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I know that my English is perhaps very bad; but I tried to add some summaries for the episodes. The summaries I made are a bit longer and are explanatory. But then ElijahPepe changed everything, and now in the episode one it say that Miles decides to undergo cloning, which is a lie, since he didn't even know what was going to happen to him. So which one is more understandable, this (ElijahPepe) or this (Bradford)? In addition the summary of episode two is also not very clear, and it really is not what happens throughout the episode.-- Bradford ✉ 21:06, 19 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Bradford: Your version reads more of a summary, however, they should be shorten a bit as they are way too long. ElijahPepe's version reads like loglines, not much of summaries. — YoungForever^(talk) 23:13, 19 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Bradford: You wrote a fucking thesis paper on those summaries. 100 - 200 words is necessary enough. It's a brief summary, you can change the undergoing cloning part, but don't make it sound like "And then (whatever happens to him). And then". It reeked of grammatical errors and there should be no furries on a show I enjoy. "Purrrrfect"? You make the show sound super specific, down to the details of the office building. My new edits are a little short, but can be slightly expanded and contain *basic* information for a reader to pick up. I'm not reading through your other one, because it's just too long. Don't write in English if it's not good. It makes my job harder and people who read the article and speak English fluently are going to have a hard time. ElijahPepe (talk) 13:41, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

They are details that can be improved, but changing everything to place lies, they make no sense. In addition, YoungForever placed a template so that it can be summarized a little more. I had planned to continue adding summaries for the rest of the episodes, but I'm not used to summarizing.-- Bradford ✉ 13:54, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

If my "bad English" bothers you so much, then it is better not to place any summary. And leave the episode list as it was before, without any summary for the episodes, because you are affirming that in episode 1 Miles decides to undergo a process of DNA cloning, but that is a lie, because he did not know that that would happen.-- Bradford ✉ 13:59, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You're fixating on this "lie" thing too much. Jesus Christ, it was one fucking mistake. Stop being a perfectionist to fit your agenda. ElijahPepe (talk) 18:46, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Is that all you have to say? This is how to pretend to reach an agreement?-- Bradford (Talk) 18:57, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Is that what I was intending? No, I didn't say that, and I didn't want to mean that. All you care about is that one mistake because it helps your cause. ElijahPepe (talk) 23:06, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Either Tinybirdie (talk) 22:10, 23 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]