1 These edits are unbiased. At the end, the stereotype of depression being a woman's disease is discussed, but this is not biased because she is merely showing a perspective.
2 No citations are included within these edits, other than mentioning WebMD in the sentences, but there should be citations.
3 Each edit feels substantial because a lot of new information was added and it relates to the topic of depression. However, citations should be added.
4 There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes to fix and the sentence structure is sometimes repetitive, but it is pretty clear to understand and informational.
