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Your submission at Articles for creation: Advocate Vishnu Narahari Khodke (July 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Eternal Shadow was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Eternal Shadow Talk 18:49, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Bristol prince! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Eternal Shadow Talk 18:49, 28 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Advocate Vishnu Narahari Khodke (July 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Eagleash was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The submission as it stands will not be accepted into the encyclopedia. Please review the manual of style and WP:MOSHEAD. Also, a read of the guide to article creation might be of benefit. Wikipedia requires in-depth coverage in multiple independent, reliable sources, with citations placed inline per the guidelines at WP:REFB. Bolding and unnecessary italics need to be removed from the text.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Eagleash (talk) 11:25, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Advocate Vishnu Narahari Khodke (August 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Nathan2055 were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Nathan2055^{talk - contribs} 22:43, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Advocate Vishnu Narahari Khodke has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Advocate Vishnu Narahari Khodke. Thanks! Fiddle Faddle 22:49, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks,I read your reply.it seems your reason for declining my submission is reliability of my given references.but I think you can reconsider the two prominent reference sources I have, 1) The book Who's Who and 2) the book Dr.Ambedkar wrings and speeches is published by Government of Maharashtra. These can be reliable and trustworthy because book who's who was highly reputed book in India in period of British Raj and supposed to be as genuine as any publication by British government.so I think it can be reliable and trustworthy. Second reference is a book about Dr. Ambedkar,it is not any private publication but it is published by a Government of Maharashtra itself,so can be taken as genuine and trustworthy reference. So request you to reconsider. Thanking you.

Bristol prince (talk) 11:03, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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I also observed that the book who's who,which o added as reference is considered as trustworthy reference in some other Wikipedia pages of biological information.so request you to reconsider my submission. Bristol prince (talk) 11:21, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]