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Euphoria Festival

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I've listed this article for peer review because…

This article has not yet been edited by anyone other than the author. I believe the content is sufficient and valid, but it could use a second opinion!

Thanks, Hkkelly (talk) 23:46, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the late review User:Hkkelly. There were some issues about this article that motivated me to write:

First of all, avoid Carson Creek Ranch's reference and move it to external links.
Secondly, add refrences to every section. You might also remove the reference from the lead per WP:Lead
Lastly, this might be the most difficult but can you create an "origins section"?

Other than that, I think the article could become a GA once its issues are solved. Good luck. Also, if you have free time, could you check my own peer review? Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 14:18, 8 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]