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Reviewer: North8000 (talk · contribs) 23:07, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am starting a review of this article. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 23:07, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review comments

If it's hard to do, the current 1 image would be OK, but would it be feasible to add another image? North8000 (talk) 23:11, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

In various places it uses wording/ unexplained terms in ways that presumes that the readers already know the material. I will try to point out example but a review in this areas would be good. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 23:19, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Upon closer reading, a bit of an issue, but minor, and not enough to affect the review. North8000 (talk) 13:12, 25 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Final GA criteria checklist

Well-written

Meets this criteria.North8000 (talk) 21:50, 29 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Factually accurate and verifiable

Meets this criteria. Suggestion: the two "bibliography" items were not cited in the article. Suggest using them in that way. North8000 (talk) 15:11, 29 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Broad in its coverage

Meets this criteria, considering that its subject matter is an album. North8000 (talk) 21:51, 29 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias, giving due weight to each

Meets this criteria. North8000 (talk) 21:51, 29 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute

Meets this criteria. North8000 (talk) 21:59, 29 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Illustrated, if possible, by images

Meets this criteria. Has two images; the one non-free image has an article-specific use rationale. North8000 (talk) 21:58, 29 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This article passe Good Article! Congratulations! I will implement the details shortly. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 22:00, 29 December 2012 (UTC) Reviewer[reply]