Talk:Abortion in Venezuela

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Natsz72 (article contribs).

Proposal for Improvement

I plan on improving this article by adding sections including history of the abortion policies in Venezuela, movements for access to abortion, and exceptions to the law. I want to expand the article and its sources to cover most of the relevant information about abortion in Venezuela in greater depth. My plans in greater depth can be found on my user page, complete with references i plan to use in this article. Natsz72 (talk) 02:59, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Update Proposal for Improvement

Please refer to my sandbox User:Nats72/Sandbox for a more detailed proposal of my expansion on this page. It highlights the sections I will b e including, such as Hugo Chavez's rule, International Influence, and Religion in Venezuela. Natsz72 (talk) 01:17, 26 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Evaluation 1

Hi! I really enjoyed reading the article and the changes you have made! I thought you did a great job defining abortion, both generally and how it relates to Venezuela. I liked how you took a neutral tone throughout the article. I think your lead could be strengthened. I recommend you reword your first sentence and add some citations into your lead section. There are also some other sections that could use a citation. Additionally, I think it would be beneficial to add more information about abortion in your "Government & Economy" section. This will allow other readers to fully understand the influence and impact of the government on abortion in Venezuela. Lastly, there are a couple small errors, such as fixing "World War 1" to "World War I" and defining PDVSA, that can be easily fixed. Overall, I think the most important thing you could do to improve this article is to add more Venezuela-specific information to some of your sections. However, that being said, I know there is not a large number of scholarly sources out there on this topic. Great job and I look forward to reading the final product! Mlb13 (talk) 21:05, 23 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]