Talk:Paddling Out/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:35, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Grabbing this one for a review. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:35, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

• Add Universal to labels.
• Add CD to formats.

Lead

• performed → remove
• "through Columbia and Downtown." → remove the latter as it was only released by said label on February.
• More to come...

Background

• programming → programmation
• Add additional recording by Nille Perned.
• Link Ted Jason

Composition and lyrics

• Fine.

Release and remixes

• Prior to its digital release, the Lu Cont remix premiered online on 10 February 2012, and the Gartner remix followed on 27 February → Prior to their digital release, the Lu Cont and the Gartner remix premiered online on 10 and 27 February 2012, respectively. (both sources on the end of the sentence)
• Josiah Hughes of Exclaim! viewed Lu Cont's remix as an "exciting fist-pumper", writing that it "quite possibly surpass[es]" the original.[29] MTV's Sam Lansky described Gartner's uptempo take as "aggressive", and noted the addition of handclaps and "grimy" synthesizers, which the writer believed fit well with Wyatt's vocals.[17] A writer for Pigeons & Planes wrote that Gartner "flips the tune with some heavy bass, some heart-wrenching build-ups, and hard-hitting thumps". In March 2013, Sarah Polonsky of Vibe named the it one of the DJ's best remixes" → move this to the critical reception, make the necessary changes to it fits.

Critical reception

• music critics → link to music journalism
• "brings the best of contemporary beat production to a song that most pop bands could get behind" → use your own words.

Chart performance

• Fine.

Formats and track listing

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is space on both sides.

Credits and personnel

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is space on both sides.
• Link Ted Jensen

Charts

• Fine

Release history

• Fine

References

• Wikilink the first time Consequence of Sound appears, remove the wikilink form the second.
• Remove the second wikilink from Exlaim!
• Digital Spy is publisher, not work.
• Remove "Prometheus Global Media" from publisher, since you seem to have mostly work. You only have publisher when there is no work.

External links

• Add the lyrics from the offical provider.

Overall

• Please don't make any changes until I finish the review.