User talk:Flat Out

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DEAN GOULD

GIVE ME A CHANCE TO REVIEW, I'VE NOT BEEN ON WIKIPEDIA. 67.86.28.112 (talk) 00:55, 9 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure why you have engaged me on this article, but it needs a lot of work. It appears the subject holds, or has held, world records that were verified by Guinness and therefore would meet the standard of notability. Please see the comments I have left on the article's talk page. Best wishes Flat Out (talk) 05:05, 17 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Edward Little (Royal Navy officer)

I understand your issues with the sources in the first paragraph and I'll look more into it. The source that mentions Little and Franklin meeting is the fourth one and the entire meeting is explained in the article that's cited. Otherwise thank you for your input. TomuKdoNasMaRad (talk) 06:07, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft Ferintosh Distillery

Thank you for taking the time to read my submission on Ferintosh Distillery. I believe the uncertainty in the archaeological paper refers to the exact location of the distillery, not whether it existed. I was able to find three other places in Scotland called Ferintosh, or variations thereof, but the description in the Act of Parliament (reproduced in facsimile at https://www.clan-forbes.org/culloden) confirms that production centred on Forbes' estates on the Black Isle. I wonder, would it help if I referenced specific pages within the books I cite? (I just found a full text link to the first book as well, but it does not look like an 'official' website https://www.akel.co.uk/work/books/Whisky.pdf). I am grateful for any advice you can offer to help me make my draft suitable for inclusion on Wikipedia. Donaldpayne (talk) 15:04, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I spent a bit more time on this, and the book you added was most helpful. I have cut out wikitable as unnecessary and can be found at the source cited, and have simplified some of the wording to make it more direct. All of the content I deleted/changed is still there n the previous versions and you can revisit those if you wish. Well done, I found the article very interesting. Flat Out (talk)