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Is your username a reference to that Nintendo DS horror series? —017Bluefield (talk) 22:07, 8 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Oh, oka—wait a sec. I said it was a Nintendo DS series, not PlayStation Portable. ...Sorry. I can be like that sometimes. :/ —017Bluefield (talk) 03:07, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Please don't remove the ruby text tags. They're actually needed in reading, especially that the kanji in the original titles are read different than normal! - 上村七美 (Nanami-chan) | talkback | contribs 20:31, 11 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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although not explicitly stated) that if she became an excellent cook, he would become her boyfriend). She is also called {{Nihongo|"Ling"|鈴|Rin}} as a nickname by others, although in the English dub

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"Tasogare" is a Japanese word for dusk. If you're meaning by those subs that are found online as in "twilight", those are inaccurate and they simply just paste the Japanese words into Google Translate and the people who write them don't know Japanese. Because tasogare literally means dusk, it can be written as Dusk even if the dub hasn't aired. Cosmic Clone (talk) 13:17, 26 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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I need to talk to you about your edits. You are introducing grammatically incorrect errors into articles. I understand that you are trying to help but you need to stop doing this, or at the very least get someone to proof your edits going forward, because it's making a mess. --Tarage (talk) 21:31, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I replied on my talk page, but I'll reply here since it's easier for me to know you saw this. Let's go over your most recent addition: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=List_of_Miraculous:_Tales_of_Ladybug_%26_Cat_Noir_episodes&oldid=865119288

"It is Heroes' Day and the anniversary of heroic activities." - This sentence isn't wrong but... it seems redundant. I would expect it to look like "It is Heroes' Day, the anniversary of heroic activities."

"Meanwhile, Gabriel is tired of the times he failed to keep his promise, then his assistant Nathalie Sancoeur subjects they should proceed their master plan and target Lila to re-akumatize her." - Why meanwhile? You haven't established anything happening that would require a meanwhile. If you had talked about another character first, meanwhile would have been appropriate. In this case, it is not. The second part is also very awkward. I'd expect it to go like "While Gabriel is frustrated at his inability to keep his promises". The word 'then' doesn't make sense here. This is either a run-on sentence with the word 'Meanwhile' or it should be a different word. Perhaps just "his assistant Nathalie suggests they proceed with their plan to re-akumatize Lila". Subjects is not used how you used it there. In between 'proceed' and 'master plan' you are missing a word. I'm not sure 're-akumatize' is correct, as a simple google search shows that a better word would be 'evilized'. Please remember that just because a word is in Japanese doesn't mean it should stay that way. If there is a translation or localization available, use it.

"Simultaneously, Lila is broadcasting herself to Collège Françoise-Dupont about being invited by Prince Ali, except Marinette and Adrien are doubtful of this." - Simultaneously is the wrong word. Try something like "At the same time", though I would be fine with omitting it all together. You don't need a word at the start of every sentence to denote that things are happening in parallel. Tense issue: 'Lita is broadcasting' should be 'Lita broadcasts'. Also I'm not convinced 'broadcasting' is even the right word. Is she on the TV? Radio? Did you mean boasting? I don't have enough context to know, but I don't think broadcasting is the right word. Finally, is it even important that Marinette and Adrien don't think she's being truthful?

"While everyone is giving a speech of their good deeds, Marinette feels disappointed because she hasn't prepared hers yet and ends up lying to her entire class." - The first part is again incorrect. Every sentence doesn't need a 'while' or 'during'. I'll be brief on this one, since I can mostly tell what you were trying to say. See the fix below.

"Gabriel pays homage to Ladybug and literally arouses Lila's frustration to send her an akuma." - 'Arouses' is for sure not the right word. 'to send her an akuma' is not proper English. I'm guessing this is her evilizing again?

"With the return of Volpina, she creates an illusion inflicting Ladybug's reputation in order to gather negative energy, and then Hawk Moth retrieves the akuma and gives it to Nathalie transforming her into "Catalyst" who increases his reign with scarlet akumas to create his own army." - Way too verbose. 'inflicting' is not the right word. You keep using akuma.

"Overwhelmed by the akumaization of former villians, Ladybug immediately goes to Master Fu after de-evilizing Vanisher." - You're mixing akuma and evilize.

"She recruits Nino and Alya, despite revealing their identities and accepts it, and Cat Noir goes to Chloé." - The second part makes no sense. What does 'despite revealing their identities and accepts it' mean? Are Nino or Alya Cat Noir? This isn't clear.

"Hawk Moth makes his very first stand at the Eiffel Tower, while the five heroes: Ladybug, Cat Noir, Rena Rouge, Carapace, and Queen Bee are on the lookout waiting for a strategy." - 'very first stand' isn't a thing. Do you mean last stand? What does 'on the lookout' even mean here?

Here is how I would fix your edit:

It is Heroes' Day, the anniversary of heroic activities. Gabriel is frustrated at his inability to keep his promises, his assistant Nathalie suggests they proceed with their plan to re-evilize Lila. During speeches at Collège Françoise-Dupont, students talk about their good deeds. Lita boasts about bring invited to Prince Ali, but Marinette and Adrien express doubts. Marinette was unable to finish her speech and ends up lying to her class. Gabriel pays homage to Ladybug which causes Lita to evilize out of frustration. As Volpina, she creates an illusion tarnishing Ladybug's reputation in order to gather negative energy, which Hawk Moth uses to transform Nathalie into "Catalyst". He starts building an army. Overwhelmed by the return of the former villians, Ladybug de-evilizes Vanisher and retreats back to to Master Fu. SHe recruits Nino and Alya despite figuring out their true identities and they accept, with Cat Noir heading to Chloé. Hawk Moth gathers his army at the Eiffel Tower while the five heroes watch and wait for a chance to turn the tables.

Now granted, I'm just making guesses based on what you wrote. It's quite possible that my summary is wrong. That's the problem. What you posted is so full of errors that even I don't know what's going on. And this is just ONE edit. If it took me this long to work on just this one, imagine how much work it's going to be to fix all of them? I understand you are trying to help, but... you're creating more work for people than you are helping with summaries like the above. My grammar is far from perfect, but this is just a complete mess. I don't know what else to say. Do you understand? --Tarage (talk) 20:35, 22 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]