User contributions for 180.75.197.219

22 April 2012

• 10:5210:52, 22 April 2012 diff hist −55 Flowers in the Dirt →History: Removed an unsourced and dubious claim. Added more specific details about the countries toured.~~~~

21 April 2012

• 09:1109:11, 21 April 2012 diff hist +491 Gustavus von Tempsky →The Taranaki Wars

18 April 2012

• 12:0912:09, 18 April 2012 diff hist −3 Doolittle Raid →Mission: "commit" is pejorative: "to do something illegal or something that is considered wrong'' (Cambridge Dictionary). It was not wrong in Japanese society.
• 09:1309:13, 18 April 2012 diff hist −10 David M. Jones →Retirement; death: Removed a redundant word

14 April 2012

• 05:4305:43, 14 April 2012 diff hist +171 Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Newzild →Comments by other users
• 05:4105:41, 14 April 2012 diff hist +1,492 Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Newzild →13 April 2012
• 05:3505:35, 14 April 2012 diff hist +386 User talk:180.75.197.219 No edit summary

13 April 2012

• 12:1012:10, 13 April 2012 diff hist −7 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Impact
• 12:0812:08, 13 April 2012 diff hist −3 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Thailand
• 12:0612:06, 13 April 2012 diff hist −57 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Sri Lanka: Tidied up a poorly-written sentence.~~~~
• 12:0512:05, 13 April 2012 diff hist 0 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Sri Lanka: Stray cap removed
• 12:0412:04, 13 April 2012 diff hist −17 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Sri Lanka: Redundant, as "Sri Lanka" is already in the title to this section.~~~~
• 12:0312:03, 13 April 2012 diff hist −269 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Sri Lanka: Too many departments in the first sentence - shortened it from 3 to 1. Tidied up some grammar issues. Removed a redundant clause.
• 11:5911:59, 13 April 2012 diff hist −1 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Sri Lanka: Shifted poorly positioned clause (implied that everyone would be evacuated at 9:08)
• 11:5711:57, 13 April 2012 diff hist −11 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Earthquake: Fixed grammar
• 11:5511:55, 13 April 2012 diff hist −325 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Tectonic setting: Redundant, as this is implied by the previous sentence (it says all 5 were the same).
• 11:5411:54, 13 April 2012 diff hist −444 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Tectonic setting: I've chopped this back severely. If you want to restore it, please rewrite it in an encyclopedic fashion (so that a layman can understand it).
• 01:1301:13, 13 April 2012 diff hist −165 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes →Tectonic setting: This section is overly technical, with stilted language and jargon. I've tried to make it more readable, but this requires the attention of an expert.
• 01:0701:07, 13 April 2012 diff hist −13 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes A little bit of redundant language here - some of it is overly technical / stilted

12 April 2012

• 11:1711:17, 12 April 2012 diff hist −9 2012 Indian Ocean earthquakes No edit summary

11 April 2012

• 13:3313:33, 11 April 2012 diff hist +1 Able Archer 83 →American reaction
• 02:5802:58, 11 April 2012 diff hist +41 Talk:New Zealand English →Southland Burr
• 02:5302:53, 11 April 2012 diff hist +143 Talk:New Zealand English →Jersey Error? (In Dif. from Oz)
• 02:3902:39, 11 April 2012 diff hist +367 Talk:New Zealand English →Women and Wellington
• 02:3202:32, 11 April 2012 diff hist +114 Talk:New Zealand English →sounds historical
• 02:2902:29, 11 April 2012 diff hist +447 Talk:New Zealand English →"Herf"/"hurf"
• 02:2102:21, 11 April 2012 diff hist +139 New Zealand English →Dialects within New Zealand English

7 April 2012

• 06:4206:42, 7 April 2012 diff hist −1 Thomas Nickerson →Overview
• 06:1506:15, 7 April 2012 diff hist −62 Human cannibalism No edit summary

5 April 2012

• 02:5102:51, 5 April 2012 diff hist −364 History of New Zealand →Polynesian foundation: This plug for a book / author is not relevant