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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 11:49, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Move the short description to the top of the article (MOS:ORDER)
  • Add alt text to every image in the article (MOS:ALT).
  • "¥100 million (roughly $275,000)" – $275,000 now or in 1954?
  • Actually, the template JPY should be used to calculate inflation.
  • Add a hyphen between "longest running" (American English).
  • The plot section is 693 words so it passes MOS:FILMPLOT.
  • MOS:DUPLINK: radiation sickness, Daigo Fukuryū Maru, King Kong (1933 film), Eiji Tsuburaya, Akira Ifukube, Godzilla, King of the Monsters! , and Godzilla (2014 film).
  • When referring to the film, please use "film" or its title instead of "movie".
  • The word "stated" is used a lot and becomes repetitive. Replace some of its uses with "said".
  • "Mori approved the project in April 1954" – the cited source does not mention this.
  • "written three years prior" – prior to what? Please specify.
  • #Music does not cite any references.
  • "A week later, it was released nationwide on November 3, 1954." – is "a week later" necessary?
  • Per WP:FILMBOXOFFICE, avoid terminology such as "in the West".
  • Be consistent with Godzilla, King of the Monsters and Godzilla, King of the Monsters!.
  • Resolve the "citation needed" issue in #Reception.
  • Wikilink Owen Gleiberman, Peter Bradshaw, Desson Thomson, and Mick LaSalle.
  • Is the accolades table necessary? The information can easily be converted into prose.
  • Make sure all sources are properly cited with dates, authors, website names, and access dates.
  • That's all I could find in my review. Great work on the article. Thumbs up icon Ping me when you reply.
@Some Dude From North Carolina: hey there! I added all the requirements above. I also added a Marketing section and added more content on the Music section, now titled "Music and Sound effects". I hope they meet GA standards. Armegon (talk) 00:31, 9 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed