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Ramesses Khalfani (born September 24, 1989) is a Nigerian-American professional basketball player, fitness trainer, and entrepreneur. Khalfani has played for several professional teams and has made significant contributions to fitness and player development.

Early Life and Education

Khalfani was born in Lagos, Nigeria, and later moved to the United States, where he attended Thomasville High School in Thomasville, Georgia. He quickly gained recognition as a 4-star basketball recruit.

College Basketball Career

Khalfani played Division I basketball at Florida A&M University.

Professional Basketball Career

After college, Khalfani pursued a professional basketball career, playing for several teams, including:

• Atlanta Hawks (NBA) • Sacramento Kings (NBA) • Teams in international leagues, including those in Israel, China, and Mexico.

Fitness and Training Career

In addition to his basketball career, Khalfani is an entrepreneur and fitness trainer. He is the founder of the first mobile fitness company, which aims to make fitness accessible to a broader audience. Khalfani is also the owner and a trainer at Pinnacle Sports Academy, where he specializes in both fitness training and basketball coaching.

Personal Life

Khalfani is passionate about mentoring young athletes and promoting a healthy lifestyle. He resides in Windermere, Florida, where he continues to work with aspiring basketball players and fitness enthusiasts.

Awards and Recognition

Khalfani has received several accolades throughout his basketball career, including:

All-MEAC First Team (Year) MEAC Player of the Week (multiple times during his college career) High School All-American Honorable Mention (Year)

References

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[1] "Ramesses Khalfani: The Trailblazing Lifestyle Coach and Business Consultant | MADISON NEW YORK".

[2] "Ramesses Khalfani to Coach Poinciana Eagles Basketball | the Hudson Weekly". 18 August 2023.

[3] "Mastering the Art of Shooting: Insights from Ramesses Khalfani | the Hudson Weekly". 24 August 2023.

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