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The chief concern with this article may be the numerous grammatical errors and incomplete and confusing sentences. It appears to be a partial English translation. Is there someone who can locate the original text and create a more complete translation with a more clear narrative structure?

Deleting the last section.

The last section of the article seems unnecessary at best, and utterly incomprehensible at its worst. I think it should be deleted, especially because it doesn't have any sources to back it up. For now, I'm going to leave it up while I look for a reliable source that I can use to edit it but to be honest, I don't think it's salvageable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TromboneCarrot (talkcontribs) 19:28, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

need help

Should we add a section for media featuring Takaonna? RemiruPlushie (talk) 18:08, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]