User talk:Bcraney
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[edit]Hello, Bcraney, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:38, 12 March 2019 (UTC)
Grace's Peer Review
[edit]There is some information that could still be added to the article, however I think this is a great start. If you can find a source for it, it might be good to go more in depth about certain parts of the documentary. I think it might be beneficial to use the documentary as the subject of the article instead of the person who created it (instead of saying that Garcia does something, just say "the film")? I would also avoid words such as "powerful," because those may come across as somewhat biased. I think the source you used was a great source! Great job so far!