Talk:United Arab Emirates/GA2

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GA Review

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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 02:59, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will do it shortly! TheSpecialUser ^TSU 02:59, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Quick-Fail: Here are just few points that make this article appear nowhere near a GA.

Lead- pretty bad. Not only poorly written, I'm not getting a flow and things just seem to come up one after another. It needs a re-write.
Sources- Large number of them won't considered as WP:RS by me.
Ref need- Many facts need ref.
Prose- It is not good enough and needs copyediting.
Neutrality- There exists few peacock terms and some lines doesn't make me comfortable as they need to be written from a NPOV.
Odd note with no ref
See also section has too many extra things
The article is full with maintenance tags and many are needed.

TheSpecialUser ^TSU 15:31, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]