User contributions for 212.112.126.42

26 January 2023

• 06:2206:22, 26 January 2023 diff hist +237 Passive electronically scanned array This article doesn't really explain PESA radars and is a jumble of AESA and PESA stuff. I added a brief explanation of a PESA radar.
• 06:0606:06, 26 January 2023 diff hist +3 Low-probability-of-intercept radar →Rationale: corrected "which knows which direction" to "which knows in which direction"
• 06:0106:01, 26 January 2023 diff hist +2 Electronic counter-countermeasure →History: changed "be impossible to range" which sounds wrong to "become impossible to range"

23 January 2023

• 17:1817:18, 23 January 2023 diff hist −5 Ground-Based Midcourse Defense →Description: simplified and clarified a sentence
• 17:0517:05, 23 January 2023 diff hist −1 Anti-ballistic missile →Kingdom of Spain: corrected "antibalistica" to "antibalistic" Tag: Reverted

17 January 2023

• 09:2209:22, 17 January 2023 diff hist +10 Ground Launched Small Diameter Bomb →Synopsis: It's nonsensical to say that it hits behind itself, so I changed the sentence to say it can hit behind its launcher
• 09:1809:18, 17 January 2023 diff hist +7 Ground Launched Small Diameter Bomb →Synopsis: changed "motor" to "rocket motor". for consistency with the rest of the article
• 09:1709:17, 17 January 2023 diff hist +8 Ground Launched Small Diameter Bomb added the acronym GLSDB (this acronym is used in the second paragraph without having been previously defined)

7 January 2023

• 18:2518:25, 7 January 2023 diff hist +39 Eglin steel →Properties: I tidied up the discussion of yield strength current
• 09:0209:02, 7 January 2023 diff hist +37 Air-gap flash →Design parameters: I rewrote a sentence as the previous sentence was confusing speed and duration
• 08:2608:26, 7 January 2023 diff hist −7 Advanced Modular Armor Protection →Structure: corrected the tense from "are working" to "work"

5 January 2023

• 17:2017:20, 5 January 2023 diff hist +4 SAGEM Sperwer I modified a sentence to improve readability; ground control station is from one of the references.

29 December 2022

• 16:4716:47, 29 December 2022 diff hist −2 Samson Option corrected "the" to "a', there was no antecedent to support the use of the word "the" instead of "a"

1 December 2022

• 10:4610:46, 1 December 2022 diff hist −5 Phan Thi Kim Phuc I changed a portion of the caption for the photo from "center left" to "center" as the left was misleading: Phan Thi Kim is exactly in the center of the photo, only other people are on the left

30 November 2022

• 15:2015:20, 30 November 2022 diff hist +39 Amet-khan Sultan →Career as a test pilot: added an in-line reference to the Yakovlev_Yak-15 Wikipedia page and explained that it is a fighter jet; also, mentioned that the other aircraft is a bomber
• 15:1115:11, 30 November 2022 diff hist +8 Amet-khan Sultan →In World War II: changed "he" to "the worker" as, confusingly, the sentence previously used "he" and "him" to refer to 2 different people
• 14:2314:23, 30 November 2022 diff hist −6 Lydia Litvyak →Early life: simplified "Vladimir Litvyak" to "her father" (who was already mentioned in the previous sentence)
• 07:3507:35, 30 November 2022 diff hist −4 Xi'an H-6 →Developed versions: corrected "antishipping" to "antiship"
• 05:1005:10, 30 November 2022 diff hist −11 Transistor count →Logic functions: Corrected the table. A full adder has 24 (not 28) transistors, according to http://www.ece.uah.edu/~milenka/cpe527-07F/lectures/CMOS_Static.pdf
• 04:5404:54, 30 November 2022 diff hist −345 Transistor count →Transistor count: This wikipedia page is about transistor counts and this section is about microprocessors. Whilst the 4004 is clearly relevant, the list of the 4004's designers is not relevant here, particularly given that there is in any case a link to the 4004 Wikipedia article
• 04:5004:50, 30 November 2022 diff hist −671 Transistor count →Microprocessors: Removed the paragraph about the i960 and 80486. The point has already been made (for the Dec Alpha) that most of a modern microprocessor is cache. The minutia regarding the i960 and 80486 don't add anything new and just bog down a reader
• 04:4504:45, 30 November 2022 diff hist +14 Transistor count →Microprocessors: added an in-line link to CPU_cache
• 04:3504:35, 30 November 2022 diff hist +22 Transistor count →Microprocessors: tweaked the sentence about the Dec Alpha chip for clarity
• 04:3204:32, 30 November 2022 diff hist −236 Transistor count →Microprocessors: changed a sentence as it previously referred to "All chips" which is not strictly accurate

27 November 2022

• 10:4710:47, 27 November 2022 diff hist +4 Moon (2009 film) →Plot: tweaked a sentence for better clarity

22 November 2022

• 17:1217:12, 22 November 2022 diff hist +5 Gardelegen massacre →Details: For a photo caption, corrected "Prisoner" to "Prisoners", and added the missing article "the"

21 November 2022

• 06:3206:32, 21 November 2022 diff hist −6 Bonito →Food: corrected "lighter" (lighter than what?) to "light", and corrected "cheaper" (cheaper than what?) to "cheap"

18 November 2022

• 07:2507:25, 18 November 2022 diff hist +4 Nikolai Svanidze →Biography: a sentence was missing the grammatical article "The"
• 07:2407:24, 18 November 2022 diff hist +102 Nikolai Svanidze →Biography: edited the biography to make clearer the distinction between the grandfather and the grandson (previously, the biography did not preserve the distinction)

16 November 2022

• 12:4912:49, 16 November 2022 diff hist +5 ZALA Lancet →Description: minor tweaks to a sentence, inserted the words "a" and "of"

12 November 2022

• 06:3906:39, 12 November 2022 diff hist +3 Siege of Antwerp (1832) Inserted the preposition “on” (to correct a logical fallacy in the previous version of the corrected sentence). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit