User contributions for Gottfriede Brunito

8 September 2023

• 16:1116:11, 8 September 2023 diff hist 0 Jeff Lynne Fixed comma in place of incorrect period after “1970” and before “and”. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 January 2023

• 10:1710:17, 20 January 2023 diff hist 0 The 5th Dimension →Formation: Fixed wrong period to Oxford comma in list of names. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 January 2023

• 17:0217:02, 6 January 2023 diff hist +41 John Baughman Removed unconfirmed claim. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 March 2022

• 12:0512:05, 1 March 2022 diff hist −13 m John Baughman Corrected birthplace, he was not born in Orland Park.

1 February 2022

• 20:2720:27, 1 February 2022 diff hist +4 m Nora Sun →Death: Inserted "was" to render fragment a complete sentence.

5 December 2021

• 18:2818:28, 5 December 2021 diff hist +1 John Baughman Corrected birthdate: October, not September. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 November 2021

• 15:0115:01, 17 November 2021 diff hist 0 John Baughman →Velerie Baughman: Corrected spelling: Velerie, not Valerie. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:5614:56, 17 November 2021 diff hist −3 John Baughman →Sgt. Dean Pence: Corrected name: nobody called her Gertrude, ever. She was Trudy. The next section calls her Trudy anyway, and let’s be consistent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 August 2021

• 01:0701:07, 21 August 2021 diff hist −26 John Baughman →Early life: Removed illogical phrase. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 August 2021

• 22:4822:48, 20 August 2021 diff hist +55 John Baughman →Trudy Baughman: Added detail to scene. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:4322:43, 20 August 2021 diff hist +6 John Baughman →Early life: Named company he worked for. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 August 2020

• 17:5917:59, 9 August 2020 diff hist +2 Terence McKenna →"Stoned ape" theory of human evolution: “ ... also providing humanity’s first religious impulse.” Changed “humanities” incorrect plural to “humanity’s” correct singular possessive. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 April 2020

• 23:0623:06, 14 April 2020 diff hist +60 John Baughman Added Trudy's wish for divorce.
• 23:0323:03, 14 April 2020 diff hist +476 John Baughman Supplied information in "Early Life".
• 22:4822:48, 14 April 2020 diff hist +381 John Baughman Supplied info on Baughman's attorney later getting convicted of paying people to say things in court. Provided Chicago Tribune link to that info.
• 22:1822:18, 14 April 2020 diff hist +104 John Baughman Supplied birth day and year; supplied marriage date (Trudy); corrected when he retired from police force; specified how many of his children didn't believe him; corrected spelling for "story"; supplied method of suicide.

6 December 2019

• 22:5522:55, 6 December 2019 diff hist −1 m Ich heirate eine Familie "Schumann's" to "Schumanns" for plural, end of third paragraph.

18 March 2019

• 21:0521:05, 18 March 2019 diff hist −39 m Monica Lewinsky Last paragraph (re John Oliver interview): corrected “has” to “had” for past perfect tense, necessary. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 January 2018

• 14:1714:17, 11 January 2018 diff hist +4 Girondins →Decline and fall: Inserted missing word, “who”, to lead clause in last sentence of second paragraph of “Decline and Fall” section. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 December 2017

• 02:0202:02, 3 December 2017 diff hist +1 Liz Brunner →Career: “nightly” instead of “nighly” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0102:01, 3 December 2017 diff hist 0 Liz Brunner →Career: Fixed “three women” to “three-woman”. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0002:00, 3 December 2017 diff hist −1 Liz Brunner →Career: Fixed “organization’s” to reflect plural “organizations”. The singular possessive shown in “speaker’s” in the same paragraph is dubious, unless the bureau had only one speaker. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 July 2017

• 15:5715:57, 4 July 2017 diff hist +22 Shameless (British TV series) →Series 1 (2004): Inserted "Sheila, the mother of" to correct a factual error. Article had stated that Frank was sexual with Karen Jackson, but he wasn't; he began dating Sheila, Karen's mother. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 June 2016

• 13:2413:24, 10 June 2016 diff hist −2 Interpellation (philosophy) →Other applications: Removed incorrectly placed commas. When naming the specific German philosophers, the comma offset tries to say they were the only German philosophers, and that all German philosophers did thus and such. "German philosophers X an... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 May 2015

• 15:2115:21, 5 May 2015 diff hist −1 Albert Camus →Ideas on the absurd: removed incorrect comma after 'creation of meaning'

4 May 2015

• 03:4003:40, 4 May 2015 diff hist +15 Meritocracy →Modern meritocratic movements

9 February 2014

• 22:4022:40, 9 February 2014 diff hist +2 m Hegelianism →Philosophy of history: Corrected "lost" with "loss" and inserted comma before conjunction "yet", to indicate contrast. I left other comma opportunities alone in keeping with established style.

15 October 2013

• 18:2518:25, 15 October 2013 diff hist −2 m Limerence →Physical effects: usage: "accompanied by" substituted for "accompanied with"

28 April 2013

• 04:5904:59, 28 April 2013 diff hist +1 m The Way of All Flesh →Plot summary: comma necessary after " ... and pays Ellen a stipend" because the subject changes in next clause

14 February 2013

• 04:2904:29, 14 February 2013 diff hist +41 m Bernie S. Siegel →Appearances in films and television: reverted "Leap of Faith" and added "Question of Faith" (VHS version)
• 04:2504:25, 14 February 2013 diff hist +4 m Bernie S. Siegel →Appearances in films and television: changed "Leap of Faith" to "Question of Faith"

20 August 2012

• 04:0604:06, 20 August 2012 diff hist +205 User talk:Musdan77 →Thank you!: new section

14 August 2012

• 18:4518:45, 14 August 2012 diff hist +370 Talk:Jim Bob Duggar →Minor edit self-correction: new section
• 18:3118:31, 14 August 2012 diff hist −1 m Jim Bob Duggar Removed comma between "real estate agent" and "television personality" in first line of Biography.