User contributions for Jowa fan

24 November 2024

• 12:3412:34, 24 November 2024 diff hist +457 Talk:Connecticut Mastery Test →criticism section needs sources: Explain why I deleted that section; other editors should feel free to reinstate it with improvements current
• 12:3112:31, 24 November 2024 diff hist −4,060 Connecticut Mastery Test Delete "Criticism" section: see talk page current
• 09:0709:07, 24 November 2024 diff hist −349 Connecticut Mastery Test Copyedit, and unlink common English words

23 August 2024

• 23:0723:07, 23 August 2024 diff hist +10 Wiki Wiki Shuttle The bus also travels between gates within the same terminal
• 23:0623:06, 23 August 2024 diff hist +323 Wiki Wiki Shuttle The bus is still in service

18 April 2024

• 14:2514:25, 18 April 2024 diff hist +113 Sam Feder Use gender-neutral pronouns as per Feder's stated preference (see [MOS:GIDINFO])

30 March 2024

• 23:5223:52, 30 March 2024 diff hist +514 Talk:Rin Kaiho →Untitled: Still looking for a source for Taiwanese citizenship current
• 23:4623:46, 30 March 2024 diff hist +346 Rin Kaiho Thanks Blahhmosh for the info in your edit summary, but it still needs a citation. I have a source for living in Taiwan but not for citizenship.

25 March 2024

• 22:0822:08, 25 March 2024 diff hist −65 Formation and evolution of the Solar System →Presolar nebula: Rephrase: kinetic energy of particles *is* heat, it can't "turn into" heat! Maybe someone else can think of a more elegant wording to suit the poetic tone of the rest of the paragraph?

11 November 2023

• 22:1622:16, 11 November 2023 diff hist +356 Werckmeister temperament Need to clarify terminology (people will come here looking for "Werckmeister III" and get confused); please edit if you have a better source

14 October 2023

• 12:4412:44, 14 October 2023 diff hist +165 The Art of Fugue →External links: add wayback machine link for Malina article (broken link)

14 August 2023

• 10:3010:30, 14 August 2023 diff hist +4 m Madeleine Dring →Music: add link for Roger Quilter

26 December 2022

• 22:5122:51, 26 December 2022 diff hist 0 Prelude and Fugue in E minor, BWV 548 →Fugue: Just link the whole phrase, for consistency with the other links. Otherwise it's easy to click the wrong word and end up somewhere unexpected

20 September 2022

• 22:5722:57, 20 September 2022 diff hist +959 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/The Queue →The Queue: keep, since alternative proposals all have problems

29 August 2022

• 05:0405:04, 29 August 2022 diff hist +35 Genealogy (philosophy) →See also: add The Archaeology of Knowledge since Foucault is mentioned here and his genealogy and archaeology are intertwined

4 July 2022

• 09:4709:47, 4 July 2022 diff hist −8 Terence McKenna →Studying and traveling: Unlink: I'm not sure what "neural DNA" is supposed to be, but linking each word separately doesn't help, and misleads people into clicking on a single word where they expected the phrase

11 June 2022

• 23:5923:59, 11 June 2022 diff hist +611 Talk:Isao Tomita →Mononyms are nothing special?: clunky "known mononymously" now deleted but "also known as" retained; would welcome comments from others
• 23:5523:55, 11 June 2022 diff hist −35 Isao Tomita Delete "mononymously", retain (under protest) "also known as": see talk page
• 23:5223:52, 11 June 2022 diff hist −1 m Human anti-mouse antibody →The HAMA response: remove stray apostrophe

5 June 2022

• 02:4702:47, 5 June 2022 diff hist +4 m Luc Ferrari →Biography: missing word?

4 June 2022

• 00:1500:15, 4 June 2022 diff hist −1 m Barry Truax spelling correction

21 May 2022

• 02:4902:49, 21 May 2022 diff hist +1,284 Talk:Isao Tomita →Mononyms are nothing special?: Reply Tag: Reply

20 May 2022

• 10:0510:05, 20 May 2022 diff hist −64 Isao Tomita Undid revision 1087164488 by Koncorde (talk) I believe it's normal for composers to be referred to by family name regardless of notability. Happy to revert if you can provide a source for why this is a special fact about Tomita. See talk page. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 10:0210:02, 20 May 2022 diff hist +468 Talk:Isao Tomita →Mononyms are nothing special?: new section
• 09:5609:56, 20 May 2022 diff hist +468 Talk:Pirate Party →Need to clarify "reform of copyright law": new section

8 May 2022

• 06:2206:22, 8 May 2022 diff hist −64 Isao Tomita Delete "known mononymously as": it's normal for composers to be referred to by family name, not deserving of special mention Tag: Reverted

23 April 2022

• 00:0900:09, 23 April 2022 diff hist −14 The Evolution of Atheism →Synopsis: Rephrase: these statements about atheism are not established fact, so I'm guessing they come from the book. Can someone with access to the book check this?

4 April 2022

• 13:0713:07, 4 April 2022 diff hist −25 Mantovani →Posthumous publishing: Remove "original research" tag. "1981 is later than 1980" doesn't require a citation. Personally I don't mind the humorous phrasing of "...required posthumous conducting", but if you want a more encyclopedic tone then feel free to edit.

3 April 2022

• 01:2001:20, 3 April 2022 diff hist −44 Mantovani Delete "known mononymously as": it's normal for conductors and composers to be referred to by family name, not deserving of special mention

28 March 2022

• 11:1211:12, 28 March 2022 diff hist +13 Sam Feder Remove pronouns. Most sources refer to Sam Feder exclusively as "Sam", occasionally "Feder" or "they", but rarely "he". I've chosen "Feder" as being more formal and encyclopedic, but there's a case to made for using "Sam" throughout
• 10:5310:53, 28 March 2022 diff hist −35 Grigory Margulis Remove "sources needed" template. It's been there since 2013. It looks to me like there's enough sources now.

17 March 2022

• 23:3023:30, 17 March 2022 diff hist +774 Talk:Criticality accident →Contradicting number of deaths: I've tried to improve it, but this could use attention from an expert
• 23:2423:24, 17 March 2022 diff hist +146 Criticality accident Resolve inconsistent counts; note that "A review of criticality incidents" (McLaughlin et al, ref 1) is old and incomplete; it would be good if someone could clarify the criteria for inclusion in the table

14 March 2022

• 00:0100:01, 14 March 2022 diff hist −29 VVVVVV →Development: Tone down the C64 references. It wasn't the only platform in town; JSW was a Spectrum game first

13 March 2022

• 23:5723:57, 13 March 2022 diff hist +8 m Acedia →Modern revival: link authors' names
• 23:5523:55, 13 March 2022 diff hist −38 Bradford Factor →Calculation: rephrased formula: the symbol B adds nothing and smacks of circular reasoning (you don't put the Bradford factor *into* the formula for calculating Bradford factor!). Also "working year" varies from country to country

11 March 2022

• 22:3922:39, 11 March 2022 diff hist −175 Dante Alighieri →Works: Delete quotation -- I think the unnamed translator is not being literal here, and a single line isn't very informative in this context -- citation still needed for the paragraph as a whole

6 March 2022

• 00:1200:12, 6 March 2022 diff hist +23 Maximum subarray problem →Computing the best subarray's position: Rephrase: words such as "end at" for Python slices are ambiguous

2 March 2022

• 02:5602:56, 2 March 2022 diff hist −110 The Wurzels →Name: Delete unsourced statement (wurzel as UK slang for yokel): citation needed tag is now more than a year old, and noone has come up with a citation.

28 February 2022

• 22:1922:19, 28 February 2022 diff hist −31 Turn (angle) Removed unsourced statement (symbol for "turn" is "tr" or "pla"): the top google hit for "turn symbol pla" is this page itself, and nothing else looks remotely relevant
• 22:0622:06, 28 February 2022 diff hist −8 m On the Cult of Personality and Its Consequences →Background: grammar

26 February 2022

• 23:4223:42, 26 February 2022 diff hist −91 Pharo Remove advertisement template: this page has changed a fair bit since 2019
• 23:3823:38, 26 February 2022 diff hist +29 Joseph Wedderburn →Work: Rephrase: "the complete structure of all finite projective geometry" is still unknown for planes as far as I'm aware

9 February 2022

• 10:2110:21, 9 February 2022 diff hist −2,115 Nocturnes (Chopin) Delete what looks like original research: it's not terribly useful, and contains some errors (e.g. op 9/2 definitely has a contrasting section). I'm being WP:BOLD here: feel free to revert and fix if you disagree.
• 10:1710:17, 9 February 2022 diff hist −7 Pinto rename "entertainers" to "other" -- can anyone think of a better generic term? I had trouble finding George because classical music composers are not normally called "entertainers". Not sure if that term covers models and film directors either.
• 00:5700:57, 9 February 2022 diff hist +500 Talk:Wordle →Is the NYT navbox appropriate?: new section

9 October 2021

• 03:2003:20, 9 October 2021 diff hist +246 Talk:Bertrand Meyer →Erase "Eiffel has been the reason of other languages including Java, C# and Python": Deleted that claim
• 03:1703:17, 9 October 2021 diff hist −357 Bertrand Meyer Delete assertion that without Eiffel, languages such as Java, C#, Python wouldn't exist -- a statement this strong shouldn't remain in the article without a source
• 03:1103:11, 9 October 2021 diff hist −139 Eiffel (programming language) Delete circular reference: the "general books" publications are compilations of Wikipedia articles, so shouldn't be used as sources for Wikipedia articles!

18 September 2021

• 01:0701:07, 18 September 2021 diff hist +3 Big Bang →Etymology: thru -> through