Talk:Hussein, Crown Prince of Jordan/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
2
2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (13.8% is highest)
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
5
5.a Y
6
6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

According to Hussein, he is a 42nd-generation direct descendant of Muhammad as he belongs to the Hashemite family, who have ruled Jordan since 1921. suggest you change this Hussein is a 42nd-generation direct descendant of Muhammad, as he belongs to the Hashemite family, who have ruled Jordan since 1921. (I believe the descent is widely accepted fact)

Early life and Education

Hussein says he is the 42nd direct descendant of Muhammad through his daughter suggest Hussein is the 42nd direct descendant of Muhammad through his daughter
are the second-oldest-ruling dynasty in the world after the Imperial House of Japan. suggest and are the second-oldest ruling dynasty in the world, after the Imperial House of Japan.
@Makeandtoss: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:35, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]