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EasyMandarin

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This appears to be an unremarkable language school and the article makes no claims to notability. It is clearly a business, rather than a public educational establishment, and should therefore meet WP:NCORP, which it fails to do.

While fixable, the content appears to me to be promotional, e.g. by listing the days and times of classes. Both references provided are dead links. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 20:40, 11 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This discussion has been included in the list of Schools-related deletion discussions. CAPTAIN RAJU^(T) 20:42, 11 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This discussion has been included in the list of China-related deletion discussions. CAPTAIN RAJU^(T) 20:42, 11 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This discussion has been included in the list of Education-related deletion discussions. CAPTAIN RAJU^(T) 20:42, 11 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This discussion has been included in the list of Business-related deletion discussions. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 19:57, 12 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This discussion has been included in the list of Organizations-related deletion discussions. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 19:57, 12 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Delete unremarkable language school. Missing all sorts of secondary sources that would indicate importance. I've scrubbed out the specific courses and rewrote that paragraph. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 16:42, 13 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Editors have reverted by edits. So I have tagged this as advertising, to deal with verbiage like "Classes meet two weekday evenings from 7pm to 9pm at the Jing'an Temple campus. New courses start monthly" and "EasyMandarin is located at 172 Yuyuan Road, Suite 1501 (near Wanhangdu Road) in Shanghai, China. The school is located next to Jing'an Temple metro station found on Shanghai Metro Line 2 and Shanghai Metro Line 7." AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 16:49, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Striking vote for now given that citations have been provided independent sources Language magazine, The Beijinger and Time Out Shanghai. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 14:46, 15 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Keep Reference to top publication (Time Out Magazine) praising the school has been added (to show notability) ~~and dead links have been removed~~. Dead links updated using Wayback Machine archive. This article has been included since 2010 and when the article was created the debate already took place whether it is a school or a organization. Wikipedia administrators have already agreed that it is a school and thus allowed publication. Removed advertising verbiage as noted by editor, AngusWOOF. Parkertony (talk) 17:20, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AngusWOOF Thank you for your feedback. I have since edited the page based on your feedback. I only left the part "The school is located next to Jing'an Temple metro station found on Shanghai Metro Line 2 and Shanghai Metro Line 7" since this is a local landmark and is related and relevant to this article, and I do not believe it is advertising verbiage. I hope you will reconsider and help remove this pages "marked for deletion" status. Thank you. Parkertony (talk) 17:20, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Parkertony Can you find another publication that discusses the school? Time Out can be one, but really need another for the multiple sources in order for it to meet WP:GNG AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 17:36, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AngusWOOF Yes, there are several others. This link is for The Beijinger (a very popular online publication) talking about the school - https://www.thebeijinger.com/blog/2016/06/24/see-how-your-mandarin-measures-these-5-digital-proficiency-tests. Will find more and add to the page in the upcoming days. Unfortunately the Wikipedia page was not updated in a long time and the previous reference links were dead - thank you for pointing that out. Could you please kindly remove the "written like advertisement" template from the page? Thank you:)Parkertony (talk) 17:50, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It still looks like a brochure though with the course titles being bolded. Did you see the version I rewrote? https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=EasyMandarin&type=revision&diff=859372215&oldid=859371709 That would have satisfied the advertising tone. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 18:26, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

You will need an article that has significant coverage like this one for Victoria Shanghai Academy from South China Morning Post [1] AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 19:14, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The Beijinger is a Listings magazine so not sure how reliable it is for being independent of the advertisers they list. ~~Could someone look up the article and check whether it has significant coverage on the school? Links are timing out for me.~~ AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 19:18, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Links now work. Striking previous comment. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 14:27, 15 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Also potential confusion with Easy Mandarin UK in Belgravia [2] AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 19:39, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AngusWOOF I re-implemented your edit as you requested and agree that it removes the advertising tone and looks less brochure like. Could you please kindly remove the "written like advertisement" banner if okay with you? Thank you. I'll fix the dead link soon with Wayback Machine. Parkertony (talk) 05:42, 15 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I will add more notable references for the page after the weekend in the upcoming days. I will also re-publish some of the dead reference links that I found on Wayback Machine. Could someone please advise on best practices using Wayback Machine archived reference links? Parkertony (talk) 05:54, 15 September 2018 (UTC)Parkertony (talk) 05:19, 15 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Parkertony For the wayback ones, you can post the bare links here and in the article, and we can convert them to the archive citation format later. Right now you need to provide more RS citations to keep the article around. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 14:24, 15 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AngusWOOFAdded back dead link reference to comprehensive interview with school founder by radio86.com (radio86.com was acquired by https://gbtimes.com/). This is significant school coverage; however, it is in the Danish language (audio is in English). Could you please help convert for archive citation format? Thank you. Dead link is http://dk.radio86.com/livsstil-i-kina/6354/laer-kinesisk-i-shanghai , Wayback archive with interview audio can be found with the following link: https://web.archive.org/web/20120313001140/http://dk.radio86.com/livsstil/laer-kinesisk-i-shanghai.Parkertony (talk) 06:49, 17 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Added StudyTravel Magazine reference. It loads as a Microsoft Azure PDF. Not sure how to cite properly, but would look like this: Hancox, Nicola (January 2018). "China" (PDF) StudyTravel Magazine p. 50-51 Retrieved 17 September 2018. Parkertony (talk) 10:43, 17 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I've expanded the citations, yes, that's close enough. Curb Safe Charmer do you have any concerns on the magazine sources added? AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 16:52, 17 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Relisted to generate a more thorough discussion and clearer consensus.
Please add new comments below this notice. Thanks, Kpg jhp jm 01:16, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AngusWOOF It appears that Curb_Safe_Charmer is on holiday as written on his user page - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Curb_Safe_Charmer. Would you consider a "keep" vote in order to reach a consensus? Or, if other editors are interested, please chime in. When Curb_Safe_Charmer added this AfD he said it was "fixable", and I do believe his issues were addressed - removed promotional verbiage, currently appears to meet WP:GNG by restoring dead link citations and adding 3 new citations. Thank you.Parkertony (talk) 02:50, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Delete I would tag this as G11 in it's current state. I am not convinced on it's notability and think it fails WP:NCORP. — Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 12:35, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Frayae Could you please provide examples of why you would tag this as G11? What is not written in the neutral tone? WP:G11 states that it is better to replace content with text written from a neutral point of view than to delete the article. Why are you not convinced of notability? It has 5 references, including industry magazines and one from a well-known publisher, Time Out Magazine.Parkertony (talk) 12:52, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The entire article including the title is advertorial. If you replace the entire article then I may reconsider. Thanks. — Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 14:14, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The AfD section is meant for discussion purposes so editors can come to a consensus conclusion about whether or not to delete an article. Details do matter here and it would really be beneficial to editors and administrators if you can expand on your view that the article is not written in a neutral tone. Could you please provide some examples? Additionally, how do you conclude that the title, the actual name of the school, is advertorial? Requesting to replace the entire article is not constructive. Could other editors please provide input? Parkertony (talk) 14:28, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is entirely accurate. Your replacement article is at User:Frayae/sandbox/Easy Mandarin Chinese School. — Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 14:45, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The most significant difference in your replacement article appears to be the removal of the "overview" and "location/transportion" sections. Do you believe these sections are not written in a neutral tone? Please advise. I think the article would be better to keep those sections in order to provide readers with relevant content related to the organization. Perhaps we can work together to improve the original article rather than gutting it entirely. Appreciate your help and thank you for your input. Parkertony (talk) 15:18, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The location is noteworthy because Jingan Temple is a landmark.Parkertony (talk) 15:26, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Frayae I have an idea. Would you be okay keeping the original article if, instead of replacing with a new article called "Easy Mandarin Chinese School", we replace the original article content mentions of EasyMandarin Chinese School with just "EasyMandarin". We would take off the words "Chinese School" from the name for consistency with the title like the replacement article you prepared. The first line would read "EasyMandarin (simplified Chinese: 易在汉语; pinyin: Yì zài hànyǔ), also known as "Easy Mandarin", is a language school located in Shanghai, China." If I make this change and include all of your changes to the wording in the first section, would you be more comfortable with it? I want to run this by you before I make the edits. Thank you. Parkertony (talk) 16:15, 18 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Frayae Me again. Would really appreciate if you can help salvage the article. I submitted this article as a college assignment years ago after attending the school's summer program, and I made every effort to abide by the rules of Wikipedia - particularly to keep the neutral tone and not be promotional. I really don't want to see my one contribution to Wikipedia get deleted. Other editors have already made what I believe to be significant changes to the article in order to meet WP:NCORP. If you see any other changes or deletions that could help, would you please edit the article directly? Thank you. Parkertony (talk) 03:47, 20 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

DELETE - fails WP:NCORP. The article largely relies on reviews from Time Out Shanghai and The Beijinger. However, reviews in local newspapers do not constitute in-depth coverage. Many restaurants and other businesses are reviewed in major newspapers (just read the local sections of the New York Times or Washington Post), but that does not make them notable. -Zanhe (talk) 06:32, 19 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Zanhe The Beijinger reference is not a review. It is a reference to the school's online language proficiency tests. The article has 5 references. The two that you mentioned are more well-known, while the others are industry magazines as well as a news organization that covers China - GBTimes. Coverage is also fairly significant in the following reference http://web.archive.org/web/20110814181711/http://dk.radio86.com/livsstil-i-kina/6354/laer-kinesisk-i-shanghai Parkertony (talk) 07:07, 19 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

See Hutong_School. This article has similar content and references.Parkertony (talk) 07:12, 19 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Zanhe Again, The Beijinger reference is not a "review" as you wrote above. Have you actually viewed the references for this article? Kindly asking for you to provide more relevant and preferably actionable information so we can fix the article. Parkertony (talk) 02:50, 20 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

See The Beijinger reference here - https://www.thebeijinger.com/blog/2016/06/24/see-how-your-mandarin-measures-these-5-digital-proficiency-tests Parkertony (talk) 02:56, 20 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The Beijinger reference is basically a review of its website service. -Zanhe (talk) 06:06, 20 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Delete looks like it fails WP:NCORP to me. desmay (talk) 02:29, 20 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Desmay What aspect of the article do you believe appears to fail WP:NCORP? Could you please provide examples? The article has been edited quite a bit since the proposal for deletion, and several edits were specifically made to address the issues raised regarding NCORP.

Did you look at the article Hutong_School? This active article has similar content and references. Parkertony (talk) 02:50, 20 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]