

So we have a section about interventions-by-foreign-countries-in-Bolivian-elections... but we do not have the opposite, which is to say, a section about interventions-by-Bolivians-in-the-elections-held-in-other-countries. This is more important for colonial superpowers like England/France/Spain, and for modern superpowers like USA/USSR/China, than it is for Bolivia... but I expect even the Bolivians have intevened in the elections of their neighbor-countries at one point or another in history, depending on how sharp of a distinction is being drawn here between 'intervene' and the broader concept of 'influence'.

Is is a good idea to add some new sections, like foreign electoral intervention#by England in elections of other countries which would cover colonial days, and foreign electoral intervention#interventions by the United States in elections of other countries which would cover everything from Iran in 1953 and Chile in the 1970 to Iraq in the recent decades, plus maybe even "positive" interventions where the United States helped supply UN peacekeepers to guarantee free-n-fair elections within countries where the electoral system was considered to be corrupt? 47.222.203.135 (talk) 19:03, 16 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Section titles

So, the section titles are... a little much, especially when we get into listing two or three countries, and you get to the US, which for consistency, should list a dozen, but can't, because that's dumb. Can we not go for something simpler? GMG ^talk 13:28, 1 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I expanded the headings to be more informative. This article is organized according to the country that had the elections rather than the country that interfered, so I think the least we should do is mention the country that interfered somewhere in each header. Anythingyouwant (talk) 14:08, 1 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Is there a middle ground there somewhere? Maybe treat it like a parenthetical disambiguation? Like 2002 Bolivian election (U.S.). That still cuts the length down by about half. GMG ^talk 14:25, 1 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

We should have the country name first, because the article is alphabetical by country rather than chronological. So:

Bolivian election (by U.S. in 2002)

I put in the word “role” because in some of these cases there is only suspicion but no proof. Anythingyouwant (talk) 14:52, 1 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]