Talk:Caltech–MIT rivalry/GA1

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Reviewer: Keilana (talk · contribs) 22:44, 21 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll start reviewing very soon. Keilana|^{Parlez ici} 22:44, 21 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I think this is pretty close but I have a few comments before we get there.

In the first section, you mention "RFs", is that an acronym? I checked the source and it didn't clarify.
- I'd had some trouble finding a reliable source for that, but I found one and added the information.
The first paragraph about MIT in "The schools" is choppy.
- Fixed.
I'm personally not a huge fan of bulleted lists in articles, if there's a way you could prosify the list of pranks I think it would be better for the reader. I'm open to both, just wanted to bring it up.
- Being that there are five independent sets of pranks, I felt that this format is easier for the reader to follow.
Is there a source for the Campus Preview Weekend section that is not affiliated with either school?
- The cannon heist got much more press coverage, some of which mentions the earlier pranks in passing, such as this article. I haven't found any standalone articles about it.
Why is Ride of the Valkyries forbidden at Caltech?
- Info added.
The second paragraph on the Fleming cannon has a duplicate citation; it just needs the one at the end of the paragraph, I think.
- Yeah, whoever reviewed this for DYK made me put it there. :-)
I spot-checked for close paraphrasing and it looked fine.

That's all I have for now, you did a great job on this article. Best, Keilana|^{Parlez ici} 14:06, 12 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments above, everything should be fixed. Antony–22 (^talk⁄_contribs) 04:17, 16 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry it took me so long to take a second look! It looks good and I'm going to go ahead and pass it. Great work. Keilana|^{Parlez ici} 13:54, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]