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Draft:Global Wireless Solutions

Hi,

I submitted the draft for the Global Wireless Solutions wikipedia page, and have seen your comments. Before the Global Wireless Solutions Wikipedia page was taken down, I was working to make it an entirely encyclopedic page void of any advertising language. In this draft for the page, I worked more to remove any promotional wording or content and make it completely encyclopedic. I would greatly appreciate any feedback as to where specifically the draft can be improved. As I said, my aim is to remove all advertising language and have the page meet the Wikipedia standards.

In regards to your second point about the significance of the subject - Global Wireless Solutions has been widely regarded as the leading benchmarker in the telecommunications industry. Global Wireless Solutions is the oldest and largest wireless network benchmarking firm and has been covered hundreds, if not thousands, of times in press articles. Other firms in the industry, with far less press coverage, have Wikipedia pages (e.g. RootMetrics, OpenSignal)). How can this point be resolved appropriately in a new draft? Would more sources/footnotes suffice?

Thank you, Scwiki3 (talk) 23:57, 1 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Scwiki3: The article is strongly promotional and resembles a sales brochure, especially the section: Draft:Global Wireless Solutions#Products and services. Beyond that, the company is not yet notable: the sources are directory listings, in passing, routine notices and / or self-promotional. You are welcome to ask for a second opinion at Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk. Please link this discussion if you do. K.e.coffman (talk) 00:20, 2 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Panzer Aces (book series)

Hello:

The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editor of the article Panzer Aces (book series) has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 19:49, 31 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Twofingered Typist: thank you; I appreciate it. --K.e.coffman (talk) 00:22, 2 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you ...

... for article quality improvements in October! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:20, 1 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Gerda Arendt: Thank you; I appreciate it. --K.e.coffman (talk) 00:22, 2 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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