User contributions for Jplennon

17 October 2024

• 19:3019:30, 17 October 2024 diff hist +5 m James Buchanan Eads fixed grammar and capitalization Tag: Visual edit

2 October 2024

• 20:0120:01, 2 October 2024 diff hist +18 m Pirate Party a few grammar edits Tag: Visual edit

15 July 2024

• 11:5611:56, 15 July 2024 diff hist +2,466 N User:Jplennon/Brno Dragon Created by translating the page "Brněnský drak" current Tags: ContentTranslation ContentTranslation2
• 11:2111:21, 15 July 2024 diff hist +18 m Brno Changed "the local baseball team" to "one of the local baseball teams", since the Draci are just one of 3 Brno baseball teams in the top Czech league. Made a few other minor changes to this section for clarity. Tag: Visual edit

19 January 2024

• 07:4707:47, 19 January 2024 diff hist +4 m Erté added the apparently missing word "set" Tag: Visual edit

28 December 2023

• 14:5714:57, 28 December 2023 diff hist +32 m Petrosomatoglyph added larger geographical context (country names) to some of the locations mentioned, since these were not always clear Tag: Visual edit

27 December 2023

• 10:2410:24, 27 December 2023 diff hist +2 m Cheating in chess added missing apostrophe s Tag: Visual edit

1 December 2023

• 14:1914:19, 1 December 2023 diff hist −5 m Mount Monadnock removed a redundant word in photo caption Tag: Visual edit

21 November 2023

• 18:5818:58, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0 m Godzilla vs. King Ghidorah grammar edit Tag: Visual edit

29 October 2023

• 21:0021:00, 29 October 2023 diff hist −22 m Miroslav Macháček proofreading and paragraphing Tag: Visual edit
• 20:5020:50, 29 October 2023 diff hist −167 m Miroslav Macháček proofreading Tag: Visual edit

6 September 2023

• 08:5308:53, 6 September 2023 diff hist +29 m Robert Fico Rewrote the last sentences of the intro; the original was confusing due to unnatural syntax. Tag: Visual edit

28 August 2023

• 10:4410:44, 28 August 2023 diff hist +48 m Anaxagoras Corrected punctuation errors and potentially confusing syntax Tag: Visual edit

27 August 2023

• 08:3908:39, 27 August 2023 diff hist +13 m Esther Williams Changed some awkward wording and took out incorrect commas Tag: Visual edit

20 August 2023

• 15:2015:20, 20 August 2023 diff hist +23 Keywords: A Vocabulary of Culture and Society Changed the section title to accurately reflect the content of the section Tag: Visual edit
• 14:4114:41, 20 August 2023 diff hist +9 m Oxbow lake added the name "Missouri" so that the sentence is more informative Tag: Visual edit

17 August 2023

• 14:5414:54, 17 August 2023 diff hist −8 m Hainish Cycle took a couple of words/phrases out of italics, since italics in these cases is unnecessary/inappropriate. Tag: Visual edit

3 August 2023

• 23:4623:46, 3 August 2023 diff hist +34 m Vincent (1982 film) I replaced the phrase "poetry story," which is not a typical way to describe narrative poetry, with the more precise phrase "the story, told in rhyming verse." Also made one other small edit for grammar and clarity. Tag: Visual edit

19 July 2023

• 09:3209:32, 19 July 2023 diff hist −184 m Long Walk of the Navajo Edited several sentences to reduce redundant words, and make the tone more factual and encyclopedic. Also took out the claim that the walk was 400 miles long, since this contradicts a later figure in the article and other figures found in the sources, most of which claim it was about 300 miles. Tag: Visual edit

13 July 2023

• 20:3020:30, 13 July 2023 diff hist +97 m Pat & Mat Grammar edits in one paragraph. Also added a parenthetical comment to logically connect an idea in the edited paragraph with information given later in the article Tag: Visual edit

11 May 2023

• 06:5506:55, 11 May 2023 diff hist −8 m Illinois River added space between words Tag: Visual edit
• 06:5406:54, 11 May 2023 diff hist +5 m Illinois River proofreading, mainly punctuation Tags: nowiki added Visual edit

5 May 2023

• 08:4208:42, 5 May 2023 diff hist +13 m Æsir Correcting run-on sentence and some punctuation Tags: Reverted Visual edit

8 April 2023

• 17:1517:15, 8 April 2023 diff hist −170 m Jocelyn Bell Burnell Deleted an accidentally repeated line with a quotation from Bell Tag: Visual edit

2 April 2023

• 14:1214:12, 2 April 2023 diff hist +519 Talk:Armenian genocide →"This genocide put an end to more than two thousand years of Armenian civilization.": new section Tag: New topic

28 March 2023

• 08:1808:18, 28 March 2023 diff hist +26 m Armenian alphabet small grammar edits; one sentence broken into two for easier reading Tag: Visual edit

25 February 2023

• 09:5709:57, 25 February 2023 diff hist −4 m Vail Pass deleted incorrect "the" Tag: Visual edit

16 February 2023

• 20:4420:44, 16 February 2023 diff hist +42 m Rudolf Firkušný small grammar edits Tag: Visual edit

1 February 2023

• 10:4110:41, 1 February 2023 diff hist −4 m Ludvík Kundera deleted incorrect 'the' Tag: Visual edit
• 10:4010:40, 1 February 2023 diff hist −3 m Ludvík Kundera Grammar edits, mainly adding/deleting articles Tag: Visual edit

22 January 2023

• 16:1916:19, 22 January 2023 diff hist +60 m New Belgrade Grammar proofreading Tag: Visual edit

20 January 2023

• 21:1321:13, 20 January 2023 diff hist +52 Jeanne Dielman, 23 quai du Commerce, 1080 Bruxelles corrected some inaccurate phrasing and misleading description Tag: Visual edit
• 18:0918:09, 20 January 2023 diff hist −77 m Mickledore I combined two repetitive passages into one Tag: Visual edit

17 January 2023

• 23:0023:00, 17 January 2023 diff hist −8 m Johnny Hallyday cut unnecessary/confusing punctuation Tag: Visual edit

3 January 2023

• 22:5722:57, 3 January 2023 diff hist −90 m Shijiazhuang deleted a typo (repeated words) and rewrote one nonsensical sentence Tag: Visual edit

20 December 2022

• 18:0118:01, 20 December 2022 diff hist +12 m David Ury adding some missing words and fixed grammar Tag: Visual edit

13 November 2022

• 22:1522:15, 13 November 2022 diff hist +16 m Galileo's Daughter Fixed a broken link Tag: Visual edit

8 September 2022

• 21:0021:00, 8 September 2022 diff hist +4 m Edwardian era added missing "and" Tag: Visual edit

22 August 2022

• 14:0114:01, 22 August 2022 diff hist +1 m Castile and León clarifying one sentence

19 August 2022

• 11:3911:39, 19 August 2022 diff hist +73 m Zrní editing references
• 11:3711:37, 19 August 2022 diff hist +27 m Zrní editing reference
• 11:2911:29, 19 August 2022 diff hist +444 Zrní Adding references and correcting an inaccuracy
• 11:1211:12, 19 August 2022 diff hist +8 m Zrní edited for grammar and accuracy Tag: Visual edit

11 August 2022

• 03:3603:36, 11 August 2022 diff hist +4 m H Street (Washington, D.C.) grammar fix - added "the" Tag: Visual edit

22 July 2022

• 06:5606:56, 22 July 2022 diff hist +3 m Midnight Train to Georgia changed punctuation in one sentence - eliminated unnecessary and non-standard quotation marks, added parentheses for clarity Tag: Visual edit

9 July 2022

• 12:4412:44, 9 July 2022 diff hist +7 m Dutch East India Company sentence clarity Tag: Visual edit

23 June 2022

• 18:3818:38, 23 June 2022 diff hist −265 m Wu Guanzhong edited for cohesion and encyclopedic style Tag: Visual edit

2 May 2022

• 21:3321:33, 2 May 2022 diff hist 0 m Mount Usborne moved some sentences so that similar ideas go together Tag: Visual edit

22 April 2022

• 07:4507:45, 22 April 2022 diff hist −4 m Imaret changed sentence order so that "these three capitals" has a clear referent in the previous sentence Tag: Visual edit

11 April 2022

• 13:0313:03, 11 April 2022 diff hist +48 True crime The previous first sentence seemed incomplete / too general. I have changed it to make it clear that the people referred to are involved somehow in the criminal events. Tag: Visual edit