User talk:Joshua Jonathan
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FYI
You might want to comment on this Sockpuppet investigation. PepperBeast (talk) 00:22, 3 October 2017 (UTC)
Kubrawiya
Hello, Joshua Jonathan – I just finished copy-editing Mir Sayyid Ali Hamadani, and looked at the linked article Kubrawiya because just below the lede is a red link to Kubrawi and I wanted to know if there was another article to which I could link it. I started to read the article on Kubrawiya, and I saw several errors right at the beginning. The whole article probably needs a copy-edit, but for now, I'll just ask you about the first sentence:
- The Kubrawiyya order (Arabic: سلسلة کبرویة) is one of the Sufi orders and way that trace its direct spiritual lineage and chain (silsilah) to the Islamic prophet Muhammad, through Ali, Muhammad's cousin, son-in-law and the First Imam, via Imam Ali raza.
We've got singular "Kubrawiyya order" (with two "y's" even though the title has only one "y"), followed by "one of the Sufi orders and way" (if "way" is essential, it should be either "ways" or "a way"), followed by an adjective clause ("that trace...") with a plural verb. Finally, I think "raza" should be capitalized. Can you (or any tps) help sort this sentence out so that it is grammatically correct and clear? – Corinne (talk) 15:56, 9 October 2017 (UTC)
- @Kautilya3: would you know some Pakistani/Islamic editors who can help here? Thanks! Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 16:15, 9 October 2017 (UTC)
- Hi Corinne and JJ, I did a bold edit and cleaned it up. I don't think Kubrawi is any different from Kubrawiya. LouisAragon, please check my edit and correct if necessary. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 19:47, 9 October 2017 (UTC)
So why can't you explain why the ACIM article should be rubbish?
What is this, a gang bang? Nobody willing to discuss with me exactly why they believe a book summary shouldn't be in an article lead, but everyone happy to do the ole "gang bang?" Nice. Please tell me why you don't think an article summary should be in an article lead? Scott P. (talk) 08:48, 13 October 2017 (UTC)
Punjab
Hello, Joshua Jonathan – I was just looking at the latest edits to Punjab; an editor struggled with getting the right degree of decimal point approximation for an altitude change, but I think it's all right now. If I have time, I may change 0.2 to a fraction, which is more comprehensible for those used to inches, but that's all. I came here to ask you whether you thought there might be too many images in this article, particularly in the Punjab#Photo gallery. How would one go about selecting those to keep and those to remove? Feel free to make that determination and remove some. – Corinne (talk) 16:17, 14 October 2017 (UTC)
Divine madness
Hi. I've made a suggestion for renaming Divine madness (religion) on its talk page. PopSci (talk) 17:55, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- PopSci: Thanks for the note on my talk page. @WikiEditorial101: how are you? you may also want to peek at PopSci's suggestion and comment! Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 18:17, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
Dashavtar
Don't start editing war at Dashavtar page If u know than answer me that HOW CAN THERE BE TWO INCARNATIONS OF THE LORD AT SAME PLACE AND TIME ON EARTH? Dbkatira (talk) 14:41, 27 October 2017 (UTC)