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3 January 2024
- 04:5404:54, 3 January 2024 diff hist +1 Harry von Kessler →Later years: "might had" not proper English grammar
11 December 2023
- 17:5617:56, 11 December 2023 diff hist +6 Dan Friedman (graphic designer) →Death and legacy: Respect.
- 17:5517:55, 11 December 2023 diff hist 0 Dorothea Hofmann →Life and work: Wow, Graphic was inconsistently and inappropriately capitalized!
- 17:5417:54, 11 December 2023 diff hist 0 Dorothea Hofmann →Life and work: Design isn't a proper noun.
- 17:5317:53, 11 December 2023 diff hist −7 Dorothea Hofmann →Life and work: Since the initial clause describes Birssago as their summer home, calling the Yale workshops "summer workshops" is redundant.
- 17:5217:52, 11 December 2023 diff hist −18 Dorothea Hofmann →Life and work: They did indeed take place in the summer.
- 17:4917:49, 11 December 2023 diff hist 0 Dorothea Hofmann →Life and work: Oops. Their surname was misspelled.
- 17:4917:49, 11 December 2023 diff hist −3 Dorothea Hofmann →Life and work: a long sentence, again reflecting her passing.
- 17:4617:46, 11 December 2023 diff hist +2 Dorothea Hofmann was was was
- 17:4617:46, 11 December 2023 diff hist 0 Dorothea Hofmann correction!
- 17:4517:45, 11 December 2023 diff hist +12 Dorothea Hofmann Death date inserted
- 17:4417:44, 11 December 2023 diff hist −9 Dorothea Hofmann →Life and work: Dorothea Hofmann passed away in July 2023, so the present tense isn't appropriate.
6 October 2023
- 07:4007:40, 6 October 2023 diff hist +13 Adonis (poet) →"Adonis: Selected Poems" (book): cleaning it up....
- 07:3707:37, 6 October 2023 diff hist −11 Adonis (poet) →"Adonis: Selected Poems" (book): sense
- 07:3607:36, 6 October 2023 diff hist +4 Adonis (poet) →"Al-Kitab" (book)
- 07:3507:35, 6 October 2023 diff hist +20 Adonis (poet) →"Al-Kitab" (book): Self-explanatory changes.
- 07:3307:33, 6 October 2023 diff hist −3 Adonis (poet) →"This Is My Name" (book): Italic book title; "only" not appropriate.
- 07:3007:30, 6 October 2023 diff hist +4 Adonis (poet) →"A Time Between Ashes and Roses": This article really needs to have book- and magazine titles rendered typographically in italics, to distinguish them from poems, enclosed in quotes.
20 September 2023
- 02:5902:59, 20 September 2023 diff hist +4 Ann McKee →Accolades and awards: Since she's called Dr. McKee sometimes in this article, which is her biography as a doctor, she should be consistently always be called Dr. McKee.
- 02:5202:52, 20 September 2023 diff hist +4 Ann McKee →Personal life: Since she's called Dr. McKee sometimes in this article, which is her biography as a doctor, she should be consistently always be called Dr. McKee.
- 02:5102:51, 20 September 2023 diff hist +4 Ann McKee →Accolades and awards: Since she's called Dr. McKee sometimes in this article, which is her biography as a doctor, she should be consistently always be called Dr. McKee.
- 02:5102:51, 20 September 2023 diff hist +6 Ann McKee →Career: Since she's called Dr. McKee sometimes in this article, which is her biography as a doctor, she should be consistently always be called Dr. McKee.
- 02:4902:49, 20 September 2023 diff hist +2 Ann McKee →Education: Since she's called Dr. McKee sometimes in this article, which is her biography as a doctor, she should be consistently always be called Dr. McKee.
19 September 2023
- 17:5517:55, 19 September 2023 diff hist 0 Numinous punctuation
- 17:5517:55, 19 September 2023 diff hist +65 Numinous It's inappropriate to limit the definition to one of several. It's fine to riff on Rudolf Otto, however, the definition of the word, which should be as complete as possible, is broader.
- 17:5217:52, 19 September 2023 diff hist −71 Numinous Etymology now etymology as opposed to definition of the derivative word.
- 17:4417:44, 19 September 2023 diff hist +78 Numinous It is important to define the word. Its etymology should be just that and nothing more. Tag: Reverted
- 14:5214:52, 19 September 2023 diff hist 0 Talk:Numinous →Two definitions in two paragraphs!
- 14:5214:52, 19 September 2023 diff hist +304 Talk:Numinous →Two definitions in two paragraphs!: new section Tag: New topic
18 August 2023
- 02:4202:42, 18 August 2023 diff hist −1 Prostitution in the United States →Later decades: Always "madam" when referring to prostitution.
3 August 2023
- 16:5716:57, 3 August 2023 diff hist +1 Lufthansa heist →Investigation: Confusing to say Edwards and then Stacks when it's the same guy.
7 June 2023
- 19:4919:49, 7 June 2023 diff hist −23 Lillie Langtry →Cultural influence and portrayals: The statement that her life story has been portrayed in film numerous times is not true. She's a peripheral character in both cited films.
4 April 2023
- 18:0318:03, 4 April 2023 diff hist +10 Larry McDonald →Political career: Since "his friend" isn't named, this construction is needed. Future editors may wish to identify this individual.
- 01:1001:10, 4 April 2023 diff hist +2 History of Ghana (1966–1979) →US/CIA Complicity in the Coup: subhead
- 01:0801:08, 4 April 2023 diff hist +536 History of Ghana (1966–1979) This needs to be expanded; however it is more relevant and proven than anecdotal claims that people were dissatisfied with the Nkrumah government.
30 March 2023
- 12:4512:45, 30 March 2023 diff hist +8 Edgar Ray Killen →Incarceration and death: Now clarified.
24 February 2023
- 08:2608:26, 24 February 2023 diff hist +1 The Sorrow and the Pity →Part 2: "The Choice": spelling error corrected