User contributions for 103.178.42.233

29 July 2023

• 13:2913:29, 29 July 2023 diff hist +10 1997 Major League Baseball season Subject-verb agreement Tag: Reverted
• 13:1613:16, 29 July 2023 diff hist −1,050 1997 World Series No source for the Marlins being underdogs. A run does not "nullify" a run by the other team. Removing redundancy and awkwardness. Marlins' fire sale didn't all happen in one day. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 13:1413:14, 29 July 2023 diff hist −86 Das Fürlines The cited source doesn't mention Fish and Roses, and doesn't mention Smith by name. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 13:1313:13, 29 July 2023 diff hist −14 Cannock Chase murders Subject-verb agreement. "overheard, then observed" sounds odd in context Tags: Undo Reverted

28 July 2023

• 18:0918:09, 28 July 2023 diff hist +290 Talk:Molly White (writer) →Current number of edits: new section Tag: New topic
• 13:4313:43, 28 July 2023 diff hist +8 Wikipedia:Increase your chances →... but you don't think the citation supports the claim Tag: Reverted
• 13:4013:40, 28 July 2023 diff hist +589 Wikipedia:Increase your chances Adding nutshell. Removing first-person voice, which is left over from when this was a userspace essay. Fixing bad grammar and awkward phrasing. Improving recently added section on what to do when the citation may not actually support the claim. Better explaining lead sections, which no longer appear above the table of contents. Tweaking the beginning to "How to suggest the change", since it is noted above that it shouldn't always be taken straight to the article talk page. Tag: Reverted
• 01:0101:01, 28 July 2023 diff hist −116 2000 World Series →New York Yankees: It appears that their winning percentage in 1995 was slightly higher than in 2000 Tag: Reverted

27 July 2023

• 14:4114:41, 27 July 2023 diff hist −25 1994 World Series The World Series pretty much didn't exist before then Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 14:3914:39, 27 July 2023 diff hist −14 1995 American League Division Series It wasn't "taken away from them" Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 14:2414:24, 27 July 2023 diff hist −1,050 1997 World Series No source for the Marlins being underdogs. A run does not "nullify" a run by the other team. Removing redundancy and awkwardness. Marlins' fire sale didn't all happen in one day. Tag: Reverted
• 12:5812:58, 27 July 2023 diff hist −14 Cannock Chase murders Subject-verb agreement. "overheard, then observed" sounds odd in context Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 12:5612:56, 27 July 2023 diff hist −86 Das Fürlines The cited source doesn't mention Fish and Roses, and doesn't mention Smith by name. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 05:3105:31, 27 July 2023 diff hist −2 Male genital examination Unneeded spaces Tag: Reverted
• 05:1605:16, 27 July 2023 diff hist +461 Wikipedia:Increase your chances Adding nutshell. Removing first-person voice, which is left over from when this was a userspace essay. Fixing bad grammar and awkward phrasing. Improving recently added section on what to do when the citation may not actually support the claim. Better explaining lead sections, which no longer appear above the table of contents. Tweaking the beginning to "How to suggest the change", since it is noted above that it shouldn't always be taken straight to the article talk page. Tag: Reverted
• 04:3904:39, 27 July 2023 diff hist +4 Wikipedia:Describing points of view "treat" doesn't quite work here Tag: Reverted

19 July 2023

• 12:3512:35, 19 July 2023 diff hist −14 Cannock Chase murders No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 05:2005:20, 19 July 2023 diff hist +452 User talk:MjolnirPants →Shorthand at FIXBIAS essay: Reply Tags: Reverted Reply

18 July 2023

• 20:3120:31, 18 July 2023 diff hist +5 Cannock Chase murders Subject-verb agreement Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 20:1520:15, 18 July 2023 diff hist +513 Wikipedia:Increase your chances Adding nutshell. Removing first-person voice, which is left over from when this was a userspace essay. Fixing bad grammar and awkward phrasing. Improving recently added section on what to do when the citation may not actually support the claim. Better explaining lead sections, which no longer appear above the table of contents. Tag: Reverted
• 17:0417:04, 18 July 2023 diff hist +325 User talk:MjolnirPants →Shorthand at FIXBIAS essay: new section Tag: New topic
• 15:2415:24, 18 July 2023 diff hist +64 Das Fürlines →Aftermath: The cited source doesn't mention Fish and Roses, and doesn't mention Smith by name. I'm not sure what "fellow New York City" is supposed to refer to. It would probably be fine just to shorten this to "Das Fürleins and others" Tag: Reverted
• 01:1101:11, 18 July 2023 diff hist −86 Das Fürlines Most of this isn't supported by the cited source, and it seems unimportant here in any event. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 00:4600:46, 18 July 2023 diff hist +379 Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep Reintegrating and improving mostly good points that were edited out. Tag: Reverted