User contributions for 18.81.6.205

28 July 2015

• 19:0019:00, 28 July 2015 diff hist 0 Abraham Lincoln: The Head of State Correct typo -- "Guadens" for "Gaudens"

1 April 2015

• 20:0020:00, 1 April 2015 diff hist +11 Vine (service) Fixed dangling participle at beginning of second sentence

18 November 2014

• 20:4920:49, 18 November 2014 diff hist +8 Red Right 88 →The Play
• 20:4720:47, 18 November 2014 diff hist +1 Red Right 88 →The Play: Added close comma around parenthetical remark

16 October 2014

• 14:0314:03, 16 October 2014 diff hist 0 Information-theoretic security inserted missing hyphen
• 14:0314:03, 16 October 2014 diff hist +1 Information-theoretic security Inserted missing comma
• 13:5413:54, 16 October 2014 diff hist +4 Mark Udall →Finance: Fixed em-dashes

19 June 2014

• 16:4316:43, 19 June 2014 diff hist −718 Martin Amis →Political opinions: Cut reference to "The Age of Horrorism", which claimed that Amis "criticized" Arab countries for lack of economic development and offered no other evidence of a "political opinion"
• 16:3216:32, 19 June 2014 diff hist +4 Martin Amis →2000s
• 16:3116:31, 19 June 2014 diff hist +17 Martin Amis →2000s
• 16:2716:27, 19 June 2014 diff hist +5 Martin Amis →2000s
• 16:2516:25, 19 June 2014 diff hist −4 Yellow Dog (novel) Fixed false simile between a novel and a setting
• 16:2416:24, 19 June 2014 diff hist −14 Martin Amis →2000s: Fixed dangling modifier in description of Amis's attack on Hitchens, general copyediting

1 May 2014

• 14:2614:26, 1 May 2014 diff hist +1 George M. Ferris Jr. →Early life
• 14:2514:25, 1 May 2014 diff hist −11 George M. Ferris Jr. →Early life

6 March 2014

• 21:2921:29, 6 March 2014 diff hist 0 Gregg Popovich Removed stray comma

14 November 2013

• 17:0817:08, 14 November 2013 diff hist +6 Green Onions No edit summary
• 17:0717:07, 14 November 2013 diff hist −7 Green Onions Fixed run-on sentence, other copyediting
• 16:2016:20, 14 November 2013 diff hist +2 Stax Records Fixed dangling participle in first sentence

9 September 2013

• 16:4216:42, 9 September 2013 diff hist +6 The Spy Who Came in from the Cold →Plot: Removed spurious comma between subject and predicate Tag: Visual edit

9 July 2013

• 18:3218:32, 9 July 2013 diff hist −1 Theodor W. Adorno →Music: Removed spurious comma before restrictive appositive
• 13:3413:34, 9 July 2013 diff hist +2 J. C. R. Licklider →Information technology: Fixed faulty parallelism in sentence beginning "Much like Vannevar ... "

24 June 2013

• 13:5913:59, 24 June 2013 diff hist +1 Assia Wevill →Ted Hughes

17 June 2013

• 12:5712:57, 17 June 2013 diff hist −198 Natty Bumppo →Fictional biography

12 June 2013

• 15:2615:26, 12 June 2013 diff hist −15 James Wood (critic) →Background and education

10 June 2013

• 16:5316:53, 10 June 2013 diff hist 0 2666 Undid revision 559253958 by 18.81.6.205 (talk)
• 16:5216:52, 10 June 2013 diff hist 0 2666 No edit summary

3 June 2013

• 14:4514:45, 3 June 2013 diff hist −47 Paul Quarrington No edit summary
• 14:4314:43, 3 June 2013 diff hist +11 Paul Quarrington No edit summary
• 14:3914:39, 3 June 2013 diff hist +3 Paul Quarrington No edit summary

23 April 2013

• 19:0719:07, 23 April 2013 diff hist −1 Comme d'habitude →Adaptations
• 19:0719:07, 23 April 2013 diff hist +2 Comme d'habitude →Adaptations
• 19:0619:06, 23 April 2013 diff hist −151 Comme d'habitude →Adaptations
• 19:0319:03, 23 April 2013 diff hist +30 Comme d'habitude →Adaptations
• 19:0219:02, 23 April 2013 diff hist +22 Comme d'habitude →Adaptations
• 18:5918:59, 23 April 2013 diff hist +47 Comme d'habitude →Adaptations

1 April 2013

• 13:2013:20, 1 April 2013 diff hist +12 Will Middlebrooks Fixed dangling modifier ("Originally a shortstop, the Red Sox ... ")

25 March 2013

• 19:4619:46, 25 March 2013 diff hist −1 Persuasion (novel) →Plot summary: Removed "bucolic" as an adjective for a human being

13 February 2013

• 14:4914:49, 13 February 2013 diff hist +3 Pantheon, Rome Changed AD to C.E.

6 February 2013

• 19:5819:58, 6 February 2013 diff hist 0 RSA (cryptosystem) →A working example: Hyphenate compound adjective ("real-life")

5 February 2013

• 18:1318:13, 5 February 2013 diff hist +249 Talk:Robert Christgau →Can the Jody Rosen ID be moved to first mention?: new section
• 15:4515:45, 5 February 2013 diff hist −2 C-3PO →Behind the scenes: Copyedited last sentence

30 January 2013

• 20:2320:23, 30 January 2013 diff hist +55 Danny Gatton Danny was not 63rd on the RS list (Edgar Winter was)! He was 63rd on David Fricke's list.

16 November 2012

• 19:0219:02, 16 November 2012 diff hist +45 Jimmy Webb →Honors and awards

4 October 2012

• 13:1813:18, 4 October 2012 diff hist +17 Habibi (graphic novel) →Publication history: Corrected dangling modifier

22 August 2012

• 14:5814:58, 22 August 2012 diff hist +37 Steller's sea cow Fixed dangling modifier in second sentence ("Although once abundant ..., its range was limited": its range was not once abundant; the sea cow itself was)

10 August 2012

• 13:1813:18, 10 August 2012 diff hist −25 All's Well That Ends Well →Synopsis

8 August 2012

• 13:1513:15, 8 August 2012 diff hist +1 Leryn Franco No edit summary

26 July 2012

• 18:4818:48, 26 July 2012 diff hist −4 The Blues Project No edit summary
• 18:4518:45, 26 July 2012 diff hist +4 The Blues Project Corrected spelling of Don Kretchmar's name